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These are poems for GaD members who posted in my last poem thread Playing in the Yard which can be found further down the page on l+e topic. all of the poems have to end with over and the structure is 1,1.2,2.3
For WAKKA
There once was a guy guy called WAKKA,
Who fell and broke his maraka,
When he got up,
He placed it in a cup,
His muscical career was over.
FOR EDGY
Edgy was once a great footballer,
Who wanted to become a manager,
His career was great,
He was fouled by a mate,
Now his career is over.
For Rikmaru Dark
There was once a guy called Rikmaru Dark,
Who used to play football in the park,
He fouled his best friend Edgy,
Who gave him a wedgy,
Now their friendship is over.
For Shadow Girl
There once was a girl called Shadow,
Who used to roam across the meadow,
Once she fellover onto her head,
And she ffound out she was dead,
Suddenly her Life was over.
For UrKiE-UK and MAV
There once was a guy called UrKiE-UK,
Who used o beat up mav every day,
Mav got real sad,
And told his DaD,
His social life was over.
For FFF
Final Fantasy Fanatic,
Is a bit of a spastic,
He loves just one game,
Which is a bit lame,
Now my GaD hopes are over......
What do you think???
which is your fave???
For WAKKA
There once was a guy guy called WAKKA,
Who fell and broke his maraka,
When he got up,
He placed it in a cup,
His muscical career was over.
FOR EDGY
Edgy was once a great footballer,
Who wanted to become a manager,
His career was great,
He was fouled by a mate,
Now his career is over.
For Rikmaru Dark
There was once a guy called Rikmaru Dark,
Who used to play football in the park,
He fouled his best friend Edgy,
Who gave him a wedgy,
Now their friendship is over.
For Shadow Girl
There once was a girl called Shadow,
Who used to roam across the meadow,
Once she fellover onto her head,
And she ffound out she was dead,
Suddenly her Life was over.
For UrKiE-UK and MAV
There once was a guy called UrKiE-UK,
Who used o beat up mav every day,
Mav got real sad,
And told his DaD,
His social life was over.
For FFF
Final Fantasy Fanatic,
Is a bit of a spastic,
He loves just one game,
Which is a bit lame,
Now my GaD hopes are over......
What do you think???
which is your fave???
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Annoying innit? I admit I do it a lot myself, but I try and clip to relevant stuff so that the post remains readible. That lazy little rancid manfat stain simply does it to boost his word count. Or cos he's too stupid to do otherwise. One or the other...
*sigh* Now I understand the qouting message gripe over in Site Bugs.
Light wrote:
> Forest Fan wrote:
>
> Jabberwocky uses capital letters, apostrophes, correct spellings,
> has
> a set rhyming pattern, the syllables are well weighed up and it is a
> very good poem.
>
> I'm sure Lewis Carrol will be happy to know that his nonsense poem is
> approved by a nonsense person.
I think Jabberwocky has real class in it.
> Forest Fan wrote:
>
> Jabberwocky uses capital letters, apostrophes, correct spellings,
> has
> a set rhyming pattern, the syllables are well weighed up and it is a
> very good poem.
>
> I'm sure Lewis Carrol will be happy to know that his nonsense poem is
> approved by a nonsense person.
I think Jabberwocky has real class in it.
Forest Fan wrote:
> Jabberwocky uses capital letters, apostrophes, correct spellings, has
> a set rhyming pattern, the syllables are well weighed up and it is a
> very good poem.
I'm sure Lewis Carrol will be happy to know that his nonsense poem is approved by a nonsense person.
> Jabberwocky uses capital letters, apostrophes, correct spellings, has
> a set rhyming pattern, the syllables are well weighed up and it is a
> very good poem.
I'm sure Lewis Carrol will be happy to know that his nonsense poem is approved by a nonsense person.
ahem...
Ahahaha. 10/10 for effort.
But... *weep*
But... *weep*
What an honour.
Light wrote:
> Jabberwocky is a glorious poem. But then, as Gump seems to believe
> that everything in the world should fit with the rules that he and
> his heavenly father apply, he'll probably tell us that Lewis Carroll
> will be in hell for deforming Gods language.
>
> My own personal favourite poet is Spike Milligan. His stuff ranges
> from silly, to hysterically funny, to tearjerkingly moving. The man
> was a genius.
Jabberwocky uses capital letters, apostrophes, correct spellings, has a set rhyming pattern, the syllables are well weighed up and it is a very good poem.
> Jabberwocky is a glorious poem. But then, as Gump seems to believe
> that everything in the world should fit with the rules that he and
> his heavenly father apply, he'll probably tell us that Lewis Carroll
> will be in hell for deforming Gods language.
>
> My own personal favourite poet is Spike Milligan. His stuff ranges
> from silly, to hysterically funny, to tearjerkingly moving. The man
> was a genius.
Jabberwocky uses capital letters, apostrophes, correct spellings, has a set rhyming pattern, the syllables are well weighed up and it is a very good poem.
I rather like an established poet someone like slice..
Light wrote:
> My own personal favourite poet is Spike Milligan. His stuff ranges
> from silly, to hysterically funny, to tearjerkingly moving. The man
> was a genius.
Yeah, one of my personal favourites too. I remember reading his stuff as a kid and just loving the absurdity of it. As an adult, I still do, but in a different way. A definitive genius, and one walking that fine line to the fullest.
On a side note, and on Carroll, I’ve just played through “American McGee’s Alice” which takes the Alice story and twists it further (she is insane, and wonderland has became an appalling place)
This in turn has made me re-read Jeff Noons “Automated Alice”, another twisted look at both Wonderland and Alice. In this case, Wonderland and its inhabitants are dying as no-one is reading the Alice books, and therefore dying in people imaginations.
I'll be up my parent tonight, picking up both "Alice and Wonderland" and "Through the looking glass" to re-read them.
Pointless mentioning this I know, but bored at work, and somehow it appeals to me that someone (and their creations) live on thought peoples imaginations, in the same way the Bald Twit Lion probably will.
> My own personal favourite poet is Spike Milligan. His stuff ranges
> from silly, to hysterically funny, to tearjerkingly moving. The man
> was a genius.
Yeah, one of my personal favourites too. I remember reading his stuff as a kid and just loving the absurdity of it. As an adult, I still do, but in a different way. A definitive genius, and one walking that fine line to the fullest.
On a side note, and on Carroll, I’ve just played through “American McGee’s Alice” which takes the Alice story and twists it further (she is insane, and wonderland has became an appalling place)
This in turn has made me re-read Jeff Noons “Automated Alice”, another twisted look at both Wonderland and Alice. In this case, Wonderland and its inhabitants are dying as no-one is reading the Alice books, and therefore dying in people imaginations.
I'll be up my parent tonight, picking up both "Alice and Wonderland" and "Through the looking glass" to re-read them.
Pointless mentioning this I know, but bored at work, and somehow it appeals to me that someone (and their creations) live on thought peoples imaginations, in the same way the Bald Twit Lion probably will.
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