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please could you go on my website and read my story the finding on www.geocities.com/psychostyleworld
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WHY?
My literary tastes are very different to your storys.
chippxero wrote:
> no
WHY?
> no
WHY?
"everything went in slow motion"
no
do you like my stories?
Im not writing the story for a laugh just like writing stories.
Yeah crossbob the creative writing forum hasn't really had the pleasure of your spamming. But at least you made this thread which wasn't that bad just in the wrong place.
lol. why isnt this in the creative writing forum?
Fozz wrote:
> lol, maybe I should read them. just to laugh my ass off.
It's well worth it. Each "chapter" is like a paragrpah long, and by number four it's got pretty delusional, weird and increasingly badly written. (I'd love to know where the hand and shotgun come from.) If there's a new episode every monday, I have a new something to look forward too......
I can't decide whether it is someone being serious, or having a massive laugh.
""Hey what are you doing down there"shouted the Police Officer. Then the Police Officers eyes opened wide till they nearly reached his hair. "You killed him didn't you huh didn't you" thundered the Police Officer. Jay got up he started to run. He heard the Police Officer in the distance. "Oii come back here now"stormed the Police Officer."
[Edit] Ahhh, quality. He's changed the magically appearing pistol and shotgun to a rambling trip to an airport, a journey to Spain and a hitman / painball action scene.
This just gets more insane by the moment.
Bless, at least he's trying I suppose.
> lol, maybe I should read them. just to laugh my ass off.
It's well worth it. Each "chapter" is like a paragrpah long, and by number four it's got pretty delusional, weird and increasingly badly written. (I'd love to know where the hand and shotgun come from.) If there's a new episode every monday, I have a new something to look forward too......
I can't decide whether it is someone being serious, or having a massive laugh.
""Hey what are you doing down there"shouted the Police Officer. Then the Police Officers eyes opened wide till they nearly reached his hair. "You killed him didn't you huh didn't you" thundered the Police Officer. Jay got up he started to run. He heard the Police Officer in the distance. "Oii come back here now"stormed the Police Officer."
[Edit] Ahhh, quality. He's changed the magically appearing pistol and shotgun to a rambling trip to an airport, a journey to Spain and a hitman / painball action scene.
This just gets more insane by the moment.
Bless, at least he's trying I suppose.
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