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once there was a goat that was the size of a goldfish and his owner flushed him down the toilet.When in the sewer the radioactive juices made him grow sharp teeth and made him the size of a normal sized goat...When down in the sewer he met mutant goats,the mutant goats talked to him"hello reguler sized goat with sharp teeth" rsgwst(reguler sized goat with sharp teeth) said "hi ugly mutant goats" the umg's(ugly mutant goats) said we are very very hungry and its been months since we ate a human.So would you go back up and eat loads of humans then regergitate them down the toilet" rsgwst thought about it he said "sure i know just where to start...".It was agreed that rsgwst would go eat aload of humans then puke them down the toilet.
rsgwst went back to the surface and knocked on his former owners front door his former owners mother opened the door she screamed."ahhhhhhhhhhh" then rsgwst bit her head of then slowly ate her whole body,her husband shouted"honey whats taking so long"he then saw a goat and blood on the floor.He walked over to the goat then the goat bit his privates...of,rsgwst slowly ate him then he went looking for his owner.rsgwst walked up the stairs and went to his owners door then looked through the keyhole...
if you like this story then i will write more...if you dont like it then i wont...post and say if you like it and want more or hate it and want no more....
rsgwst went back to the surface and knocked on his former owners front door his former owners mother opened the door she screamed."ahhhhhhhhhhh" then rsgwst bit her head of then slowly ate her whole body,her husband shouted"honey whats taking so long"he then saw a goat and blood on the floor.He walked over to the goat then the goat bit his privates...of,rsgwst slowly ate him then he went looking for his owner.rsgwst walked up the stairs and went to his owners door then looked through the keyhole...
if you like this story then i will write more...if you dont like it then i wont...post and say if you like it and want more or hate it and want no more....
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no it makes it stupid if he waited to poo them(which would take hours) they'd lose all the vitamins and they'd just be eating usless crap...hes just eating them then puking them out...thats how birds feed there babys...
I just added a twist upon the original idea. I did read it by the way.
Cid Vilante wrote:
> I think it's "off" not "of". Just a typo you made
> twice. This is the sort of story I would right for my English teacher
> but it would be to the point even though there was no point. Make it
> just a few sentances long and then it's better.
>
> Goat fell down the sewer. Goat found mutant goat's that made him eat
> people. Goat went and ate lots of people then pooped them back out.
> They all ate his poo and people poo too. The End.
did you even read it....he pukes them out not poos them since you didn't even read it im not even gunna take notice of what you just typed.
> I think it's "off" not "of". Just a typo you made
> twice. This is the sort of story I would right for my English teacher
> but it would be to the point even though there was no point. Make it
> just a few sentances long and then it's better.
>
> Goat fell down the sewer. Goat found mutant goat's that made him eat
> people. Goat went and ate lots of people then pooped them back out.
> They all ate his poo and people poo too. The End.
did you even read it....he pukes them out not poos them since you didn't even read it im not even gunna take notice of what you just typed.
I think it's "off" not "of". Just a typo you made twice. This is the sort of story I would right for my English teacher but it would be to the point even though there was no point. Make it just a few sentances long and then it's better.
Goat fell down the sewer. Goat found mutant goat's that made him eat people. Goat went and ate lots of people then pooped them back out. They all ate his poo and people poo too. The End.
Goat fell down the sewer. Goat found mutant goat's that made him eat people. Goat went and ate lots of people then pooped them back out. They all ate his poo and people poo too. The End.
once there was a goat that was the size of a goldfish and his owner flushed him down the toilet.When in the sewer the radioactive juices made him grow sharp teeth and made him the size of a normal sized goat...When down in the sewer he met mutant goats,the mutant goats talked to him"hello reguler sized goat with sharp teeth" rsgwst(reguler sized goat with sharp teeth) said "hi ugly mutant goats" the umg's(ugly mutant goats) said we are very very hungry and its been months since we ate a human.So would you go back up and eat loads of humans then regergitate them down the toilet" rsgwst thought about it he said "sure i know just where to start...".It was agreed that rsgwst would go eat aload of humans then puke them down the toilet.
rsgwst went back to the surface and knocked on his former owners front door his former owners mother opened the door she screamed."ahhhhhhhhhhh" then rsgwst bit her head of then slowly ate her whole body,her husband shouted"honey whats taking so long"he then saw a goat and blood on the floor.He walked over to the goat then the goat bit his privates...of,rsgwst slowly ate him then he went looking for his owner.rsgwst walked up the stairs and went to his owners door then looked through the keyhole...
if you like this story then i will write more...if you dont like it then i wont...post and say if you like it and want more or hate it and want no more....
rsgwst went back to the surface and knocked on his former owners front door his former owners mother opened the door she screamed."ahhhhhhhhhhh" then rsgwst bit her head of then slowly ate her whole body,her husband shouted"honey whats taking so long"he then saw a goat and blood on the floor.He walked over to the goat then the goat bit his privates...of,rsgwst slowly ate him then he went looking for his owner.rsgwst walked up the stairs and went to his owners door then looked through the keyhole...
if you like this story then i will write more...if you dont like it then i wont...post and say if you like it and want more or hate it and want no more....
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