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So like you all say I must change my stories well here one for I will change and make you all happy well heres a change right now!
The warriors stand in the woods with their heads up high, with there bow and arrows,ready to kill the beast in the woods. As throwdough walks into the woods everyone follows him. Then they see it the beast with his teeth sharp red eyes and as big as a tower. Throwdough gets ready he jumps off a tree and fires a arrow, and it hits the beast and stabs though him. But the beast is still strong he pulls out the arrow. Everyone shoots and the world revolves around them, as arrows fly at the monster but he is strong the monsters runs towards them they must run and get away! As they ran though the woods the beast followed. His calws sharp and ready to grabbed everyone. Throwdough was miles ahead of everybody. Sharpeye was coming to but the beast was getting closer and closer but they were getting away now!
As everyone turned round the corner they stopped the beast had gone but they didn't know where. They look behind them but the beast had gone. They started running again but then they heard a scream. A woman came running towards them and the beast was following with his eyes staring and blood dripping from his mouth. It jumped and the woman and ripped her up. Everyone started running again. They jumped up on to a roof and climbed a ladder to the top. The beast couldn't get up now Firestarted pulled out his lighter and lit the end of his arrow. He then fired it at the beast the beast set on fire. It went running around trying to stop the fire. Everyone lit their arrows and fired them at the beast, the beast dropped to the floor and turned to crisp!
The beast was now dead everyone got off the roof and jumped to the floor.
So what do you think I will add more after you say what you think!
The warriors stand in the woods with their heads up high, with there bow and arrows,ready to kill the beast in the woods. As throwdough walks into the woods everyone follows him. Then they see it the beast with his teeth sharp red eyes and as big as a tower. Throwdough gets ready he jumps off a tree and fires a arrow, and it hits the beast and stabs though him. But the beast is still strong he pulls out the arrow. Everyone shoots and the world revolves around them, as arrows fly at the monster but he is strong the monsters runs towards them they must run and get away! As they ran though the woods the beast followed. His calws sharp and ready to grabbed everyone. Throwdough was miles ahead of everybody. Sharpeye was coming to but the beast was getting closer and closer but they were getting away now!
As everyone turned round the corner they stopped the beast had gone but they didn't know where. They look behind them but the beast had gone. They started running again but then they heard a scream. A woman came running towards them and the beast was following with his eyes staring and blood dripping from his mouth. It jumped and the woman and ripped her up. Everyone started running again. They jumped up on to a roof and climbed a ladder to the top. The beast couldn't get up now Firestarted pulled out his lighter and lit the end of his arrow. He then fired it at the beast the beast set on fire. It went running around trying to stop the fire. Everyone lit their arrows and fired them at the beast, the beast dropped to the floor and turned to crisp!
The beast was now dead everyone got off the roof and jumped to the floor.
So what do you think I will add more after you say what you think!
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Just added some more!
Ok then!
C®ø§$ Bób wrote:
> gerrid wrote:
> C®ø§$ Bób wrote:
> Everyone shoots and the world revolves around them,
>
> This is my favourite bit. Please do a Romance novel, Crossbob, I
> would loev to read it.
>
> Ok I shall do that tonight!
Yes please do. Make it have lots of loev in it. And when they have sex make the world revolve around them :-D
> gerrid wrote:
> C®ø§$ Bób wrote:
> Everyone shoots and the world revolves around them,
>
> This is my favourite bit. Please do a Romance novel, Crossbob, I
> would loev to read it.
>
> Ok I shall do that tonight!
Yes please do. Make it have lots of loev in it. And when they have sex make the world revolve around them :-D
gerrid wrote:
> C®ø§$ Bób wrote:
> Everyone shoots and the world revolves around them,
>
> This is my favourite bit. Please do a Romance novel, Crossbob, I
> would loev to read it.
Ok I shall do that tonight!
> C®ø§$ Bób wrote:
> Everyone shoots and the world revolves around them,
>
> This is my favourite bit. Please do a Romance novel, Crossbob, I
> would loev to read it.
Ok I shall do that tonight!
gerrid wrote:
> C®ø§$ Bób wrote:
> Everyone shoots and the world revolves around them,
>
> This is my favourite bit.
Mine too! Wow!
I think he was going for a Matrix-style, freeze-frame camera-rotation thingy.
Which is just amazing.
> slow-mo
> C®ø§$ Bób wrote:
> Everyone shoots and the world revolves around them,
>
> This is my favourite bit.
Mine too! Wow!
I think he was going for a Matrix-style, freeze-frame camera-rotation thingy.
Which is just amazing.
> slow-mo
Could it possibly involve pirates too, please?
C®ø§$ Bób wrote:
> Everyone shoots and the world revolves around them,
This is my favourite bit. Please do a Romance novel, Crossbob, I would loev to read it.
> Everyone shoots and the world revolves around them,
This is my favourite bit. Please do a Romance novel, Crossbob, I would loev to read it.
Ah, I see. It sounds like Frodo.
And then ... yes indeed ... the whole story is LOTR for retards.
Well, "story"
I'd quite like your definition of 'change' crossbob.
And then ... yes indeed ... the whole story is LOTR for retards.
Well, "story"
I'd quite like your definition of 'change' crossbob.
"Throwdough"
Ahahahahahahaha.
Ahahahahahahaha.
Thank you!
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