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"Poems about GaD members............."

These are poems for GaD members who posted in my last poem thread Playing in the Yard which can be found further down the page on l+e topic. all of the poems have to end with over and the structure is 1,1.2,2.3

For WAKKA
There once was a guy guy called WAKKA,
Who fell and broke his maraka,
When he got up,
He placed it in a cup,
His muscical career was over.


FOR EDGY
Edgy was once a great footballer,
Who wanted to become a manager,
His career was great,
He was fouled by a mate,
Now his career is over.


For Rikmaru Dark
There was once a guy called Rikmaru Dark,
Who used to play football in the park,
He fouled his best friend Edgy,
Who gave him a wedgy,
Now their friendship is over.


For Shadow Girl
There once was a girl called Shadow,
Who used to roam across the meadow,
Once she fellover onto her head,
And she ffound out she was dead,
Suddenly her Life was over.


For UrKiE-UK and MAV
There once was a guy called UrKiE-UK,
Who used o beat up mav every day,
Mav got real sad,
And told his DaD,
His social life was over.

For FFF
Final Fantasy Fanatic,
Is a bit of a spastic,
He loves just one game,
Which is a bit lame,
Now my GaD hopes are over......


What do you think???
which is your fave???

This sounds like rap more than a poem.

Forest Fan wrote:
> Where's my one?

you didnt post in the last one so i didnt know if you wanted me o use your name.

heres one


Forest Fan is a fool,
hes so dumb and hes not cool,
He'l post spam on every page,
And be qiuck to take out all his rage,
So that the end of my little rhyme,
Maybe ill gun you next time.

its valid to me and poetry is meant to be an artists impersonation....

1,1,2,2,3 isn't a valid poetic structure.

In fact, it is banned in Mexico and the Ukraine.

$L!(E wrote:
> What do you think???

Not too good.

> which is your fave???

None of them. Try to make it rhyme first slice.

I asked you to spare me from your writing but you've disobeyed. Thus, I can no longer be nice about this, and so I'll be straightforward;

That was the worst thing ever.

Where's my one?

That was good , slice.

All rubbish.

You must have a wonderful accent to make footballer and manager rhyme.