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"A Summer Poem"

I look up at the sun and light fills my eye
Out comes a tear, I'm starting to cry
I feel the warmth from up at the sun
It's o so great, it has just begun.

I look up into the clear blue sky
It's a beautiful sight, for the eye
I feel so happy and so wonderfully brill,
looking into the Sun is a brilliant thrill.

I look into the crystal clear sea
I love it so, just you and me
The days just seem to go so fast
These Summer days will never last.

Summer is the best season of all
Swimming in the sea or playing football,
Summer is definetly the best season
And I am sure I know the reason.


by Wakka.

Oh... that poem was certainly, er... 'good', so to speak.

Different, eh? How was it different?

It was... different, anyway.

Oh, oh it was.

Tiltawhirl wrote:
> That was awful.

No it wasn't.

I like the way you had the audacity to use the word Brill. Is this a tribute to the 1980's perhaps, or maybe a clever metaphor on how shiny you can get things with a brillo pad? ;-)

That was awful.

Yeah. ;-)

Did you like the poem?

Wakka wrote:
>
> looking into the Sun is a brilliant thrill.

Sure does burn though. :P

I look up at the sun and light fills my eye
Out comes a tear, I'm starting to cry
I feel the warmth from up at the sun
It's o so great, it has just begun.

I look up into the clear blue sky
It's a beautiful sight, for the eye
I feel so happy and so wonderfully brill,
looking into the Sun is a brilliant thrill.

I look into the crystal clear sea
I love it so, just you and me
The days just seem to go so fast
These Summer days will never last.

Summer is the best season of all
Swimming in the sea or playing football,
Summer is definetly the best season
And I am sure I know the reason.


by Wakka.