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I’m home alone this half term, the parents have gone to the Lake District and my sister is staying with her friend. I have been downstairs all day doing history coursework and chatting on msn. I went upstairs around ten minutes ago to get a CD from my bedroom to find a man stood in my bedroom, I think he had just gained entry through my opened window. He stood transfixed like a rabbit in a car’s headlights for a moment, then began to charge towards me. Next to my bedroom door is a heavy metal CD rack which I picked up and just swung at him. I didn’t know what else to do, he would certainly have knocked me down and done some damage.
I thought it would just stun him while I called the police, which I have done, but he hasn’t moved yet. He is lying there, face down, with a crimson patch spreading around his head and staining my pale carpet. I checked him to make sure he didn’t have any weapons on him, I found a little flick knife which I have put away in a drawer and a pair of handcuffs which I placed on the table. It was when I was searching him I realised how cold he had gone. I thought at first it was because he was unconscious, but I felt his neck and there isn’t a pulse.
The police said they would be here as soon as possible but they still haven’t arrived. When will they be here? How am I going to tell my Dad? Am I a murderer?
I thought it would just stun him while I called the police, which I have done, but he hasn’t moved yet. He is lying there, face down, with a crimson patch spreading around his head and staining my pale carpet. I checked him to make sure he didn’t have any weapons on him, I found a little flick knife which I have put away in a drawer and a pair of handcuffs which I placed on the table. It was when I was searching him I realised how cold he had gone. I thought at first it was because he was unconscious, but I felt his neck and there isn’t a pulse.
The police said they would be here as soon as possible but they still haven’t arrived. When will they be here? How am I going to tell my Dad? Am I a murderer?
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That's what I said/shouted in a roundabout way.
Yes, roundabout.
Yes, roundabout.
Hahah.
Armour?
Don’t get me wrong, it was written well enough. It’s just the last time I killed I guy I was all like, “AAAAHHHHHHH MEERRR!”
Im not falling this time.
Its all a lie.
Its all a lie.
Or vaguely realistic. How big a run up does the burglar have considering the guy picks up a heavy cd rack (which to kill with one blow must be pretty heavy) and swings it...?
Yup, you're a murderer.
So totally banged up.
So totally banged up.
Not panic filed enough in my view.
I’m home alone this half term, the parents have gone to the Lake District and my sister is staying with her friend. I have been downstairs all day doing history coursework and chatting on msn. I went upstairs around ten minutes ago to get a CD from my bedroom to find a man stood in my bedroom, I think he had just gained entry through my opened window. He stood transfixed like a rabbit in a car’s headlights for a moment, then began to charge towards me. Next to my bedroom door is a heavy metal CD rack which I picked up and just swung at him. I didn’t know what else to do, he would certainly have knocked me down and done some damage.
I thought it would just stun him while I called the police, which I have done, but he hasn’t moved yet. He is lying there, face down, with a crimson patch spreading around his head and staining my pale carpet. I checked him to make sure he didn’t have any weapons on him, I found a little flick knife which I have put away in a drawer and a pair of handcuffs which I placed on the table. It was when I was searching him I realised how cold he had gone. I thought at first it was because he was unconscious, but I felt his neck and there isn’t a pulse.
The police said they would be here as soon as possible but they still haven’t arrived. When will they be here? How am I going to tell my Dad? Am I a murderer?
I thought it would just stun him while I called the police, which I have done, but he hasn’t moved yet. He is lying there, face down, with a crimson patch spreading around his head and staining my pale carpet. I checked him to make sure he didn’t have any weapons on him, I found a little flick knife which I have put away in a drawer and a pair of handcuffs which I placed on the table. It was when I was searching him I realised how cold he had gone. I thought at first it was because he was unconscious, but I felt his neck and there isn’t a pulse.
The police said they would be here as soon as possible but they still haven’t arrived. When will they be here? How am I going to tell my Dad? Am I a murderer?
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