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MoJo's latest script. Very, very rough, considering I came up with the idea and wrote it all in just a few hours.
Won't take you long to read, it looks bigger than it is (story of my life)
Gonna shoot it in my house sometime soon (it's written to suit my house) possibly before I go away to Thailand, though I might leave it until I get back. It'll be a low- I mean no budget affair. Should be a laugh.
Tell me what you think of it.
Still www.geocities.com/rumneyuk/zombies.txt
New scenes, new dialogue. Still not the finished product, though.
Definitely better than the kung-fu guy against the muggers.
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Oh, and he was a boxer. And they were radgies, not muggers, heh.
Muuurgh.
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Nice touch.
2. What is a POV shot?
3. Not bad at all. Definitely better than the kung-fu guy against the muggers.
> "I know > keep saying it. Honestly, everyone knows what you want, you're a
> bloody zombie."
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> "Next person who says 'brraaaains' gets a dead arm."
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> etc.
Hey snuggly did you write "the Mummy", sounds like you did.
Groundskeeper Willy - Ach! Zombies!
Now I can't seem to type properely and the keyboards seems smaller and my hands hurt... damn. Infared rays.