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I thought I would give this whole creative writing a go, so here i am with 'AFCs WWE' (sucks I know)
The first few shows my be pretty crap, but bear with me and my skills will get better.
I will put each show in the order of the belts that they are eligable to compete for (of course, they can/will be altered during the course of the company). Each week there will be two shows RAW and Smackdown, these will be posted every Monday and Thursday, if i have the time.
So lets begin with the rosters.

AFCs WWE Owner- Me
RAW GM- Shane McMahon

Triple H (RWH) [Current Champ]
Chris Benoit (RWH)
Randy Orton (RWH)
Dave Batista (RWH)
Chris Jericho (RWH)
Shawn Michaels (RTV) [Current Champ]
Kurt Angle (RTV)
Dimond Dallas Page (RTV)
Kane (RTV)
Shelton Benjamin (RI) [Current Champ]
Christian (RI)
William Regal (RI)
Bubba Ray Dudley (RI)
D-Von Dudley (RI)
Eugene Dinsmore (RI)
Tyson Tomko (RI)
Ric Flair (RI)

Trish Stratus (RW) [Current Champ]
Victoria (RW)
Lita (RW)
Christy Hemme (RW)
Stacy Keibler (RW)

Tag-teams:
Christain & Tomko [Champs]
Bubba-ray & D-Von
Benoit & Jericho
Flair & Batista


Smackdown GM- Stephanie McMahon

Eddie Guerreuro (SWT) [Current Champ]
Undertaker (SWT/SHC)
Booker T (SWT)
AJ Styles (SWT)
John Cena (SUS/SHC) [Current Champ]
Ron Killings (SUS)
Big Show (SUS/SHC)
BG James (SUS)
Konnan (SUS)
Rob Van Dam (SHC) [Current Champ]
Rosey (SHC)
Paul London (SCW) [Current Champ]
Rey Mysterio (SCW)
Jeff Hardy (SCW)
Billy Kidman (SCW)
Akio (SCW)
Hurricane (SCW)
Scotty (SCW)

Torrie Wilson
Miss Jackie
Amy Webber
Joy Giovanni

Tag-teams:
BG James & Konnan [Champs]
Eddie & Rey
AJ Styles & Jeff Hardy
Hurricane & Rosey
BG/Konnan/Ron & Ron/Konnan/BG

KEY
RWT - RAWs World Heavywieght Title SWT - Smackdowns WWE Title
RTV - RAWs Televison Title SUS - Smackdowns United States Title
RI - RAWs Intercontiental Title SHC - Smackdowns Hardcore Title
RW - RAWs Womens Title SCW - Smackdowns Crusierweight Title
RTT - RAWs Tag Titles STT -Smackdowns Tag Titles

So thats the rosters.
The first show, RAW, will be hopefully posted this Monday, so untill then: have fun.
Please leave anything that you think would help this 'company' and if I like it I will try to write it in to the stories.

Let the critisim begin.

Lucy Jane wrote:
> Lipe. but then again ive got nothing better to do with my time.. so i
> actually read it ALL!!

In other words...she's sorry :P

Lipe. but then again ive got nothing better to do with my time.. so i actually read it ALL!!

Ah, the memories... :)

Lucy Jane wrote:
> okay.. way to much to read.. and i kinda value my time.. I like to do
> something worth doing..

Ouch...

Grandprix wrote:
> [URL]http://ukchatforums.reserve.co.uk/display_messages.php?threadid=17618&forumid=52[/URL]

*wipes tear from eye* Oh how I miss SRW :(

I try to help if I can. It's my opinion and you can write how you like. I don't want to stunt any creativity.

I've found it easier to write like you're commentating on it and describing the atmosphere etc then it is for you to write a match recap.

Some of the matches in that thread are of the highest quality. Read the Elimination Chamber match in there. It's probably the best work there.

By all means, use WWE wrestlers though. It's an easy start than creating loads of wrestlers on your own and trying to get them across.

Grandprix wrote:
> Okay, I gave it a quick scan through. My thoughts:
>
> Personalise it. Get away from what the WWE are doing and do what you
> want to do. Forget title lineage, forget commentators, forget the
> WWE. This is your work, so make me feel like you are enjoying writing
> it and that it's your own work.
>
> Paragraph the matches out and show a bit more enthusiasm at key
> moments by capitalising key moments etc.
>
> For ideas on match structure etc, look here:
> [URL]http://ukchatforums.reserve.co.uk/display_messages.php?threadid=17618&forumid=52[/URL]
>
> That thread contains matches written by members of the forums.

Thanks for the advice, I'll try get away from the WWE ASAP.
Thanks, you've been the most helpful of the lot :)

Okay, I gave it a quick scan through. My thoughts:

Personalise it. Get away from what the WWE are doing and do what you want to do. Forget title lineage, forget commentators, forget the WWE. This is your work, so make me feel like you are enjoying writing it and that it's your own work.

Paragraph the matches out and show a bit more enthusiasm at key moments by capitalising key moments etc.

For ideas on match structure etc, look here: [URL]http://ukchatforums.reserve.co.uk/display_messages.php?threadid=17618&forumid=52[/URL]

That thread contains matches written by members of the forums.

okay.. way to much to read.. and i kinda value my time.. I like to do something worth doing..

Cong Man wrote:
> (RWH), (RWT)???
>
> If you're going to use abbreviations it might help to explain what
> they mean?

Sorry, RWT and RWH mean the same thing, in the first post i said RWT is the World Heavyweight Title. Sorry for the confusion.