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The sr easter story:
It was Easter yet again and the four children forest fan, biggie little, silent thunder and fooly coolly where getting really excited. Mother lindgren and father paradox where planning on taking them down to the annual south-weald park Easter egg hunt run by jae and cub!st.
They where also planning on doing a hunt in their back garden, until silent thunder ate all the eggs and left forest fan on the floor in a paddy for hours, so they had to take him to cub!st’s annual free easter hunt.
In the car on the way, biggie little knocked Fooly cooly’s mitten out the window resulting in tears. Rastabillyskank and afrojoe, the two uncles of the children, where also there, as well as their cousin notorious biggles.
Upon arriving, afrojoe had his baguette swiped by forest fan, and afrohoe lashed out by slapping his nephew on the head, and again, tears where involved. Lindgren told the both of them to shut up, and gave all the children a crème egg. They all showed each other “how do you eat your’s”, but the whole family was horrfied when silent thunder wiped his on his rear end and ate it.
As they enetered the magnificent hall, local mayor English_bloke greetd them, until biggie little yanked his tie, resulting in having his easter egg confiscated, and you guessed it, he started crying. An announcement was made by Jae, co-founder of the south-weald park easter egg competiton, and then the hunting began.
Silent thunder and biggie little teamed up and so did forest fan, who teamed up with fooly coolly. After switly finding the first egg, silent thunder ate it. After about 30 minutes, forest fan and fooly cooly found themselves joint leaders, along with Discodexy and wakka, who also had 103 eggs. Biggie little and silent thunder found themselves in the middle, while dumb pair azul and Just tinka walked into a tree, resulting on azul braking his Thomas the tank engine badge, and they refused to participate, as Azul was heart broken.
Edgy and grix thrives now found themselves in third, with er-no and blank in fourth. But then came a big surprise, this is where the whole of Sr-land where stunned. Over flew a spacecraft, and it appears that mr.snugly and ab100 had escaped from the dungeons of sr-towers and once again wanted to ake over the world! With his laser gun, mother lindgren and father paradox vanished, timmargh and proevo vanished from sight, and er-no andblank went missing.
However, silent thunder, forest fan, fool cooly and biggie little hid under a giant inflatable bunny, as Ab100 and mr.snuggly vanished with everyone except the four children, and just tinka, who had a hyperactive overdrive, and died.
As Ab1000 and mr.snugly taunted the likes of mystique and tiltawhirl, they had forgotten one thing, snuggly’s slippers. Then returned to Sr land and saw fooly coolly slipping into the ventalator, and quickly captured him. After they re-possesed snuggly’s lost mitten, they reclimbed their spaceshgip and went.
Can silent thunder, biggie little and forest fan save sr land from plight and restore a happy easter?
Find out in part 2 later this week!
It was Easter yet again and the four children forest fan, biggie little, silent thunder and fooly coolly where getting really excited. Mother lindgren and father paradox where planning on taking them down to the annual south-weald park Easter egg hunt run by jae and cub!st.
They where also planning on doing a hunt in their back garden, until silent thunder ate all the eggs and left forest fan on the floor in a paddy for hours, so they had to take him to cub!st’s annual free easter hunt.
In the car on the way, biggie little knocked Fooly cooly’s mitten out the window resulting in tears. Rastabillyskank and afrojoe, the two uncles of the children, where also there, as well as their cousin notorious biggles.
Upon arriving, afrojoe had his baguette swiped by forest fan, and afrohoe lashed out by slapping his nephew on the head, and again, tears where involved. Lindgren told the both of them to shut up, and gave all the children a crème egg. They all showed each other “how do you eat your’s”, but the whole family was horrfied when silent thunder wiped his on his rear end and ate it.
As they enetered the magnificent hall, local mayor English_bloke greetd them, until biggie little yanked his tie, resulting in having his easter egg confiscated, and you guessed it, he started crying. An announcement was made by Jae, co-founder of the south-weald park easter egg competiton, and then the hunting began.
Silent thunder and biggie little teamed up and so did forest fan, who teamed up with fooly coolly. After switly finding the first egg, silent thunder ate it. After about 30 minutes, forest fan and fooly cooly found themselves joint leaders, along with Discodexy and wakka, who also had 103 eggs. Biggie little and silent thunder found themselves in the middle, while dumb pair azul and Just tinka walked into a tree, resulting on azul braking his Thomas the tank engine badge, and they refused to participate, as Azul was heart broken.
Edgy and grix thrives now found themselves in third, with er-no and blank in fourth. But then came a big surprise, this is where the whole of Sr-land where stunned. Over flew a spacecraft, and it appears that mr.snugly and ab100 had escaped from the dungeons of sr-towers and once again wanted to ake over the world! With his laser gun, mother lindgren and father paradox vanished, timmargh and proevo vanished from sight, and er-no andblank went missing.
However, silent thunder, forest fan, fool cooly and biggie little hid under a giant inflatable bunny, as Ab100 and mr.snuggly vanished with everyone except the four children, and just tinka, who had a hyperactive overdrive, and died.
As Ab1000 and mr.snugly taunted the likes of mystique and tiltawhirl, they had forgotten one thing, snuggly’s slippers. Then returned to Sr land and saw fooly coolly slipping into the ventalator, and quickly captured him. After they re-possesed snuggly’s lost mitten, they reclimbed their spaceshgip and went.
Can silent thunder, biggie little and forest fan save sr land from plight and restore a happy easter?
Find out in part 2 later this week!
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FinalFantasyFanatic wrote:
> (though, again, kudos on the afrohoe typo - genius)
That was on purpose!!!!
> (though, again, kudos on the afrohoe typo - genius)
That was on purpose!!!!
KUDOS!
gerrid! wrote:
> I beg of you.
You what?
> I beg of you.
You what?
tip number 2: don't get carried away with telling a story, because a) the storyline is poor, and because b)you forget to include ANY jokes.
Except Afrohoe, which was the best thing about the whole ordeal.
Except Afrohoe, which was the best thing about the whole ordeal.
We're just pointing out the obvious:
You have no story-writing talent, nor that of the general writing and spelling (though, again, kudos on the afrohoe typo - genius)
You have no story-writing talent, nor that of the general writing and spelling (though, again, kudos on the afrohoe typo - genius)
don't ever include me in any of your stories, I beg of you.
Fooly Cooly wrote:
> what are you implying?
Gerrid = mong
FFF = mong
> what are you implying?
Gerrid = mong
FFF = mong
No one knows you well enough to be able to point out a particular defining character trait that can be exploited in a story
~oh what gerrid and i suppose you would have been a great opening character who attracted everyone to the story.
~Fine then FFF, you're off the list, and no Easter egg-scoffing, dragon slaying role for you then :-(
~Fine then FFF, you're off the list, and no Easter egg-scoffing, dragon slaying role for you then :-(
Muh.
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