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thinkin of writing a adult book called altevo pablo.it's about a horse.
july 1st.2001
Someone came to see me in the field today she was a strange girl she kept trying to catch me...i was always just out of her reach she called me a loony and that she would "never buy a horse with such a bad habit" i haven't got bad habits...well i think i haven't...hmmmmm...anyway as she was leaving i bit her bum she really pised me off.
july 2nd.2001
Sally came today and put a sign over the gate it looked like elas rof esroh.i asked matty wat it said and he said it said horse for sale.poor old matty i'm gonna miss him sooooooo much.
july 3rd.2001
Sally came and saddled me up this afternoon she started crying on the outride and said "i don't want this to be the last outride i have on you".why is it the last outride she'll have on me are we going to a show or something.
july 4th.2001
Another girl came today she was a lot nicer then the other one though she brought da da da daaaaaaaaaaa POLOS she was a lovely girl.she road me round the ring so gently it was wonderful.and when she took my tack off she took the bridle off first!!! AND she said she would buy me if i didn't weave in the stable.
july 5th.2001
that girl came back today with a horse box.she loaded me up and took me to this yard there's horses everywere she has just turned me out into the paddock and guess what theres loads of horses in the next door paddock i run up to meet them i stand at the gate asking myself "why aren't they coming over"suddenly one of the horses see me and walks over from what i can see he's an old grey shetland pony he hasn't got a bit of paso fino in him i am thinking of turning away but one of the other horses shouts "yo mate hows the grass out there"i reply "very nice thank you hows your's" he replys "the grass in this field is shiit mate you've got the best grass and paddock because your new.were have you come from you loser" before i can reply the little shetland says "just ignore him he thinks he's better then everyone else because he's a retired racehorse.what breed are you" i reply "my mum was a paso fino and my dad was a arab" the shetland and i had a good natter to each other i found out his name is mingo he didn't even laugh when i told him my name was altevo pablo nice guy.
what do you think.:)
july 1st.2001
Someone came to see me in the field today she was a strange girl she kept trying to catch me...i was always just out of her reach she called me a loony and that she would "never buy a horse with such a bad habit" i haven't got bad habits...well i think i haven't...hmmmmm...anyway as she was leaving i bit her bum she really pised me off.
july 2nd.2001
Sally came today and put a sign over the gate it looked like elas rof esroh.i asked matty wat it said and he said it said horse for sale.poor old matty i'm gonna miss him sooooooo much.
july 3rd.2001
Sally came and saddled me up this afternoon she started crying on the outride and said "i don't want this to be the last outride i have on you".why is it the last outride she'll have on me are we going to a show or something.
july 4th.2001
Another girl came today she was a lot nicer then the other one though she brought da da da daaaaaaaaaaa POLOS she was a lovely girl.she road me round the ring so gently it was wonderful.and when she took my tack off she took the bridle off first!!! AND she said she would buy me if i didn't weave in the stable.
july 5th.2001
that girl came back today with a horse box.she loaded me up and took me to this yard there's horses everywere she has just turned me out into the paddock and guess what theres loads of horses in the next door paddock i run up to meet them i stand at the gate asking myself "why aren't they coming over"suddenly one of the horses see me and walks over from what i can see he's an old grey shetland pony he hasn't got a bit of paso fino in him i am thinking of turning away but one of the other horses shouts "yo mate hows the grass out there"i reply "very nice thank you hows your's" he replys "the grass in this field is shiit mate you've got the best grass and paddock because your new.were have you come from you loser" before i can reply the little shetland says "just ignore him he thinks he's better then everyone else because he's a retired racehorse.what breed are you" i reply "my mum was a paso fino and my dad was a arab" the shetland and i had a good natter to each other i found out his name is mingo he didn't even laugh when i told him my name was altevo pablo nice guy.
what do you think.:)
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arctic hobo wrote:
> cweek2000 wrote:
> arctic hobo wrote:
> tiptopofhell wrote:
> i'm p###ed off with people bullying me day in day out i can't go out
> the door practicaly
>
> i'm p###ed off with people takeing the p##s
>
> i'm p###ed off with...with...PEOPLE
>
> Don't deny your vieux riche heritage... go out there, shotgun in
> hand
> and shoot the lot of them. You were born for this.
>
> I feel like that every day. And as much as I'd like to decapitate
> them all, I'd probably get locked up with some psycho who'll be even
> worse than them.
>
> H'm. Feel my irony
Feels ironic.
;) Yeah!
> cweek2000 wrote:
> arctic hobo wrote:
> tiptopofhell wrote:
> i'm p###ed off with people bullying me day in day out i can't go out
> the door practicaly
>
> i'm p###ed off with people takeing the p##s
>
> i'm p###ed off with...with...PEOPLE
>
> Don't deny your vieux riche heritage... go out there, shotgun in
> hand
> and shoot the lot of them. You were born for this.
>
> I feel like that every day. And as much as I'd like to decapitate
> them all, I'd probably get locked up with some psycho who'll be even
> worse than them.
>
> H'm. Feel my irony
Feels ironic.
;) Yeah!
cweek2000 wrote:
> arctic hobo wrote:
> tiptopofhell wrote:
> i'm p###ed off with people bullying me day in day out i can't go out
> the door practicaly
>
> i'm p###ed off with people takeing the p##s
>
> i'm p###ed off with...with...PEOPLE
>
> Don't deny your vieux riche heritage... go out there, shotgun in
> hand
> and shoot the lot of them. You were born for this.
>
> I feel like that every day. And as much as I'd like to decapitate
> them all, I'd probably get locked up with some psycho who'll be even
> worse than them.
H'm. Feel my irony
> arctic hobo wrote:
> tiptopofhell wrote:
> i'm p###ed off with people bullying me day in day out i can't go out
> the door practicaly
>
> i'm p###ed off with people takeing the p##s
>
> i'm p###ed off with...with...PEOPLE
>
> Don't deny your vieux riche heritage... go out there, shotgun in
> hand
> and shoot the lot of them. You were born for this.
>
> I feel like that every day. And as much as I'd like to decapitate
> them all, I'd probably get locked up with some psycho who'll be even
> worse than them.
H'm. Feel my irony
arctic hobo wrote:
> tiptopofhell wrote:
> i'm p###ed off with people bullying me day in day out i can't go out
> the door practicaly
>
> i'm p###ed off with people takeing the p##s
>
> i'm p###ed off with...with...PEOPLE
>
> Don't deny your vieux riche heritage... go out there, shotgun in hand
> and shoot the lot of them. You were born for this.
I feel like that every day. And as much as I'd like to decapitate them all, I'd probably get locked up with some psycho who'll be even worse than them.
> tiptopofhell wrote:
> i'm p###ed off with people bullying me day in day out i can't go out
> the door practicaly
>
> i'm p###ed off with people takeing the p##s
>
> i'm p###ed off with...with...PEOPLE
>
> Don't deny your vieux riche heritage... go out there, shotgun in hand
> and shoot the lot of them. You were born for this.
I feel like that every day. And as much as I'd like to decapitate them all, I'd probably get locked up with some psycho who'll be even worse than them.
tiptopofhell wrote:
> i'm p###ed off with people bullying me day in day out i can't go out
> the door practicaly
>
> i'm p###ed off with people takeing the p##s
>
> i'm p###ed off with...with...PEOPLE
Don't deny your vieux riche heritage... go out there, shotgun in hand and shoot the lot of them. You were born for this.
> i'm p###ed off with people bullying me day in day out i can't go out
> the door practicaly
>
> i'm p###ed off with people takeing the p##s
>
> i'm p###ed off with...with...PEOPLE
Don't deny your vieux riche heritage... go out there, shotgun in hand and shoot the lot of them. You were born for this.
This is how I feel when I go to a swimming pool abroad and there are loads of tourists from other countries:
[URL]http://www.collegeboredom.com/pics/Other/Only%20in%20China.jpg[/URL]
[URL]http://www.collegeboredom.com/pics/Other/Only%20in%20China.jpg[/URL]
tiptopofhell wrote:
> Displayed wrote:
> tiptopofhell wrote:
> for god's sake grow up please
>
> why, your childhood are the best years of your life, cherish them
> and
> live in their glory.
>
> .....ha ha ha ha ha ha hahahahahahhahahahahahahah
You're laughing as if he was joking.
STOP.
> Displayed wrote:
> tiptopofhell wrote:
> for god's sake grow up please
>
> why, your childhood are the best years of your life, cherish them
> and
> live in their glory.
>
> .....ha ha ha ha ha ha hahahahahahhahahahahahahah
You're laughing as if he was joking.
STOP.
yes
WHAT!!!!!!!! is he some kind of porno guy
Displayed wrote:
> tiptopofhell wrote:
> for god's sake grow up please
>
> why, your childhood are the best years of your life, cherish them and
> live in their glory.
.....ha ha ha ha ha ha hahahahahahhahahahahahahah
> tiptopofhell wrote:
> for god's sake grow up please
>
> why, your childhood are the best years of your life, cherish them and
> live in their glory.
.....ha ha ha ha ha ha hahahahahahhahahahahahahah
tiptopofhell wrote:
> for god's sake grow up please
why, your childhood are the best years of your life, cherish them and live in their glory.
> for god's sake grow up please
why, your childhood are the best years of your life, cherish them and live in their glory.
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