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I thought I would give this whole creative writing a go, so here i am with 'AFCs WWE' (sucks I know)
The first few shows my be pretty crap, but bear with me and my skills will get better.
I will put each show in the order of the belts that they are eligable to compete for (of course, they can/will be altered during the course of the company). Each week there will be two shows RAW and Smackdown, these will be posted every Monday and Thursday, if i have the time.
So lets begin with the rosters.
AFCs WWE Owner- Me
RAW GM- Shane McMahon
Triple H (RWH) [Current Champ]
Chris Benoit (RWH)
Randy Orton (RWH)
Dave Batista (RWH)
Chris Jericho (RWH)
Shawn Michaels (RTV) [Current Champ]
Kurt Angle (RTV)
Dimond Dallas Page (RTV)
Kane (RTV)
Shelton Benjamin (RI) [Current Champ]
Christian (RI)
William Regal (RI)
Bubba Ray Dudley (RI)
D-Von Dudley (RI)
Eugene Dinsmore (RI)
Tyson Tomko (RI)
Ric Flair (RI)
Trish Stratus (RW) [Current Champ]
Victoria (RW)
Lita (RW)
Christy Hemme (RW)
Stacy Keibler (RW)
Tag-teams:
Christain & Tomko [Champs]
Bubba-ray & D-Von
Benoit & Jericho
Flair & Batista
Smackdown GM- Stephanie McMahon
Eddie Guerreuro (SWT) [Current Champ]
Undertaker (SWT/SHC)
Booker T (SWT)
AJ Styles (SWT)
John Cena (SUS/SHC) [Current Champ]
Ron Killings (SUS)
Big Show (SUS/SHC)
BG James (SUS)
Konnan (SUS)
Rob Van Dam (SHC) [Current Champ]
Rosey (SHC)
Paul London (SCW) [Current Champ]
Rey Mysterio (SCW)
Jeff Hardy (SCW)
Billy Kidman (SCW)
Akio (SCW)
Hurricane (SCW)
Scotty (SCW)
Torrie Wilson
Miss Jackie
Amy Webber
Joy Giovanni
Tag-teams:
BG James & Konnan [Champs]
Eddie & Rey
AJ Styles & Jeff Hardy
Hurricane & Rosey
BG/Konnan/Ron & Ron/Konnan/BG
KEY
RWT - RAWs World Heavywieght Title SWT - Smackdowns WWE Title
RTV - RAWs Televison Title SUS - Smackdowns United States Title
RI - RAWs Intercontiental Title SHC - Smackdowns Hardcore Title
RW - RAWs Womens Title SCW - Smackdowns Crusierweight Title
RTT - RAWs Tag Titles STT -Smackdowns Tag Titles
So thats the rosters.
The first show, RAW, will be hopefully posted this Monday, so untill then: have fun.
Please leave anything that you think would help this 'company' and if I like it I will try to write it in to the stories.
Let the critisim begin.
I thought I would give this whole creative writing a go, so here i am with 'AFCs WWE' (sucks I know)
The first few shows my be pretty crap, but bear with me and my skills will get better.
I will put each show in the order of the belts that they are eligable to compete for (of course, they can/will be altered during the course of the company). Each week there will be two shows RAW and Smackdown, these will be posted every Monday and Thursday, if i have the time.
So lets begin with the rosters.
AFCs WWE Owner- Me
RAW GM- Shane McMahon
Triple H (RWH) [Current Champ]
Chris Benoit (RWH)
Randy Orton (RWH)
Dave Batista (RWH)
Chris Jericho (RWH)
Shawn Michaels (RTV) [Current Champ]
Kurt Angle (RTV)
Dimond Dallas Page (RTV)
Kane (RTV)
Shelton Benjamin (RI) [Current Champ]
Christian (RI)
William Regal (RI)
Bubba Ray Dudley (RI)
D-Von Dudley (RI)
Eugene Dinsmore (RI)
Tyson Tomko (RI)
Ric Flair (RI)
Trish Stratus (RW) [Current Champ]
Victoria (RW)
Lita (RW)
Christy Hemme (RW)
Stacy Keibler (RW)
Tag-teams:
Christain & Tomko [Champs]
Bubba-ray & D-Von
Benoit & Jericho
Flair & Batista
Smackdown GM- Stephanie McMahon
Eddie Guerreuro (SWT) [Current Champ]
Undertaker (SWT/SHC)
Booker T (SWT)
AJ Styles (SWT)
John Cena (SUS/SHC) [Current Champ]
Ron Killings (SUS)
Big Show (SUS/SHC)
BG James (SUS)
Konnan (SUS)
Rob Van Dam (SHC) [Current Champ]
Rosey (SHC)
Paul London (SCW) [Current Champ]
Rey Mysterio (SCW)
Jeff Hardy (SCW)
Billy Kidman (SCW)
Akio (SCW)
Hurricane (SCW)
Scotty (SCW)
Torrie Wilson
Miss Jackie
Amy Webber
Joy Giovanni
Tag-teams:
BG James & Konnan [Champs]
Eddie & Rey
AJ Styles & Jeff Hardy
Hurricane & Rosey
BG/Konnan/Ron & Ron/Konnan/BG
KEY
RWT - RAWs World Heavywieght Title SWT - Smackdowns WWE Title
RTV - RAWs Televison Title SUS - Smackdowns United States Title
RI - RAWs Intercontiental Title SHC - Smackdowns Hardcore Title
RW - RAWs Womens Title SCW - Smackdowns Crusierweight Title
RTT - RAWs Tag Titles STT -Smackdowns Tag Titles
So thats the rosters.
The first show, RAW, will be hopefully posted this Monday, so untill then: have fun.
Please leave anything that you think would help this 'company' and if I like it I will try to write it in to the stories.
Let the critisim begin.
Page:
(RWH), (RWT)???
If you're going to use abbreviations it might help to explain what they mean?
If you're going to use abbreviations it might help to explain what they mean?
Monday Night RAW 21 February 2005
JR: Hello folks, JR and Jerry ‘The King’ Lawler here, ready to announce tonight’s RAW and its sure to be a real Slobber Knocker.
JL: It sure will be JR, and what a main event we have, Chris Benoit Vs Triple H for the World Heavyweight Title.
JR: That’s right, but first we’re set for one-on-one action between Trish Stratus and Victoria for the Women’s Title.
[I ain’t the lady to mess with]
LG: Making her way to the, the No.1 contender for the Women’s Title, Victoria
JR: Great reception here for Victoria
Even before her music starts, Trish is on her way to the ring and doesn’t look to happy. She makes her way into the ring and starts swinging right hands into the face of Victoria. The ref eventually signals for the match to begin. Trish still throwing punches at Victoria backs her up into the corner, but as the crowd gets behind Victoria, she manages to push Trish off and takes her to the deck with a powerful clothesline. Vic lifts Trish to her feet and sets her up for a suplex and lands it hard, she quickly goes for the cover. 1...2...but Trish manages to kick out with ease, again Vic tries to lift Trish to her feet but this time Trish delivers a knee to the mid-section, fires a few forearms to the face of Vic and whips her of the ropes and again connects a knee to the mid-section which sends Vic crashing to the mat. Trish signals that that’s the end and starts to stalk Vic waiting for her to reach her feet, and as she does she attempts the Chick Kick, but Vic ducks just at the right moment and hits Trish with a reverse DDT. As Trish lays motionless on the canvas, Vic hits her standing moonsult and the crowd begin cheering as she makes her way to the top rope and this time attempts a moonsult from the top rope, but Trish gets her knees up. Both women lay motionless on the canvas as the ref starts counting, as he reaches 6, Trish and Victoria both manage to make it to their feet, Victoria goes for a clothesline but Trish ducks under the arm, turns around and delivers the Chick Kick, straight on the side of the head of Vic who looks to be out cold, Trish rolls her up for the 3 count and retains her Title.
JR: That was a great show by both women there.
JK: It sure was but that’s only the start of the action, look who’s making their way to ring.
JR: it’s the GM of RAW, Shane McMahon.
SM: Ladies and Gentleman, as you all know the Intercontinental Champion Shelton Benjamin is not going to be here tonight after a vicious attack at the hands of Tyson Tomko last week, so instead of the intended Shelton Vs Christian title match, we’ll have a No1 contenders match between Christian and Randy Orton.
JK: What a match, What an announcement JR
JR: Stick around folks that match is next.
[Christian’s music hit’s the titantron]
LG: Making his way to the ring, accompanied by Tyson Tomko, Christian.
[Randy’s music starts to play]
LG: Making his way to the ring Randy Orton.
Both men stare each other down as the ref gets this match underway. The crowd are behind Orton early in the match, chanting R…K…O, R…K…O…. Both men lock it up and Orton backs CC into the corner, as the ref breaks them up Christian starts attacking Orton with right forearms until Orton manages to block one of those vicious arms, and starts dishing out a few punches of his own. Randy throws CC into the ropes and gives him a huge back body drop and quickly drops a knee to his head, he attempts a pin cover but Christian quickly kicks out after 1. Christian managed to get to his feet quick enough to block more punches from Orton, CC capitalises with a knee to the gut and a quick DDT, and a quick cover, but this time Orton kicks out before 2. CC picks Orton up and drops him on his head with a reverse DDT and continues with arm around the neck of Orton, in a almost headlock choke move, the ref starts his 5 count and Christian breaks the hold at 4, with momentum on his side Christian again picks him up and drags him into the corner, continuing to choke him, again the ref starts to count and again CC breaks the hold at 4, and begins to distract the ref long enough for Tomko to grab Orton’s legs causing Randy to crash to the mat, Christian attempts to pick him up, but this time Orton fights back with left and right hands causing CC to stumble back and Orton delivers a nasty uppercut that catches Christian on the nose. Blood starts to drip from CC nose and Orton starts to punch the nose causing the blood to flow quicker and causing Christian to stumble back against the ropes and Orton delivers a text book dropkick right to the nose of Captain Charisma, sending him to the mat, Orton feels this is over and signals for the RKO, just as he is about to deliver CC pulls Orton out of the ring and collapses in the middle of the ring, as the ref checks on CC, Tomko picks up Orton and drops him on the barrier then whips him into the steps before tossing him back in the ring just as CC gets to his feet , Orton also make it to his feet and as CC is about to deliver a clothesline he ducks under and delivers a backbreaker. CC looks out cold, Orton covers 1..2...put Tomko pulls the ref out of the ring climbs into the ring picks Orton up and hits him straight into the side of the head with a stiff kick sending Orton to the canvas. CC orders Tomko to hold him up and just as Christian is about to land the unprettier Shelton jumps into the ring and hits CC with the T-Bone Suplex and before Tomko attacks him Orton connects the RKO. As Shelton drags Tomko to the outside, Randy covers Christian for a slow 2 count as the ref struggles to find his senses, Orton stalks CC waiting for him to make it to his feet and delivers a RKO however CC reverses it into the Unprettier, then crawls over to make the cover. 1..2...3, Christian retains his No1 contendership status.
[Arena goes black, a video appears on the titantron, showing that Raven is coming. The lights come back on]
[Camera in dressing room shows that Diamond Dallas Page is not happy]
[Evolution’s music hit the ‘Tron]
LG: Making their way to ring, Batista and Ric Flair.
[Dudley’s music comes on]
LG: Making their way to the ring, Bubba Ray and D-von, The Dudley Boys
Batista starts of the match, facing off against Bubba, getting Bubba in their corner, starts working into his ribs with a few sharp punches before tagging in Flair, who goes straight to work with the knife-edge chops across the chest of Bubba. The ref tries to break them up and Flair keeps the ref busy as ‘Tista starts to choke Bubba with the tag rope. Flair tags ‘Tista back in and whips Bubba into the corner, but Bubba manages to reverse it and crawls over to D-Von to get the tag, D-Von gets into the ring with crowd behind him, starts to lay the punches to Batista in the corner. D-Von goes for the whip across the ring, but the strength of Evolution’s Animal is too much as he over-powers D-Von making him crash ribs first into the Turnbuckle. Batista get the tag to Flair, who again goes for the chops in the corner and the patented thumb to the eye by the Nature Boy, Flair goes for the whip across the ropes, D-Von ducks under the arm, bounces of the ropes and connected with a flying shoulder block, D-Von picks him up, throws him against the ropes and delivers a high back body drop. D-Von drags Flair to the Dudley corner, Bubba comes into the ring and starts stomping on Flair, which cause Batista to attempt to come in, but the ref blocks him. As the ref is busy, Bubba removes the turnbuckle pad, and the Dudley’s deliver The 3D to the exposed turnbuckle, Bubba climbs out of the ring and pulls Batista of the apron, in time for the ref to turn around and notice D-Von has the cover on Flair, 1...2...3...The Dudley’s win, but ‘Tista isn’t happy, and delivers the Spinebuster to Bubba on the outside, gets into the ring and gives D-Von the Sit-Down Powerbomb, with both Dudley’s down Batista and Flair leave the ring.
[Backstage Segment]
Orton busts into Shane O’Mac’s office and demands a 2 on 1 match against Christian and Tomko next week. McMahon then tells Orton that he has announced that Shelton Benjamin will defend his IC title against Christian at Wrestlemania. Orton asks what that has to do with him. Shane tells him he has booked a tag team match between Orton and Benjamin versus Christian and Tomko. The crowd go mental at this announcement. And the winner of the match will be able to name the stipulation of the WM21 match.
JR: Are you ready King here comes the main event.
JL: It can’t wait JR.
[Crippler’s music comes on]
LG: Making his way to the ring, the No1 contender, Chris Benoit.
Benoit gets into the ring and grabs a microphone.
CB: Tonight I will beat Triple H for the World Heavyweight Title and I will go to Wrestlemania to face the Royal Rumble winner Batista…
[Time to play the game…Triple H makes his way into the ring]
Triple H isn’t in the mood for words, and with the upper hand, lays into Benoit in the corner before whipping him across the ring into the other turnbuckle, Benoit crashes to the mat and Triple H drops a knee across the back of Benoit, HHH then digs his knee into the back of Benoit. Benoit manages to grap the bottom rope. Triple H pulls him up to his feet, whips him across the ring attempts the back body drop but is kicked in the rips by Benoit and starts with the chops, after about 5 or 6 chops Benoit whips Triple H across the ring and delivers a running forearm, then elbow to the head when HHH is down. Benoit sees an opening and attempts the Sharpshooter only to be dragged through the ropes by Triple H. As the ref starts counting Benoit out and at the count of 6 Triple H climbs to the outside and attempts to whip Benoit into the steel steps, but Benoit reverses and Triple h goes crashing into the steps knee first, Benoit roll HHH back into the ring, where Benoit picks Triple H up and hit a German Suplex and keeps the arms around the waist drags him to his feet and again hit’s the high powered German Suplex and still keeps the arms wrapped around the waist but as he goes for the third suplex, HHH rolls behind and drops Benoit with a back suplex, both men are down, The ref starts counting , as he gets to 5, both men climb to their feet and start exchange chops, HHH gains the advantage before delivering a Suplex and dropping the knee to the head and goes for the cover 1..2..but Benoit kicks out, Triple H picks him up and whips him across the ring and delivers a huge Spinebuster, Benoit looks out cold, HHH with the cover 1..2..and again Benoit kicks out. Triple H lifts him in position for the Pedigree, but Benoit graps the legs of the Champion and pulls him to the apron and locks in the sharpshooter. Triple H is set to tap but manages to reach the bottom rope. Triple H pulls himself up with the ropes and Benoit delivers a German Suplex and another and he hits the 3rd suplex. And makes his way to the top rope to deliver the Diving Headbutt, HHH looks out-cold, Benoit goes for the cover but Flair has appeared from nowhere and is distracting the ref. Batista is setting Benoit up for the Powerbomb, but Benoit manages to drop of his shoulders and delivers an Enzuguri to the side of the head, send Batista to the outside. Triple H is making his way into the ring with the WHT and is about to clock Benoit when he side-steps and shoves HHH into Flair knocking him off the apron, as HHH turns around Chris locks in the Crippler Crossface. After a minute or so of HHH trying to make his way to any of the ropes, he gives up and taps out, Benoit wins the World Heavyweight Title. He can’t believe it. As he climbs to the second rope with the WHT the crowd cheer like made and start chanting ’You Tapped Out’ at Triple H. The Show ends with Benoit celebrating with his second WHT submission victory over Triple H.
That was the first show I have written so please feel free to post any feedback that will help future shows.
JR: Hello folks, JR and Jerry ‘The King’ Lawler here, ready to announce tonight’s RAW and its sure to be a real Slobber Knocker.
JL: It sure will be JR, and what a main event we have, Chris Benoit Vs Triple H for the World Heavyweight Title.
JR: That’s right, but first we’re set for one-on-one action between Trish Stratus and Victoria for the Women’s Title.
[I ain’t the lady to mess with]
LG: Making her way to the, the No.1 contender for the Women’s Title, Victoria
JR: Great reception here for Victoria
Even before her music starts, Trish is on her way to the ring and doesn’t look to happy. She makes her way into the ring and starts swinging right hands into the face of Victoria. The ref eventually signals for the match to begin. Trish still throwing punches at Victoria backs her up into the corner, but as the crowd gets behind Victoria, she manages to push Trish off and takes her to the deck with a powerful clothesline. Vic lifts Trish to her feet and sets her up for a suplex and lands it hard, she quickly goes for the cover. 1...2...but Trish manages to kick out with ease, again Vic tries to lift Trish to her feet but this time Trish delivers a knee to the mid-section, fires a few forearms to the face of Vic and whips her of the ropes and again connects a knee to the mid-section which sends Vic crashing to the mat. Trish signals that that’s the end and starts to stalk Vic waiting for her to reach her feet, and as she does she attempts the Chick Kick, but Vic ducks just at the right moment and hits Trish with a reverse DDT. As Trish lays motionless on the canvas, Vic hits her standing moonsult and the crowd begin cheering as she makes her way to the top rope and this time attempts a moonsult from the top rope, but Trish gets her knees up. Both women lay motionless on the canvas as the ref starts counting, as he reaches 6, Trish and Victoria both manage to make it to their feet, Victoria goes for a clothesline but Trish ducks under the arm, turns around and delivers the Chick Kick, straight on the side of the head of Vic who looks to be out cold, Trish rolls her up for the 3 count and retains her Title.
JR: That was a great show by both women there.
JK: It sure was but that’s only the start of the action, look who’s making their way to ring.
JR: it’s the GM of RAW, Shane McMahon.
SM: Ladies and Gentleman, as you all know the Intercontinental Champion Shelton Benjamin is not going to be here tonight after a vicious attack at the hands of Tyson Tomko last week, so instead of the intended Shelton Vs Christian title match, we’ll have a No1 contenders match between Christian and Randy Orton.
JK: What a match, What an announcement JR
JR: Stick around folks that match is next.
[Christian’s music hit’s the titantron]
LG: Making his way to the ring, accompanied by Tyson Tomko, Christian.
[Randy’s music starts to play]
LG: Making his way to the ring Randy Orton.
Both men stare each other down as the ref gets this match underway. The crowd are behind Orton early in the match, chanting R…K…O, R…K…O…. Both men lock it up and Orton backs CC into the corner, as the ref breaks them up Christian starts attacking Orton with right forearms until Orton manages to block one of those vicious arms, and starts dishing out a few punches of his own. Randy throws CC into the ropes and gives him a huge back body drop and quickly drops a knee to his head, he attempts a pin cover but Christian quickly kicks out after 1. Christian managed to get to his feet quick enough to block more punches from Orton, CC capitalises with a knee to the gut and a quick DDT, and a quick cover, but this time Orton kicks out before 2. CC picks Orton up and drops him on his head with a reverse DDT and continues with arm around the neck of Orton, in a almost headlock choke move, the ref starts his 5 count and Christian breaks the hold at 4, with momentum on his side Christian again picks him up and drags him into the corner, continuing to choke him, again the ref starts to count and again CC breaks the hold at 4, and begins to distract the ref long enough for Tomko to grab Orton’s legs causing Randy to crash to the mat, Christian attempts to pick him up, but this time Orton fights back with left and right hands causing CC to stumble back and Orton delivers a nasty uppercut that catches Christian on the nose. Blood starts to drip from CC nose and Orton starts to punch the nose causing the blood to flow quicker and causing Christian to stumble back against the ropes and Orton delivers a text book dropkick right to the nose of Captain Charisma, sending him to the mat, Orton feels this is over and signals for the RKO, just as he is about to deliver CC pulls Orton out of the ring and collapses in the middle of the ring, as the ref checks on CC, Tomko picks up Orton and drops him on the barrier then whips him into the steps before tossing him back in the ring just as CC gets to his feet , Orton also make it to his feet and as CC is about to deliver a clothesline he ducks under and delivers a backbreaker. CC looks out cold, Orton covers 1..2...put Tomko pulls the ref out of the ring climbs into the ring picks Orton up and hits him straight into the side of the head with a stiff kick sending Orton to the canvas. CC orders Tomko to hold him up and just as Christian is about to land the unprettier Shelton jumps into the ring and hits CC with the T-Bone Suplex and before Tomko attacks him Orton connects the RKO. As Shelton drags Tomko to the outside, Randy covers Christian for a slow 2 count as the ref struggles to find his senses, Orton stalks CC waiting for him to make it to his feet and delivers a RKO however CC reverses it into the Unprettier, then crawls over to make the cover. 1..2...3, Christian retains his No1 contendership status.
[Arena goes black, a video appears on the titantron, showing that Raven is coming. The lights come back on]
[Camera in dressing room shows that Diamond Dallas Page is not happy]
[Evolution’s music hit the ‘Tron]
LG: Making their way to ring, Batista and Ric Flair.
[Dudley’s music comes on]
LG: Making their way to the ring, Bubba Ray and D-von, The Dudley Boys
Batista starts of the match, facing off against Bubba, getting Bubba in their corner, starts working into his ribs with a few sharp punches before tagging in Flair, who goes straight to work with the knife-edge chops across the chest of Bubba. The ref tries to break them up and Flair keeps the ref busy as ‘Tista starts to choke Bubba with the tag rope. Flair tags ‘Tista back in and whips Bubba into the corner, but Bubba manages to reverse it and crawls over to D-Von to get the tag, D-Von gets into the ring with crowd behind him, starts to lay the punches to Batista in the corner. D-Von goes for the whip across the ring, but the strength of Evolution’s Animal is too much as he over-powers D-Von making him crash ribs first into the Turnbuckle. Batista get the tag to Flair, who again goes for the chops in the corner and the patented thumb to the eye by the Nature Boy, Flair goes for the whip across the ropes, D-Von ducks under the arm, bounces of the ropes and connected with a flying shoulder block, D-Von picks him up, throws him against the ropes and delivers a high back body drop. D-Von drags Flair to the Dudley corner, Bubba comes into the ring and starts stomping on Flair, which cause Batista to attempt to come in, but the ref blocks him. As the ref is busy, Bubba removes the turnbuckle pad, and the Dudley’s deliver The 3D to the exposed turnbuckle, Bubba climbs out of the ring and pulls Batista of the apron, in time for the ref to turn around and notice D-Von has the cover on Flair, 1...2...3...The Dudley’s win, but ‘Tista isn’t happy, and delivers the Spinebuster to Bubba on the outside, gets into the ring and gives D-Von the Sit-Down Powerbomb, with both Dudley’s down Batista and Flair leave the ring.
[Backstage Segment]
Orton busts into Shane O’Mac’s office and demands a 2 on 1 match against Christian and Tomko next week. McMahon then tells Orton that he has announced that Shelton Benjamin will defend his IC title against Christian at Wrestlemania. Orton asks what that has to do with him. Shane tells him he has booked a tag team match between Orton and Benjamin versus Christian and Tomko. The crowd go mental at this announcement. And the winner of the match will be able to name the stipulation of the WM21 match.
JR: Are you ready King here comes the main event.
JL: It can’t wait JR.
[Crippler’s music comes on]
LG: Making his way to the ring, the No1 contender, Chris Benoit.
Benoit gets into the ring and grabs a microphone.
CB: Tonight I will beat Triple H for the World Heavyweight Title and I will go to Wrestlemania to face the Royal Rumble winner Batista…
[Time to play the game…Triple H makes his way into the ring]
Triple H isn’t in the mood for words, and with the upper hand, lays into Benoit in the corner before whipping him across the ring into the other turnbuckle, Benoit crashes to the mat and Triple H drops a knee across the back of Benoit, HHH then digs his knee into the back of Benoit. Benoit manages to grap the bottom rope. Triple H pulls him up to his feet, whips him across the ring attempts the back body drop but is kicked in the rips by Benoit and starts with the chops, after about 5 or 6 chops Benoit whips Triple H across the ring and delivers a running forearm, then elbow to the head when HHH is down. Benoit sees an opening and attempts the Sharpshooter only to be dragged through the ropes by Triple H. As the ref starts counting Benoit out and at the count of 6 Triple H climbs to the outside and attempts to whip Benoit into the steel steps, but Benoit reverses and Triple h goes crashing into the steps knee first, Benoit roll HHH back into the ring, where Benoit picks Triple H up and hit a German Suplex and keeps the arms around the waist drags him to his feet and again hit’s the high powered German Suplex and still keeps the arms wrapped around the waist but as he goes for the third suplex, HHH rolls behind and drops Benoit with a back suplex, both men are down, The ref starts counting , as he gets to 5, both men climb to their feet and start exchange chops, HHH gains the advantage before delivering a Suplex and dropping the knee to the head and goes for the cover 1..2..but Benoit kicks out, Triple H picks him up and whips him across the ring and delivers a huge Spinebuster, Benoit looks out cold, HHH with the cover 1..2..and again Benoit kicks out. Triple H lifts him in position for the Pedigree, but Benoit graps the legs of the Champion and pulls him to the apron and locks in the sharpshooter. Triple H is set to tap but manages to reach the bottom rope. Triple H pulls himself up with the ropes and Benoit delivers a German Suplex and another and he hits the 3rd suplex. And makes his way to the top rope to deliver the Diving Headbutt, HHH looks out-cold, Benoit goes for the cover but Flair has appeared from nowhere and is distracting the ref. Batista is setting Benoit up for the Powerbomb, but Benoit manages to drop of his shoulders and delivers an Enzuguri to the side of the head, send Batista to the outside. Triple H is making his way into the ring with the WHT and is about to clock Benoit when he side-steps and shoves HHH into Flair knocking him off the apron, as HHH turns around Chris locks in the Crippler Crossface. After a minute or so of HHH trying to make his way to any of the ropes, he gives up and taps out, Benoit wins the World Heavyweight Title. He can’t believe it. As he climbs to the second rope with the WHT the crowd cheer like made and start chanting ’You Tapped Out’ at Triple H. The Show ends with Benoit celebrating with his second WHT submission victory over Triple H.
That was the first show I have written so please feel free to post any feedback that will help future shows.
You should have signed up for it really. Back when SRW was around, I had never written anything like that when I first started. I think its the same for most people.
Raven-ous wrote:
> Why are you doing this outside the confines of Congers' Promotion
> Wars?
like I said, im inexperianced (at a writing sense) and so i never signed up, this might help me become a better writer, then i can join stuff like thats.
> Why are you doing this outside the confines of Congers' Promotion
> Wars?
like I said, im inexperianced (at a writing sense) and so i never signed up, this might help me become a better writer, then i can join stuff like thats.
The Dons Rule All wrote:
> [] Note: There is a fair bit to read []
stops reading :-D
> [] Note: There is a fair bit to read []
stops reading :-D
Why are you doing this outside the confines of Congers' Promotion Wars?
I won't read this.
Nobody will.
I won't read this.
Nobody will.
[] Note: There is a fair bit to read []
I thought I would give this whole creative writing a go, so here i am with 'AFCs WWE' (sucks I know)
The first few shows my be pretty crap, but bear with me and my skills will get better.
I will put each show in the order of the belts that they are eligable to compete for (of course, they can/will be altered during the course of the company). Each week there will be two shows RAW and Smackdown, these will be posted every Monday and Thursday, if i have the time.
So lets begin with the rosters.
AFCs WWE Owner- Me
RAW GM- Shane McMahon
Triple H (RWH) [Current Champ]
Chris Benoit (RWH)
Randy Orton (RWH)
Dave Batista (RWH)
Chris Jericho (RWH)
Shawn Michaels (RTV) [Current Champ]
Kurt Angle (RTV)
Dimond Dallas Page (RTV)
Kane (RTV)
Shelton Benjamin (RI) [Current Champ]
Christian (RI)
William Regal (RI)
Bubba Ray Dudley (RI)
D-Von Dudley (RI)
Eugene Dinsmore (RI)
Tyson Tomko (RI)
Ric Flair (RI)
Trish Stratus (RW) [Current Champ]
Victoria (RW)
Lita (RW)
Christy Hemme (RW)
Stacy Keibler (RW)
Tag-teams:
Christain & Tomko [Champs]
Bubba-ray & D-Von
Benoit & Jericho
Flair & Batista
Smackdown GM- Stephanie McMahon
Eddie Guerreuro (SWT) [Current Champ]
Undertaker (SWT/SHC)
Booker T (SWT)
AJ Styles (SWT)
John Cena (SUS/SHC) [Current Champ]
Ron Killings (SUS)
Big Show (SUS/SHC)
BG James (SUS)
Konnan (SUS)
Rob Van Dam (SHC) [Current Champ]
Rosey (SHC)
Paul London (SCW) [Current Champ]
Rey Mysterio (SCW)
Jeff Hardy (SCW)
Billy Kidman (SCW)
Akio (SCW)
Hurricane (SCW)
Scotty (SCW)
Torrie Wilson
Miss Jackie
Amy Webber
Joy Giovanni
Tag-teams:
BG James & Konnan [Champs]
Eddie & Rey
AJ Styles & Jeff Hardy
Hurricane & Rosey
BG/Konnan/Ron & Ron/Konnan/BG
KEY
RWT - RAWs World Heavywieght Title SWT - Smackdowns WWE Title
RTV - RAWs Televison Title SUS - Smackdowns United States Title
RI - RAWs Intercontiental Title SHC - Smackdowns Hardcore Title
RW - RAWs Womens Title SCW - Smackdowns Crusierweight Title
RTT - RAWs Tag Titles STT -Smackdowns Tag Titles
So thats the rosters.
The first show, RAW, will be hopefully posted this Monday, so untill then: have fun.
Please leave anything that you think would help this 'company' and if I like it I will try to write it in to the stories.
Let the critisim begin.
I thought I would give this whole creative writing a go, so here i am with 'AFCs WWE' (sucks I know)
The first few shows my be pretty crap, but bear with me and my skills will get better.
I will put each show in the order of the belts that they are eligable to compete for (of course, they can/will be altered during the course of the company). Each week there will be two shows RAW and Smackdown, these will be posted every Monday and Thursday, if i have the time.
So lets begin with the rosters.
AFCs WWE Owner- Me
RAW GM- Shane McMahon
Triple H (RWH) [Current Champ]
Chris Benoit (RWH)
Randy Orton (RWH)
Dave Batista (RWH)
Chris Jericho (RWH)
Shawn Michaels (RTV) [Current Champ]
Kurt Angle (RTV)
Dimond Dallas Page (RTV)
Kane (RTV)
Shelton Benjamin (RI) [Current Champ]
Christian (RI)
William Regal (RI)
Bubba Ray Dudley (RI)
D-Von Dudley (RI)
Eugene Dinsmore (RI)
Tyson Tomko (RI)
Ric Flair (RI)
Trish Stratus (RW) [Current Champ]
Victoria (RW)
Lita (RW)
Christy Hemme (RW)
Stacy Keibler (RW)
Tag-teams:
Christain & Tomko [Champs]
Bubba-ray & D-Von
Benoit & Jericho
Flair & Batista
Smackdown GM- Stephanie McMahon
Eddie Guerreuro (SWT) [Current Champ]
Undertaker (SWT/SHC)
Booker T (SWT)
AJ Styles (SWT)
John Cena (SUS/SHC) [Current Champ]
Ron Killings (SUS)
Big Show (SUS/SHC)
BG James (SUS)
Konnan (SUS)
Rob Van Dam (SHC) [Current Champ]
Rosey (SHC)
Paul London (SCW) [Current Champ]
Rey Mysterio (SCW)
Jeff Hardy (SCW)
Billy Kidman (SCW)
Akio (SCW)
Hurricane (SCW)
Scotty (SCW)
Torrie Wilson
Miss Jackie
Amy Webber
Joy Giovanni
Tag-teams:
BG James & Konnan [Champs]
Eddie & Rey
AJ Styles & Jeff Hardy
Hurricane & Rosey
BG/Konnan/Ron & Ron/Konnan/BG
KEY
RWT - RAWs World Heavywieght Title SWT - Smackdowns WWE Title
RTV - RAWs Televison Title SUS - Smackdowns United States Title
RI - RAWs Intercontiental Title SHC - Smackdowns Hardcore Title
RW - RAWs Womens Title SCW - Smackdowns Crusierweight Title
RTT - RAWs Tag Titles STT -Smackdowns Tag Titles
So thats the rosters.
The first show, RAW, will be hopefully posted this Monday, so untill then: have fun.
Please leave anything that you think would help this 'company' and if I like it I will try to write it in to the stories.
Let the critisim begin.
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