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thinkin of writing a adult book called altevo pablo.it's about a horse.
july 1st.2001
Someone came to see me in the field today she was a strange girl she kept trying to catch me...i was always just out of her reach she called me a loony and that she would "never buy a horse with such a bad habit" i haven't got bad habits...well i think i haven't...hmmmmm...anyway as she was leaving i bit her bum she really pised me off.
july 2nd.2001
Sally came today and put a sign over the gate it looked like elas rof esroh.i asked matty wat it said and he said it said horse for sale.poor old matty i'm gonna miss him sooooooo much.
july 3rd.2001
Sally came and saddled me up this afternoon she started crying on the outride and said "i don't want this to be the last outride i have on you".why is it the last outride she'll have on me are we going to a show or something.
july 4th.2001
Another girl came today she was a lot nicer then the other one though she brought da da da daaaaaaaaaaa POLOS she was a lovely girl.she road me round the ring so gently it was wonderful.and when she took my tack off she took the bridle off first!!! AND she said she would buy me if i didn't weave in the stable.
july 5th.2001
that girl came back today with a horse box.she loaded me up and took me to this yard there's horses everywere she has just turned me out into the paddock and guess what theres loads of horses in the next door paddock i run up to meet them i stand at the gate asking myself "why aren't they coming over"suddenly one of the horses see me and walks over from what i can see he's an old grey shetland pony he hasn't got a bit of paso fino in him i am thinking of turning away but one of the other horses shouts "yo mate hows the grass out there"i reply "very nice thank you hows your's" he replys "the grass in this field is shiit mate you've got the best grass and paddock because your new.were have you come from you loser" before i can reply the little shetland says "just ignore him he thinks he's better then everyone else because he's a retired racehorse.what breed are you" i reply "my mum was a paso fino and my dad was a arab" the shetland and i had a good natter to each other i found out his name is mingo he didn't even laugh when i told him my name was altevo pablo nice guy.
what do you think.:)
july 1st.2001
Someone came to see me in the field today she was a strange girl she kept trying to catch me...i was always just out of her reach she called me a loony and that she would "never buy a horse with such a bad habit" i haven't got bad habits...well i think i haven't...hmmmmm...anyway as she was leaving i bit her bum she really pised me off.
july 2nd.2001
Sally came today and put a sign over the gate it looked like elas rof esroh.i asked matty wat it said and he said it said horse for sale.poor old matty i'm gonna miss him sooooooo much.
july 3rd.2001
Sally came and saddled me up this afternoon she started crying on the outride and said "i don't want this to be the last outride i have on you".why is it the last outride she'll have on me are we going to a show or something.
july 4th.2001
Another girl came today she was a lot nicer then the other one though she brought da da da daaaaaaaaaaa POLOS she was a lovely girl.she road me round the ring so gently it was wonderful.and when she took my tack off she took the bridle off first!!! AND she said she would buy me if i didn't weave in the stable.
july 5th.2001
that girl came back today with a horse box.she loaded me up and took me to this yard there's horses everywere she has just turned me out into the paddock and guess what theres loads of horses in the next door paddock i run up to meet them i stand at the gate asking myself "why aren't they coming over"suddenly one of the horses see me and walks over from what i can see he's an old grey shetland pony he hasn't got a bit of paso fino in him i am thinking of turning away but one of the other horses shouts "yo mate hows the grass out there"i reply "very nice thank you hows your's" he replys "the grass in this field is shiit mate you've got the best grass and paddock because your new.were have you come from you loser" before i can reply the little shetland says "just ignore him he thinks he's better then everyone else because he's a retired racehorse.what breed are you" i reply "my mum was a paso fino and my dad was a arab" the shetland and i had a good natter to each other i found out his name is mingo he didn't even laugh when i told him my name was altevo pablo nice guy.
what do you think.:)
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JFH wrote:
> tiptopofhell wrote:
> F.OFF AND LEAVE ME ALONE
>
> [URL]http://www.fuggled.co.uk/Nostalgia/Happy%20Days.wav[/URL]
ROFLMFAO
> tiptopofhell wrote:
> F.OFF AND LEAVE ME ALONE
>
> [URL]http://www.fuggled.co.uk/Nostalgia/Happy%20Days.wav[/URL]
ROFLMFAO
i'm p###ed off with people bullying me day in day out i can't go out the door practicaly
i'm p###ed off with people takeing the p##s
i'm p###ed off with...with...PEOPLE
i'm p###ed off with people takeing the p##s
i'm p###ed off with...with...PEOPLE
tiptopofhell wrote:
> JFH wrote:
> tiptopofhell wrote:
> god i think you lot need to go back to school
>
> tiptopofhell wrote:
> you lot are selfish irritating pigs that think everything begins and
> ends with school and writeing
>
> Hmmm. And writeing?
>
> F.OFF AND LEAVE ME ALONE
Err... You can turn off your computer.
Hint - Its the off button.
> JFH wrote:
> tiptopofhell wrote:
> god i think you lot need to go back to school
>
> tiptopofhell wrote:
> you lot are selfish irritating pigs that think everything begins and
> ends with school and writeing
>
> Hmmm. And writeing?
>
> F.OFF AND LEAVE ME ALONE
Err... You can turn off your computer.
Hint - Its the off button.
tiptopofhell wrote:
> F.OFF AND LEAVE ME ALONE
[URL]http://www.fuggled.co.uk/Nostalgia/Happy%20Days.wav[/URL]
> F.OFF AND LEAVE ME ALONE
[URL]http://www.fuggled.co.uk/Nostalgia/Happy%20Days.wav[/URL]
tiptopofhell wrote:
> JFH wrote:
> tiptopofhell wrote:
> god i think you lot need to go back to school
>
> tiptopofhell wrote:
> you lot are selfish irritating pigs that think everything begins and
> ends with school and writeing
>
> Hmmm. And writeing?
>
> F.OFF AND LEAVE ME ALONE
you insulted him now you cant take it, dont give what you cant take
> JFH wrote:
> tiptopofhell wrote:
> god i think you lot need to go back to school
>
> tiptopofhell wrote:
> you lot are selfish irritating pigs that think everything begins and
> ends with school and writeing
>
> Hmmm. And writeing?
>
> F.OFF AND LEAVE ME ALONE
you insulted him now you cant take it, dont give what you cant take
JFH wrote:
> tiptopofhell wrote:
> god i think you lot need to go back to school
>
> tiptopofhell wrote:
> you lot are selfish irritating pigs that think everything begins and
> ends with school and writeing
>
> Hmmm. And writeing?
F.OFF AND LEAVE ME ALONE
> tiptopofhell wrote:
> god i think you lot need to go back to school
>
> tiptopofhell wrote:
> you lot are selfish irritating pigs that think everything begins and
> ends with school and writeing
>
> Hmmm. And writeing?
F.OFF AND LEAVE ME ALONE
tiptopofhell wrote:
> you lot are selfish irritating pigs that think everything begins and
> ends with school and writeing
no but £10.000 is £10 is ten pounds
BUT £10,000 is £10000 is ten thousand pounds
> you lot are selfish irritating pigs that think everything begins and
> ends with school and writeing
no but £10.000 is £10 is ten pounds
BUT £10,000 is £10000 is ten thousand pounds
mate I take that offensively I'm working class I can't afford to go to school. I have to spend all day in The Mines working to get £10.00 a week to feed my family.
tiptopofhell wrote:
> god i think you lot need to go back to school
tiptopofhell wrote:
> you lot are selfish irritating pigs that think everything begins and
> ends with school and writeing
Hmmm. And writeing?
> god i think you lot need to go back to school
tiptopofhell wrote:
> you lot are selfish irritating pigs that think everything begins and
> ends with school and writeing
Hmmm. And writeing?
you lot are selfish irritating pigs that think everything begins and ends with school and writeing
does it really matter that much how can £10.000 look anything like £10.00
i'm really irritated with people that think just because i didn't go to school i'm an idiot and you can bully me
does it really matter that much how can £10.000 look anything like £10.00
i'm really irritated with people that think just because i didn't go to school i'm an idiot and you can bully me
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