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Dear Denny,
I have decided to write this letter, y’ know because I have to tell y’ something. Well its about our relationship. I really don’t think its working out, y’ know, you going to the pub all the time, me studying, we just don’t see each other and get along with each other enough to be ‘couples’. I don’t want to heart your feelings Denny, I just feel it’s not right, an’ with you pressuring me into having a baby and to quite me studying, I just don’t like it.
I have done really well, I’m writin’ me own essays now, like those students. I can even do proper poetry, and not just scratch the surface of em no I go deeper and find out there true meaning.
Frank me tutor, he thinks I’m doing dead good, a proper student. I thought those students I used to see sitting on the green lush lawn where the ‘top dogs’ but no, there not, they just come out with rubbish and certainly don’t act knowledgeable.
I’m ashamed of you Denny, a nice kind loving man would have supported me through this, but no, you, you just sit at the bar all day drinking yer 8 different types of lager getting’ pi**ed and then wanting a baby.
I can’t handle y’ Denny, y’ do me head in. I like Frank, as he’s a supportive a well spoken man and above all a good teacher. He’s someone I can rely on and trust to be there for me. No im not having an affair if that’s what y’ thinkin’. Please Denny, this is my one and possibly only chance to go somewhere with me life, explore it to the full, please understand that. I cant do this if you don’t like me learning and becoming educated! I wanna get outta that hairdressers for good and be a top class girl and earning more in a day than you do in a month. A life of luxury is what I want and If I want it I shall get it!
See people like you Denny end up cleaning the streets because you couldn’t be bothered to learn, well I’m different I wanna be out there learning and learning, studying dead good poetry like Blake and writing essays on Chekov. I love it Denny, and your just holding me back with yer petty little ways and wanting me to quite. Well im not and I don’t want to be in a relationship with you anymore Denny. We just don’t go together as well as I thought we did.
Perhaps now y’ might understand why people leave you and move on to better places and do better things.
Sorry Denny, I have to go, Franks meeting me soon to find out what results I got for my exams, not that you’d care.
Rita
I have decided to write this letter, y’ know because I have to tell y’ something. Well its about our relationship. I really don’t think its working out, y’ know, you going to the pub all the time, me studying, we just don’t see each other and get along with each other enough to be ‘couples’. I don’t want to heart your feelings Denny, I just feel it’s not right, an’ with you pressuring me into having a baby and to quite me studying, I just don’t like it.
I have done really well, I’m writin’ me own essays now, like those students. I can even do proper poetry, and not just scratch the surface of em no I go deeper and find out there true meaning.
Frank me tutor, he thinks I’m doing dead good, a proper student. I thought those students I used to see sitting on the green lush lawn where the ‘top dogs’ but no, there not, they just come out with rubbish and certainly don’t act knowledgeable.
I’m ashamed of you Denny, a nice kind loving man would have supported me through this, but no, you, you just sit at the bar all day drinking yer 8 different types of lager getting’ pi**ed and then wanting a baby.
I can’t handle y’ Denny, y’ do me head in. I like Frank, as he’s a supportive a well spoken man and above all a good teacher. He’s someone I can rely on and trust to be there for me. No im not having an affair if that’s what y’ thinkin’. Please Denny, this is my one and possibly only chance to go somewhere with me life, explore it to the full, please understand that. I cant do this if you don’t like me learning and becoming educated! I wanna get outta that hairdressers for good and be a top class girl and earning more in a day than you do in a month. A life of luxury is what I want and If I want it I shall get it!
See people like you Denny end up cleaning the streets because you couldn’t be bothered to learn, well I’m different I wanna be out there learning and learning, studying dead good poetry like Blake and writing essays on Chekov. I love it Denny, and your just holding me back with yer petty little ways and wanting me to quite. Well im not and I don’t want to be in a relationship with you anymore Denny. We just don’t go together as well as I thought we did.
Perhaps now y’ might understand why people leave you and move on to better places and do better things.
Sorry Denny, I have to go, Franks meeting me soon to find out what results I got for my exams, not that you’d care.
Rita
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i dont know where the hell that random "thing" came from, but i will consider it in my sleep. good night
The punctuation is also perfect in those sentences also dear boy!
Proper english is a standard procedure. Without we'd be nowhere, with it we'd get everwhere. Now I know to talk properly and not 'txt talk' as you put it. But wouldn't it be easier to write in txt talk, hence everybody does it, am i correct?
Now the best way to get rid of spelling mistakes (i cant spell so this will apply to me!) is to double check what has been written!
Now i know the spelling is correct on here so you dont need to comment on that!...
Now the best way to get rid of spelling mistakes (i cant spell so this will apply to me!) is to double check what has been written!
Now i know the spelling is correct on here so you dont need to comment on that!...
One story?
Or two?
Or two?
I am the bestest at English here, after Black Glove, Meka Dragon, Grix Thraves, Mojojojo, Gerrid, Microchips, RoJ, and a whole host of others.
English Bloke is merely an amature who let the nice comments on 1 story go to his head and has since been floating around like a balloon thinking he is a literary master. We'll see about that
Wax on, wax off.
*paints fence*
English Bloke is merely an amature who let the nice comments on 1 story go to his head and has since been floating around like a balloon thinking he is a literary master. We'll see about that
Wax on, wax off.
*paints fence*
Yes, huh?
neither english bloke, myself or kyz should feel insulted. i was merely making an observation about life and english. how people are always waiting to give a come back etc.
anyways kido, im not joking when i say read recite and use a dictionary. it helps. dont over rely on word.
anyways kido, im not joking when i say read recite and use a dictionary. it helps. dont over rely on word.
Did anyone get the feel of a particular eminem song here?
p.s NOOOOOO
p.s NOOOOOO
Dont know, cos i dont know how old you are and well, i suppose practice makes perfect but nobobdy is perfect!
It was a very restrictive and hard to write story. I dont think I could create a good story in a letter form, althought I am writing a piece on "A guide to putting on socks" for my A level creative writing.
Should be, erm, bad.
Should be, erm, bad.
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