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Here is the new competition. Number 17. (We’re not all bored of this, are we?)
Anyway, the subject is Diamonds.
Anything to do with those sparkly things, which (apparently) are a girl’s best friend, very precious when cut right, and (according to Shirley Bassey) last forever.
It doesn’t necessarily have to be about ‘physical diamonds’ - abstract use of diamonds is acceptable, just as long as it features something diamond-like.
My rules are:
—One entry per person
—Closing date Jan 24th
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Result
Some good entries, some okay, some not so good.
—FinalFantasyFanatic’s is the most amazing [and uses the theme the best]
—Surrealguy’s is the most evocative
—Meka Dragon’s is the quirkiest
—Clazon’s is the most storylike
—Rickoss’ is the most poetic
—arctic hobo’s is the darkest
—Paradox’s is the most solid and well-structured
—Wink’s is most ‘alrightish’
—crossbob’s is pure genius
—extra mention for FFF: epic piece and I hail you for it, but
the one I like the most — with its subtlety of style and its quaint snapshot resonance — is…
Rungs by Mav
You win.
::::—brief firework display—::::
Over to you.
Anyway, the subject is Diamonds.
Anything to do with those sparkly things, which (apparently) are a girl’s best friend, very precious when cut right, and (according to Shirley Bassey) last forever.
It doesn’t necessarily have to be about ‘physical diamonds’ - abstract use of diamonds is acceptable, just as long as it features something diamond-like.
My rules are:
—One entry per person
—Closing date Jan 24th
--------------
Result
Some good entries, some okay, some not so good.
—FinalFantasyFanatic’s is the most amazing [and uses the theme the best]
—Surrealguy’s is the most evocative
—Meka Dragon’s is the quirkiest
—Clazon’s is the most storylike
—Rickoss’ is the most poetic
—arctic hobo’s is the darkest
—Paradox’s is the most solid and well-structured
—Wink’s is most ‘alrightish’
—crossbob’s is pure genius
—extra mention for FFF: epic piece and I hail you for it, but
the one I like the most — with its subtlety of style and its quaint snapshot resonance — is…
Rungs by Mav
You win.
::::—brief firework display—::::
Over to you.
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Nice going with the win, BG, but I'm thinking the title is going to require something...hmmm...yuss.
Aha! A time to prove my n00b storywriting MADSKILLZ. Sorry, I'm trying to stop playing computer games at the moment, but some memory lingers...
:'-(
Ah, should be able to throw something together for this. Good topic.
Ah, should be able to throw something together for this. Good topic.
Here is the new competition. Number 17. (We’re not all bored of this, are we?)
Anyway, the subject is Diamonds.
Anything to do with those sparkly things, which (apparently) are a girl’s best friend, very precious when cut right, and (according to Shirley Bassey) last forever.
It doesn’t necessarily have to be about ‘physical diamonds’ - abstract use of diamonds is acceptable, just as long as it features something diamond-like.
My rules are:
—One entry per person
—Closing date Jan 24th
--------------
Result
Some good entries, some okay, some not so good.
—FinalFantasyFanatic’s is the most amazing [and uses the theme the best]
—Surrealguy’s is the most evocative
—Meka Dragon’s is the quirkiest
—Clazon’s is the most storylike
—Rickoss’ is the most poetic
—arctic hobo’s is the darkest
—Paradox’s is the most solid and well-structured
—Wink’s is most ‘alrightish’
—crossbob’s is pure genius
—extra mention for FFF: epic piece and I hail you for it, but
the one I like the most — with its subtlety of style and its quaint snapshot resonance — is…
Rungs by Mav
You win.
::::—brief firework display—::::
Over to you.
Anyway, the subject is Diamonds.
Anything to do with those sparkly things, which (apparently) are a girl’s best friend, very precious when cut right, and (according to Shirley Bassey) last forever.
It doesn’t necessarily have to be about ‘physical diamonds’ - abstract use of diamonds is acceptable, just as long as it features something diamond-like.
My rules are:
—One entry per person
—Closing date Jan 24th
--------------
Result
Some good entries, some okay, some not so good.
—FinalFantasyFanatic’s is the most amazing [and uses the theme the best]
—Surrealguy’s is the most evocative
—Meka Dragon’s is the quirkiest
—Clazon’s is the most storylike
—Rickoss’ is the most poetic
—arctic hobo’s is the darkest
—Paradox’s is the most solid and well-structured
—Wink’s is most ‘alrightish’
—crossbob’s is pure genius
—extra mention for FFF: epic piece and I hail you for it, but
the one I like the most — with its subtlety of style and its quaint snapshot resonance — is…
Rungs by Mav
You win.
::::—brief firework display—::::
Over to you.
Page: