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If anyone was unfortunate enough to pick up a Guardian and read what has been announced as 'the most gruesome story ever told' then you would understand why I have posted here.
In a way this story is revolutionary. Never before have i read something of this style in a nationwide paper and never before has it been so vivid.
Its explicit content was so much if i posted the story on here it would get me banned... but if you are a fan of literature or like me an english student.....
Read it.
Paradox read it.
*pukes* anyway - someone try find a link to the full version I have only found links to extracts.
Discuss at your own will....
Ginge x
In a way this story is revolutionary. Never before have i read something of this style in a nationwide paper and never before has it been so vivid.
Its explicit content was so much if i posted the story on here it would get me banned... but if you are a fan of literature or like me an english student.....
Read it.
Paradox read it.
*pukes* anyway - someone try find a link to the full version I have only found links to extracts.
Discuss at your own will....
Ginge x
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I agree with Mystique...
Because I bloody hope Paradox is pulling my leg :S
Because I bloody hope Paradox is pulling my leg :S
Lil Ginge wrote:
> Explain the sister being pregnant..
>
> It couldnt of been him for chlorine wouldnt let it happen.
>
> Explain por favor
It was his mate with the candle wax who knocked her up
> Explain the sister being pregnant..
>
> It couldnt of been him for chlorine wouldnt let it happen.
>
> Explain por favor
It was his mate with the candle wax who knocked her up
Some of the sentences/lines don't make sense to me, so I needed to re-read them.
But then, I do read too fast.
But then, I do read too fast.
RoJ wrote:
> if you wanted to read
> it and get the full meaning you would need to re-read again. And
> again.
Eh? I don't agree.
Unless I just don't get the full meaning :^)
> if you wanted to read
> it and get the full meaning you would need to re-read again. And
> again.
Eh? I don't agree.
Unless I just don't get the full meaning :^)
Puked?
How?
It isn't that bad.
The style in which it was written was dire and if you wanted to read it and get the full meaning you would need to re-read again. And again.
Honestly though, it wasn't that great.
How?
It isn't that bad.
The style in which it was written was dire and if you wanted to read it and get the full meaning you would need to re-read again. And again.
Honestly though, it wasn't that great.
It's been circulating around my school all day; one guy puked up, and most people couldn't finish it, but I'm proud I read it at the weekend and only flinched in deciding not to fantasise that day. Pretty good though
I don't know - I'm sure it' not easy to write something in that style, not while keeping a cool reflective narative.
It didn't read that well, but I think it's probably understandable.
It didn't read that well, but I think it's probably understandable.
It just seemed like a 'cheap thrill' style of story, relying more on the content and ignoring the style.
Lil Ginge wrote:
> Explain the sister being pregnant..
>
> It couldnt of been him for chlorine wouldnt let it happen.
>
> Explain por favor
****
It wasn't him/coulnd't be him
It's the worrying thought of "What if"
I think...
> Explain the sister being pregnant..
>
> It couldnt of been him for chlorine wouldnt let it happen.
>
> Explain por favor
****
It wasn't him/coulnd't be him
It's the worrying thought of "What if"
I think...
Explain the sister being pregnant..
It couldnt of been him for chlorine wouldnt let it happen.
Explain por favor
It couldnt of been him for chlorine wouldnt let it happen.
Explain por favor
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