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"short short story"

When walking home one day, Maria was looking forward to seeing her father for the first time in two days. As she had slept round at her mates house and had a wild party and been drunk , as she approached the door she noticed it was open, she walked in to the house and saw blood smeared up the walls of her parents house. She walked towards the bathroom to notice her father sitting on the toilet, with emended constipation from the stew he had eaten the night before. But that did not explain the blood stains up the walls, as she approached the kitchen she noticed her mum on her need with her head towards the ground, she had something in her hand, it was a tea towel she was mopping up some tomato juice, from when the can had exploded. in the front room there was an old man that had nipped in from over the road to give her mother a good set of knives, cheep of course he said well it was more of a shout because he was partially deaf.
maria was happy to know all was well once again in her house

not all is what it seem's to be!

Amen, or just fudge off.

You should put two sentences into one post for a change.

And full stops.

You should use capital letters.

It left me in a state of confusion. Don't worry though, most things do these days.

ßulle†† wrote:
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what is all this about

dont know why i did this it came to me in my meadia
class while trying not to do my work with out being forund out by the teacher.

When walking home one day, Maria was looking forward to seeing her father for the first time in two days. As she had slept round at her mates house and had a wild party and been drunk , as she approached the door she noticed it was open, she walked in to the house and saw blood smeared up the walls of her parents house. She walked towards the bathroom to notice her father sitting on the toilet, with emended constipation from the stew he had eaten the night before. But that did not explain the blood stains up the walls, as she approached the kitchen she noticed her mum on her need with her head towards the ground, she had something in her hand, it was a tea towel she was mopping up some tomato juice, from when the can had exploded. in the front room there was an old man that had nipped in from over the road to give her mother a good set of knives, cheep of course he said well it was more of a shout because he was partially deaf.
maria was happy to know all was well once again in her house

not all is what it seem's to be!