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"A Summer Poem"

I look up at the sun and light fills my eye
Out comes a tear, I'm starting to cry
I feel the warmth from up at the sun
It's o so great, it has just begun.

I look up into the clear blue sky
It's a beautiful sight, for the eye
I feel so happy and so wonderfully brill,
looking into the Sun is a brilliant thrill.

I look into the crystal clear sea
I love it so, just you and me
The days just seem to go so fast
These Summer days will never last.

Summer is the best season of all
Swimming in the sea or playing football,
Summer is definetly the best season
And I am sure I know the reason.


by Wakka.

Inthe winter, I can put on enough clothes to stay warm. It's so HOT during the summer, sweating and all, they won't let me run around naked. (Which, come to think of it, is a blessing in itself. I'd hate to scare the population.)

Archangel wrote:
> I think I like winter better.

We're all British, we hate all seasons. Winter is too cold and Summer is too hot.

Actually an hour and fourty-one minutes to be precise.

You finished an hour and fourty-minutes after you posted this and thought it was you last?

Presedenté Nash wrote:
> Wakka wrote:
> Yesterday at 9.19PM
> >A Summer Poem
>
> Wakka wrote:
> very late last night
>
> Bless.

Was it only 9.19 p.m I posted it at? Wow, that is weird. I was on until 11.00 pm last night and I'm sure that poem was my last post.

Didn't really like it myself.

Wakka wrote:
Yesterday at 9.19PM
>A Summer Poem

Wakka wrote:
> very late last night

Bless.

Fair enough. I agree, it was crap. I can do much better than that. It was very late last night and I was very bored and I made up a poem on the spot and posted it here.

I'm sorry Wakka, I would like to offer something helpful, but I can't. That was just really poor. It just sounded like to you so desperate for it to rhyme also, it didn’t roll of the tongue, mainly because of the extra syllables in some lines. Just because I word sounds the same as another at the end of the word does not mean they should be rhymed together.

I thought it was pretty good. I like summer.....except for the bugs swarming you wherever you go...hedge trimming....lawn cutting....painting....come to think of it, it's a lot of work.

I think I like winter better.