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My life is a circus act and I am the dazzling finale
A tightrope act, distracted by commotion below
January Sales, ten percent off, and remote controls
Salesmen lie in wait, posing as friends but secretly foe.
I work like a space monkey in a job that I hate
When my pay packet comes I buy things I don’t need
Mp3 player, holds up to 8 hours of music!
Whilst others juggle two jobs, many mouths to feed.
Squandering cash on broadband, CD players, mobile phones
Digitally severed limbs, cash bleeding, social amputees
A techno era, binary, credit cards and buy now pay later
Worship in online churches, pray down on virtual knees
Solidarity is momentary, worn out, a thing of the past
Figures on spreadsheets in offices, currency now obsolete
Don’t forget to gather belongings, the circus is closing
Please take your change from the slot, downloading, complete.
A tightrope act, distracted by commotion below
January Sales, ten percent off, and remote controls
Salesmen lie in wait, posing as friends but secretly foe.
I work like a space monkey in a job that I hate
When my pay packet comes I buy things I don’t need
Mp3 player, holds up to 8 hours of music!
Whilst others juggle two jobs, many mouths to feed.
Squandering cash on broadband, CD players, mobile phones
Digitally severed limbs, cash bleeding, social amputees
A techno era, binary, credit cards and buy now pay later
Worship in online churches, pray down on virtual knees
Solidarity is momentary, worn out, a thing of the past
Figures on spreadsheets in offices, currency now obsolete
Don’t forget to gather belongings, the circus is closing
Please take your change from the slot, downloading, complete.
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Silën† Thundêr ™ wrote:
> Brilliant and a favorite line of mine has to be:
>
> Worship in online churches, pray down on virtual knees
>
> Thats truely superb.
To be honest, that's the only good line in there.
> Brilliant and a favorite line of mine has to be:
>
> Worship in online churches, pray down on virtual knees
>
> Thats truely superb.
To be honest, that's the only good line in there.
Brilliant and a favorite line of mine has to be:
Worship in online churches, pray down on virtual knees
Thats truely superb.
Worship in online churches, pray down on virtual knees
Thats truely superb.
and add Meka to that list as he is roaming about too :-)
Cheers Ic, now if Black Glove and Rosaline give me good feedback I will be entirely smug.
*Stamp of Approval*
That's one fine poem there, one of the best I remember in fact.
That's one fine poem there, one of the best I remember in fact.
Lil Ginge wrote:
> You are so diverse its ridiculously brilliant.
>
> Honostly kyle I say it once i say it twoce - write for a living,
> please
If you fund me then I'll shower you with sonnets each day. I'm expensive though.
> You are so diverse its ridiculously brilliant.
>
> Honostly kyle I say it once i say it twoce - write for a living,
> please
If you fund me then I'll shower you with sonnets each day. I'm expensive though.
You are so diverse its ridiculously brilliant.
Honostly kyle I say it once i say it twoce - write for a living, please
space monkey comparison kicks arrrse and kyle - please try something happy soon! :)
Honostly kyle I say it once i say it twoce - write for a living, please
space monkey comparison kicks arrrse and kyle - please try something happy soon! :)
Yeh it's good stuff.
Absolutely brilliant Kyle. By far your best work yet! I really liked it.
Oo-er, I haven't a clue what to say in reply to this. It seems very sort of airy-fairy if you know what I mean? Very sort of stylishly written with no real meaning just lots of literary techniques shoved in. I'm probably just too stupid to see the meaning but whatever lol :D
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