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Dear Denny,
I have decided to write this letter, y’ know because I have to tell y’ something. Well its about our relationship. I really don’t think its working out, y’ know, you going to the pub all the time, me studying, we just don’t see each other and get along with each other enough to be ‘couples’. I don’t want to heart your feelings Denny, I just feel it’s not right, an’ with you pressuring me into having a baby and to quite me studying, I just don’t like it.
I have done really well, I’m writin’ me own essays now, like those students. I can even do proper poetry, and not just scratch the surface of em no I go deeper and find out there true meaning.
Frank me tutor, he thinks I’m doing dead good, a proper student. I thought those students I used to see sitting on the green lush lawn where the ‘top dogs’ but no, there not, they just come out with rubbish and certainly don’t act knowledgeable.
I’m ashamed of you Denny, a nice kind loving man would have supported me through this, but no, you, you just sit at the bar all day drinking yer 8 different types of lager getting’ pi**ed and then wanting a baby.
I can’t handle y’ Denny, y’ do me head in. I like Frank, as he’s a supportive a well spoken man and above all a good teacher. He’s someone I can rely on and trust to be there for me. No im not having an affair if that’s what y’ thinkin’. Please Denny, this is my one and possibly only chance to go somewhere with me life, explore it to the full, please understand that. I cant do this if you don’t like me learning and becoming educated! I wanna get outta that hairdressers for good and be a top class girl and earning more in a day than you do in a month. A life of luxury is what I want and If I want it I shall get it!
See people like you Denny end up cleaning the streets because you couldn’t be bothered to learn, well I’m different I wanna be out there learning and learning, studying dead good poetry like Blake and writing essays on Chekov. I love it Denny, and your just holding me back with yer petty little ways and wanting me to quite. Well im not and I don’t want to be in a relationship with you anymore Denny. We just don’t go together as well as I thought we did.
Perhaps now y’ might understand why people leave you and move on to better places and do better things.
Sorry Denny, I have to go, Franks meeting me soon to find out what results I got for my exams, not that you’d care.
Rita
I have decided to write this letter, y’ know because I have to tell y’ something. Well its about our relationship. I really don’t think its working out, y’ know, you going to the pub all the time, me studying, we just don’t see each other and get along with each other enough to be ‘couples’. I don’t want to heart your feelings Denny, I just feel it’s not right, an’ with you pressuring me into having a baby and to quite me studying, I just don’t like it.
I have done really well, I’m writin’ me own essays now, like those students. I can even do proper poetry, and not just scratch the surface of em no I go deeper and find out there true meaning.
Frank me tutor, he thinks I’m doing dead good, a proper student. I thought those students I used to see sitting on the green lush lawn where the ‘top dogs’ but no, there not, they just come out with rubbish and certainly don’t act knowledgeable.
I’m ashamed of you Denny, a nice kind loving man would have supported me through this, but no, you, you just sit at the bar all day drinking yer 8 different types of lager getting’ pi**ed and then wanting a baby.
I can’t handle y’ Denny, y’ do me head in. I like Frank, as he’s a supportive a well spoken man and above all a good teacher. He’s someone I can rely on and trust to be there for me. No im not having an affair if that’s what y’ thinkin’. Please Denny, this is my one and possibly only chance to go somewhere with me life, explore it to the full, please understand that. I cant do this if you don’t like me learning and becoming educated! I wanna get outta that hairdressers for good and be a top class girl and earning more in a day than you do in a month. A life of luxury is what I want and If I want it I shall get it!
See people like you Denny end up cleaning the streets because you couldn’t be bothered to learn, well I’m different I wanna be out there learning and learning, studying dead good poetry like Blake and writing essays on Chekov. I love it Denny, and your just holding me back with yer petty little ways and wanting me to quite. Well im not and I don’t want to be in a relationship with you anymore Denny. We just don’t go together as well as I thought we did.
Perhaps now y’ might understand why people leave you and move on to better places and do better things.
Sorry Denny, I have to go, Franks meeting me soon to find out what results I got for my exams, not that you’d care.
Rita
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Dear Denny,
I have decided to write this letter, y’ know because I have to tell y’ something. Well its about our relationship. I really don’t think its working out, y’ know, you going to the pub all the time, me studying, we just don’t see each other and get along with each other enough to be ‘couples’. I don’t want to heart your feelings Denny, I just feel it’s not right, an’ with you pressuring me into having a baby and to quite me studying, I just don’t like it.
I have done really well, I’m writin’ me own essays now, like those students. I can even do proper poetry, and not just scratch the surface of em no I go deeper and find out there true meaning.
Frank me tutor, he thinks I’m doing dead good, a proper student. I thought those students I used to see sitting on the green lush lawn where the ‘top dogs’ but no, there not, they just come out with rubbish and certainly don’t act knowledgeable.
I’m ashamed of you Denny, a nice kind loving man would have supported me through this, but no, you, you just sit at the bar all day drinking yer 8 different types of lager getting’ pi**ed and then wanting a baby.
I can’t handle y’ Denny, y’ do me head in. I like Frank, as he’s a supportive a well spoken man and above all a good teacher. He’s someone I can rely on and trust to be there for me. No im not having an affair if that’s what y’ thinkin’. Please Denny, this is my one and possibly only chance to go somewhere with me life, explore it to the full, please understand that. I cant do this if you don’t like me learning and becoming educated! I wanna get outta that hairdressers for good and be a top class girl and earning more in a day than you do in a month. A life of luxury is what I want and If I want it I shall get it!
See people like you Denny end up cleaning the streets because you couldn’t be bothered to learn, well I’m different I wanna be out there learning and learning, studying dead good poetry like Blake and writing essays on Chekov. I love it Denny, and your just holding me back with yer petty little ways and wanting me to quite. Well im not and I don’t want to be in a relationship with you anymore Denny. We just don’t go together as well as I thought we did.
Perhaps now y’ might understand why people leave you and move on to better places and do better things.
Sorry Denny, I have to go, Franks meeting me soon to find out what results I got for my exams, not that you’d care.
Rita
I have decided to write this letter, y’ know because I have to tell y’ something. Well its about our relationship. I really don’t think its working out, y’ know, you going to the pub all the time, me studying, we just don’t see each other and get along with each other enough to be ‘couples’. I don’t want to heart your feelings Denny, I just feel it’s not right, an’ with you pressuring me into having a baby and to quite me studying, I just don’t like it.
I have done really well, I’m writin’ me own essays now, like those students. I can even do proper poetry, and not just scratch the surface of em no I go deeper and find out there true meaning.
Frank me tutor, he thinks I’m doing dead good, a proper student. I thought those students I used to see sitting on the green lush lawn where the ‘top dogs’ but no, there not, they just come out with rubbish and certainly don’t act knowledgeable.
I’m ashamed of you Denny, a nice kind loving man would have supported me through this, but no, you, you just sit at the bar all day drinking yer 8 different types of lager getting’ pi**ed and then wanting a baby.
I can’t handle y’ Denny, y’ do me head in. I like Frank, as he’s a supportive a well spoken man and above all a good teacher. He’s someone I can rely on and trust to be there for me. No im not having an affair if that’s what y’ thinkin’. Please Denny, this is my one and possibly only chance to go somewhere with me life, explore it to the full, please understand that. I cant do this if you don’t like me learning and becoming educated! I wanna get outta that hairdressers for good and be a top class girl and earning more in a day than you do in a month. A life of luxury is what I want and If I want it I shall get it!
See people like you Denny end up cleaning the streets because you couldn’t be bothered to learn, well I’m different I wanna be out there learning and learning, studying dead good poetry like Blake and writing essays on Chekov. I love it Denny, and your just holding me back with yer petty little ways and wanting me to quite. Well im not and I don’t want to be in a relationship with you anymore Denny. We just don’t go together as well as I thought we did.
Perhaps now y’ might understand why people leave you and move on to better places and do better things.
Sorry Denny, I have to go, Franks meeting me soon to find out what results I got for my exams, not that you’d care.
Rita
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Dear Rita,
Learn how to spell and not switch between tenses every other paragraph and I will write you back a propper good reply and and answer y' question propperly.
Denny.
Learn how to spell and not switch between tenses every other paragraph and I will write you back a propper good reply and and answer y' question propperly.
Denny.
i know i just realised about the spelling.
Its a letter, you dont have to be perfect to write a letter, right!
oh well i was bored, and it happened to be a letter i wrote for homework for english, infact my english teacher thought it was well good and i got top marks!
Its a letter, you dont have to be perfect to write a letter, right!
oh well i was bored, and it happened to be a letter i wrote for homework for english, infact my english teacher thought it was well good and i got top marks!
What year are you?
I gave my English teachers some of my stories and he told me they needed work. Pfft.
I gave my English teachers some of my stories and he told me they needed work. Pfft.
yr 10
Read that made my eyes water more then the CS gas.
Just kidding.
The spelling wasn’t too bad. Just write it in word if you start to struggle.
Just kidding.
The spelling wasn’t too bad. Just write it in word if you start to struggle.
*Reading
because im big headed and ego tistic i regularly correct peoples english. (even though i find it unbelievably annoying myself). however, when you are correcting someone else's work, you have to make sure your words arent screwed up aswell.
If that was aimed at me, I laugh at you.
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