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"SHORT STORY COMP 17"

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Sun 09/01/05 at 14:33
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Here is the new competition. Number 17. (We’re not all bored of this, are we?)

Anyway, the subject is Diamonds.

Anything to do with those sparkly things, which (apparently) are a girl’s best friend, very precious when cut right, and (according to Shirley Bassey) last forever.

It doesn’t necessarily have to be about ‘physical diamonds’ - abstract use of diamonds is acceptable, just as long as it features something diamond-like.

My rules are:
—One entry per person
—Closing date Jan 24th

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Result

Some good entries, some okay, some not so good.

FinalFantasyFanatic’s is the most amazing [and uses the theme the best]
Surrealguy’s is the most evocative
Meka Dragon’s is the quirkiest
Clazon’s is the most storylike
Rickoss’ is the most poetic
arctic hobo’s is the darkest
Paradox’s is the most solid and well-structured
Wink’s is most ‘alrightish’
crossbob’s is pure genius

—extra mention for FFF: epic piece and I hail you for it, but

the one I like the most — with its subtlety of style and its quaint snapshot resonance — is…

Rungs by Mav

You win.

::::—brief firework display—::::

Over to you.
Wed 26/01/05 at 07:50
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Congrats to Mav :)
Tue 25/01/05 at 20:49
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"A Paladin with a PH"
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Wow, nice one. Well deserved!
Tue 25/01/05 at 18:47
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Oh excellent! Cheers.

Now to think of a decent topic.
Tue 25/01/05 at 18:14
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Winnar. Nice one Mav. :)
Tue 25/01/05 at 18:11
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See original post for the winner.
Tue 25/01/05 at 16:16
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FFF's entry was a bit like something from final fantasy, with other stuff mixed in, I thought. It's not the best on the forum, but maybe the best of the comp.
Tue 25/01/05 at 14:21
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I'm weighing up the options.

*It's either that one or that one*

If I don't get aducted by cattle-mutilators, the result will be posted early evening.
Tue 25/01/05 at 11:11
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His last story was something a bit special. Puts my feeble efforts to shame, no doubt about that :D
Tue 25/01/05 at 10:31
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Seems quite rubbish now after reading FFF's anyway. Damn him. :D

If the topic doesn't fit this time I'll just post it anyway.
Tue 25/01/05 at 00:41
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Rickoss wrote:
> Whoever wins better make a good topic.
>
> I wanna post my story. :(

Try dropping some gentle hints with regards to the next theme :)

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