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Anyway, the subject is Diamonds.
Anything to do with those sparkly things, which (apparently) are a girl’s best friend, very precious when cut right, and (according to Shirley Bassey) last forever.
It doesn’t necessarily have to be about ‘physical diamonds’ - abstract use of diamonds is acceptable, just as long as it features something diamond-like.
My rules are:
—One entry per person
—Closing date Jan 24th
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Result
Some good entries, some okay, some not so good.
—FinalFantasyFanatic’s is the most amazing [and uses the theme the best]
—Surrealguy’s is the most evocative
—Meka Dragon’s is the quirkiest
—Clazon’s is the most storylike
—Rickoss’ is the most poetic
—arctic hobo’s is the darkest
—Paradox’s is the most solid and well-structured
—Wink’s is most ‘alrightish’
—crossbob’s is pure genius
—extra mention for FFF: epic piece and I hail you for it, but
the one I like the most — with its subtlety of style and its quaint snapshot resonance — is…
Rungs by Mav
You win.
::::—brief firework display—::::
Over to you.
fecking narrative structure.
rargh.
why won't you fit?
If Ashman enters this contest late I'm going to have rough sex with him until he cries.
This is amazing.
Go me.
So not going to be finished by the deadline, though.
But I don't care, it'll r00l.
Diamond Bullets and the Tears from Broken Eyes
Oh yus indeedy.
woo!
It's a start. Better crack on.
I have some kind of fetish for eyes.
Every single bloody story ... talk about them eyes.
Ahh ... but eyes. They rule.
> I have to think of something new 'cos Rickoss already did the
> 'bleeding heart' version :(
>
> Liked your little non-entry though.
Sorry. :\
You can have Sleepy, but don't drag me into this.