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Seen as though I have just joined SRW I am writing a test match to see if I am any good at writing matches.
Triple H Vs The Hurricane : Normal Match:
“Stand back there’s a hurricane coming through!” The Hurricane comes onto the top of the ramp and walks down to the ring. Just before he gets in he takes off his mask and puts it on a child. He gets into the ring and gets a microphone. Just as he is about to speak Triple H’s music starts, The Hurricane doesn’t look too pleased about this. Triple H comes out and walks down the ramp and into the ring; he walks over to the nearest turnbuckle and steps onto the second turnbuckle, takes a drink out of his water and spits it out.
The bell rings, and Triple H and The Hurricane get into a grapple; Triple H wins it but throwing The Hurricane to the floor. The Hurricane quickly gets back up and tries to clothesline Triple H, but Triple H doesn’t move. The Hurricane tries again but the same thing happens, Triple H is now grinning. This time The Hurricane runs into the ropes, OH WHAT A CLOTHESLINE, by Triple H on The Hurricane who lands with a THUD!
The Hurricane is stumbling as he is getting back up. When he gets back up Triple H gives him a left handed punch, right handed punch, left, right, and The Hurricane ducks the left handed punch, A LOW BLOW, by The Hurricane on Triple H, which the referee doesn’t see, and The Hurricane gives Triple H a DDT.
The Hurricane goes outside of the ring and gets his cape and puts it on, and he goes over to the nearest turnbuckle and steps on the top turnbuckle. He waits until Triple H gets up, and when he gets up The Hurricane jumps off the top rope and does a cross body, but Triple H catches him and WHAT A FALL-A-WAY SLAM, making The Hurricane land on the other side of the ring. Triple H goes over for the pin fall, 1...2, kicks out, that was 2 and a half.
Triple H rolls out of the ring, and shoves the announcer off of his chair and picks the chair up and folds it up. He gets back into the ring, just as The Hurricane is getting back up. He swings the chair at The Hurricane, but The Hurricane ducks, AND TRIPLE H HITS THE REFEREE WITH THE CHAIR!
Triple H drops the chair, and The Hurricane gets Triple H by the throat, getting ready for the chokeslam, over the chair. He tries but he can’t, Triple H elbows The Hurricane a couple of times until he lets go. Triple H kicks The Hurricane in the stomach, so he bends over, gets him in a pedigree position, PEDIGREE ON THE CHAIR! Triple H throws the chair out of the ring, and hooks The Hurricane’s leg. The referee comes around and counts a slow count of 1.....2.....3!!!
“The winner of this match, by pin fall, Triple H!” announces the announcer. Triple H steps out of the ring, grabs a microphone and says “Let this be a lesson to any of my up-coming opponents!” What’s this? Out of the crowd comes Rosie, with a sledgehammer, and his S. H. I. T. costume. Frome behind HE HITS TRIPLE H WITH A SLEDGEHAMMER! Rosie then goes over to help The Hurricane up.
Can you please tell me what you thought of the test match, which is my first, and tell me if it is any good or not.
Triple H Vs The Hurricane : Normal Match:
“Stand back there’s a hurricane coming through!” The Hurricane comes onto the top of the ramp and walks down to the ring. Just before he gets in he takes off his mask and puts it on a child. He gets into the ring and gets a microphone. Just as he is about to speak Triple H’s music starts, The Hurricane doesn’t look too pleased about this. Triple H comes out and walks down the ramp and into the ring; he walks over to the nearest turnbuckle and steps onto the second turnbuckle, takes a drink out of his water and spits it out.
The bell rings, and Triple H and The Hurricane get into a grapple; Triple H wins it but throwing The Hurricane to the floor. The Hurricane quickly gets back up and tries to clothesline Triple H, but Triple H doesn’t move. The Hurricane tries again but the same thing happens, Triple H is now grinning. This time The Hurricane runs into the ropes, OH WHAT A CLOTHESLINE, by Triple H on The Hurricane who lands with a THUD!
The Hurricane is stumbling as he is getting back up. When he gets back up Triple H gives him a left handed punch, right handed punch, left, right, and The Hurricane ducks the left handed punch, A LOW BLOW, by The Hurricane on Triple H, which the referee doesn’t see, and The Hurricane gives Triple H a DDT.
The Hurricane goes outside of the ring and gets his cape and puts it on, and he goes over to the nearest turnbuckle and steps on the top turnbuckle. He waits until Triple H gets up, and when he gets up The Hurricane jumps off the top rope and does a cross body, but Triple H catches him and WHAT A FALL-A-WAY SLAM, making The Hurricane land on the other side of the ring. Triple H goes over for the pin fall, 1...2, kicks out, that was 2 and a half.
Triple H rolls out of the ring, and shoves the announcer off of his chair and picks the chair up and folds it up. He gets back into the ring, just as The Hurricane is getting back up. He swings the chair at The Hurricane, but The Hurricane ducks, AND TRIPLE H HITS THE REFEREE WITH THE CHAIR!
Triple H drops the chair, and The Hurricane gets Triple H by the throat, getting ready for the chokeslam, over the chair. He tries but he can’t, Triple H elbows The Hurricane a couple of times until he lets go. Triple H kicks The Hurricane in the stomach, so he bends over, gets him in a pedigree position, PEDIGREE ON THE CHAIR! Triple H throws the chair out of the ring, and hooks The Hurricane’s leg. The referee comes around and counts a slow count of 1.....2.....3!!!
“The winner of this match, by pin fall, Triple H!” announces the announcer. Triple H steps out of the ring, grabs a microphone and says “Let this be a lesson to any of my up-coming opponents!” What’s this? Out of the crowd comes Rosie, with a sledgehammer, and his S. H. I. T. costume. Frome behind HE HITS TRIPLE H WITH A SLEDGEHAMMER! Rosie then goes over to help The Hurricane up.
Can you please tell me what you thought of the test match, which is my first, and tell me if it is any good or not.
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So what your saying is you like the match but did not like Triple H winning.
That was crap. HHH won.
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Err, well, the match was okay but the result...*shakes head*
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Err, well, the match was okay but the result...*shakes head*
For my first few matches could you please tell me who wins and how they, until I get more into the story line.
Should I post my matches in a new topic?
Should I post my matches in a new topic?
Thanks Ant, yeah I would like to become an official writer.
Should I add more paragraphs to this match, or on future matches?
Should I add more paragraphs to this match, or on future matches?
Quality was good, on average matches are a little longer but I would say that was easily good enough. {:)
Do you want to be an official writer? I'll give you a proper match next week if you like. Add a paragraph or two and you have a very decent match on your hands.
Do you want to be an official writer? I'll give you a proper match next week if you like. Add a paragraph or two and you have a very decent match on your hands.
Well, um, I'm no expert on matches but from the SRW matches I've read I think yours was too short. Maybe you should re-write it and make it bigger.
Seen as though I have just joined SRW I am writing a test match to see if I am any good at writing matches.
Triple H Vs The Hurricane : Normal Match:
“Stand back there’s a hurricane coming through!” The Hurricane comes onto the top of the ramp and walks down to the ring. Just before he gets in he takes off his mask and puts it on a child. He gets into the ring and gets a microphone. Just as he is about to speak Triple H’s music starts, The Hurricane doesn’t look too pleased about this. Triple H comes out and walks down the ramp and into the ring; he walks over to the nearest turnbuckle and steps onto the second turnbuckle, takes a drink out of his water and spits it out.
The bell rings, and Triple H and The Hurricane get into a grapple; Triple H wins it but throwing The Hurricane to the floor. The Hurricane quickly gets back up and tries to clothesline Triple H, but Triple H doesn’t move. The Hurricane tries again but the same thing happens, Triple H is now grinning. This time The Hurricane runs into the ropes, OH WHAT A CLOTHESLINE, by Triple H on The Hurricane who lands with a THUD!
The Hurricane is stumbling as he is getting back up. When he gets back up Triple H gives him a left handed punch, right handed punch, left, right, and The Hurricane ducks the left handed punch, A LOW BLOW, by The Hurricane on Triple H, which the referee doesn’t see, and The Hurricane gives Triple H a DDT.
The Hurricane goes outside of the ring and gets his cape and puts it on, and he goes over to the nearest turnbuckle and steps on the top turnbuckle. He waits until Triple H gets up, and when he gets up The Hurricane jumps off the top rope and does a cross body, but Triple H catches him and WHAT A FALL-A-WAY SLAM, making The Hurricane land on the other side of the ring. Triple H goes over for the pin fall, 1...2, kicks out, that was 2 and a half.
Triple H rolls out of the ring, and shoves the announcer off of his chair and picks the chair up and folds it up. He gets back into the ring, just as The Hurricane is getting back up. He swings the chair at The Hurricane, but The Hurricane ducks, AND TRIPLE H HITS THE REFEREE WITH THE CHAIR!
Triple H drops the chair, and The Hurricane gets Triple H by the throat, getting ready for the chokeslam, over the chair. He tries but he can’t, Triple H elbows The Hurricane a couple of times until he lets go. Triple H kicks The Hurricane in the stomach, so he bends over, gets him in a pedigree position, PEDIGREE ON THE CHAIR! Triple H throws the chair out of the ring, and hooks The Hurricane’s leg. The referee comes around and counts a slow count of 1.....2.....3!!!
“The winner of this match, by pin fall, Triple H!” announces the announcer. Triple H steps out of the ring, grabs a microphone and says “Let this be a lesson to any of my up-coming opponents!” What’s this? Out of the crowd comes Rosie, with a sledgehammer, and his S. H. I. T. costume. Frome behind HE HITS TRIPLE H WITH A SLEDGEHAMMER! Rosie then goes over to help The Hurricane up.
Can you please tell me what you thought of the test match, which is my first, and tell me if it is any good or not.
Triple H Vs The Hurricane : Normal Match:
“Stand back there’s a hurricane coming through!” The Hurricane comes onto the top of the ramp and walks down to the ring. Just before he gets in he takes off his mask and puts it on a child. He gets into the ring and gets a microphone. Just as he is about to speak Triple H’s music starts, The Hurricane doesn’t look too pleased about this. Triple H comes out and walks down the ramp and into the ring; he walks over to the nearest turnbuckle and steps onto the second turnbuckle, takes a drink out of his water and spits it out.
The bell rings, and Triple H and The Hurricane get into a grapple; Triple H wins it but throwing The Hurricane to the floor. The Hurricane quickly gets back up and tries to clothesline Triple H, but Triple H doesn’t move. The Hurricane tries again but the same thing happens, Triple H is now grinning. This time The Hurricane runs into the ropes, OH WHAT A CLOTHESLINE, by Triple H on The Hurricane who lands with a THUD!
The Hurricane is stumbling as he is getting back up. When he gets back up Triple H gives him a left handed punch, right handed punch, left, right, and The Hurricane ducks the left handed punch, A LOW BLOW, by The Hurricane on Triple H, which the referee doesn’t see, and The Hurricane gives Triple H a DDT.
The Hurricane goes outside of the ring and gets his cape and puts it on, and he goes over to the nearest turnbuckle and steps on the top turnbuckle. He waits until Triple H gets up, and when he gets up The Hurricane jumps off the top rope and does a cross body, but Triple H catches him and WHAT A FALL-A-WAY SLAM, making The Hurricane land on the other side of the ring. Triple H goes over for the pin fall, 1...2, kicks out, that was 2 and a half.
Triple H rolls out of the ring, and shoves the announcer off of his chair and picks the chair up and folds it up. He gets back into the ring, just as The Hurricane is getting back up. He swings the chair at The Hurricane, but The Hurricane ducks, AND TRIPLE H HITS THE REFEREE WITH THE CHAIR!
Triple H drops the chair, and The Hurricane gets Triple H by the throat, getting ready for the chokeslam, over the chair. He tries but he can’t, Triple H elbows The Hurricane a couple of times until he lets go. Triple H kicks The Hurricane in the stomach, so he bends over, gets him in a pedigree position, PEDIGREE ON THE CHAIR! Triple H throws the chair out of the ring, and hooks The Hurricane’s leg. The referee comes around and counts a slow count of 1.....2.....3!!!
“The winner of this match, by pin fall, Triple H!” announces the announcer. Triple H steps out of the ring, grabs a microphone and says “Let this be a lesson to any of my up-coming opponents!” What’s this? Out of the crowd comes Rosie, with a sledgehammer, and his S. H. I. T. costume. Frome behind HE HITS TRIPLE H WITH A SLEDGEHAMMER! Rosie then goes over to help The Hurricane up.
Can you please tell me what you thought of the test match, which is my first, and tell me if it is any good or not.
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