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"Just about presentable"

Any of you lot remember ages ago i put up a post saying i had a new site? (Action movies). Well, a couple of people visited and then I took it offline to redo the whole thing and stick some more content on.

I think it looks just about presentable.

I'd appreciate it if any of you could have a look around so I can get some feedback. Oh and there's a guestbook (Hint, Hint).

*waits to be gunned down*

Oh, the address is www.pulsecinema.0catch.com

Any of you lot remember ages ago i put up a post saying i had a new site? (Action movies). Well, a couple of people visited and then I took it offline to redo the whole thing and stick some more content on.

I think it looks just about presentable.

I'd appreciate it if any of you could have a look around so I can get some feedback. Oh and there's a guestbook (Hint, Hint).

*waits to be gunned down*

Oh, the address is www.pulsecinema.0catch.com

if you add a forum in it will be really good just from having a quick look it looks pretty good.All the recomendation are pretty good to.you've done well,it looks really good.

Thanks.

Message board coming soon.

I don't like the logo...it has a white background, when the actual site has a black one. Other then that, can't see too much wrong with it. I personally think there's too much writing on the homepage.

I will make you a new logo.

There's no pressure to use it, but it should be an improvement on what youve got.

www.geocities.com/gamecubewatch/pulsecinema

I like it Cooks...made in Paint? It's a tad bloggy...but improved none-the-less

the actual reviews are not very good, especially the Chainsaw Masacre, but most internet "critics" are the same, unknowledgable style of writing. its not really a style, its like reading year 10 english coursework. maybe even worse.
but at least you are trying, everyone should try.

cookie monster wrote:
> I will make you a new logo.
>
> There's no pressure to use it, but it should be an improvement on what
> youve got.

The logo's fantastic- thanks very much, i appreciate it. I'll stick it on either tonight or tomorrow.

Cheers.

Professor Griff wrote:
> the actual reviews are not very good, especially the Chainsaw Masacre,
> but most internet "critics" are the same, unknowledgable
> style of writing. its not really a style, its like reading year 10
> english coursework. maybe even worse.
> but at least you are trying, everyone should try.

Yep, i am trying. So what if the reviews could do with some touching up here and there- you only get better through practice. Come back in a year and they'll probably be twice the length and much more professional- I ain't gonna roll up in a ball and die because I found out the content ain't that fantastic, I'm just gonna try and improve it.

I've bought a couple of Empire magazines for inspiration.