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MoJo's latest script. Very, very rough, considering I came up with the idea and wrote it all in just a few hours.
Won't take you long to read, it looks bigger than it is (story of my life)
Gonna shoot it in my house sometime soon (it's written to suit my house) possibly before I go away to Thailand, though I might leave it until I get back. It'll be a low- I mean no budget affair. Should be a laugh.
Tell me what you think of it.
MoJo's latest script. Very, very rough, considering I came up with the idea and wrote it all in just a few hours.
Won't take you long to read, it looks bigger than it is (story of my life)
Gonna shoot it in my house sometime soon (it's written to suit my house) possibly before I go away to Thailand, though I might leave it until I get back. It'll be a low- I mean no budget affair. Should be a laugh.
Tell me what you think of it.
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Hmmm... brains.
Better would be two posh zombies in the midst of it all.
Elizabeth: "I know we're supposed to crave brains, but frankly without Rupert here I wouldn't feel comfortable eating some strange new meat..."
Zara: "Oh gosh, I KNOW! Imagine if we ate the nerves without realising! Or used the wrong spoon!"
Zombie #23154: "Muuuuuuuuh. Braaaaaaaaains. No spoooooooon."
Elizabeth: "But how will we spread on the tartar sauce?"
Elizabeth: "I know we're supposed to crave brains, but frankly without Rupert here I wouldn't feel comfortable eating some strange new meat..."
Zara: "Oh gosh, I KNOW! Imagine if we ate the nerves without realising! Or used the wrong spoon!"
Zombie #23154: "Muuuuuuuuh. Braaaaaaaaains. No spoooooooon."
Elizabeth: "But how will we spread on the tartar sauce?"
I want to write a zombie movie, only with two super-intelligent posh zombies that are leading the other brainless ones. Obviously they look down upon their inferior minions.
"I know you want brains, but you don't have to keep saying it. Honestly, everyone knows what you want, you're a bloody zombie."
"Next person who says 'brraaaains' gets a dead arm."
etc.
"I know you want brains, but you don't have to keep saying it. Honestly, everyone knows what you want, you're a bloody zombie."
"Next person who says 'brraaaains' gets a dead arm."
etc.
Features every Zombie film cliche in the book, still pretty good though.
Your zombie dialogue is inspired.
Once again the geocities page does not wanna load on my computer.
Good, very good.
Ending was fairly well done, but i guess if youve seen a few zombie films before you can see it coming. Still good though.
Ending was fairly well done, but i guess if youve seen a few zombie films before you can see it coming. Still good though.
http://www.geocities.com/rumneyuk/zombies.txt
MoJo's latest script. Very, very rough, considering I came up with the idea and wrote it all in just a few hours.
Won't take you long to read, it looks bigger than it is (story of my life)
Gonna shoot it in my house sometime soon (it's written to suit my house) possibly before I go away to Thailand, though I might leave it until I get back. It'll be a low- I mean no budget affair. Should be a laugh.
Tell me what you think of it.
MoJo's latest script. Very, very rough, considering I came up with the idea and wrote it all in just a few hours.
Won't take you long to read, it looks bigger than it is (story of my life)
Gonna shoot it in my house sometime soon (it's written to suit my house) possibly before I go away to Thailand, though I might leave it until I get back. It'll be a low- I mean no budget affair. Should be a laugh.
Tell me what you think of it.
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