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once there was a goat that was the size of a goldfish and his owner flushed him down the toilet.When in the sewer the radioactive juices made him grow sharp teeth and made him the size of a normal sized goat...When down in the sewer he met mutant goats,the mutant goats talked to him"hello reguler sized goat with sharp teeth" rsgwst(reguler sized goat with sharp teeth) said "hi ugly mutant goats" the umg's(ugly mutant goats) said we are very very hungry and its been months since we ate a human.So would you go back up and eat loads of humans then regergitate them down the toilet" rsgwst thought about it he said "sure i know just where to start...".It was agreed that rsgwst would go eat aload of humans then puke them down the toilet.
rsgwst went back to the surface and knocked on his former owners front door his former owners mother opened the door she screamed."ahhhhhhhhhhh" then rsgwst bit her head of then slowly ate her whole body,her husband shouted"honey whats taking so long"he then saw a goat and blood on the floor.He walked over to the goat then the goat bit his privates...of,rsgwst slowly ate him then he went looking for his owner.rsgwst walked up the stairs and went to his owners door then looked through the keyhole...
if you like this story then i will write more...if you dont like it then i wont...post and say if you like it and want more or hate it and want no more....
rsgwst went back to the surface and knocked on his former owners front door his former owners mother opened the door she screamed."ahhhhhhhhhhh" then rsgwst bit her head of then slowly ate her whole body,her husband shouted"honey whats taking so long"he then saw a goat and blood on the floor.He walked over to the goat then the goat bit his privates...of,rsgwst slowly ate him then he went looking for his owner.rsgwst walked up the stairs and went to his owners door then looked through the keyhole...
if you like this story then i will write more...if you dont like it then i wont...post and say if you like it and want more or hate it and want no more....
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Since we have been given a choice I hate it and want no more......
Just a little bit of criticism(sp). I will go and write a short story, the sort I would write when bored in chemisty or maths, and then post it for you to have a look at. Then you can say what you want about mine. I think that sounds fair.
Cid Vilante wrote:
> I'm not trying to change your story. I'm just ripping off your idea
> and calling it a remake.
go remake it somwhere else and stop writing it in my topic
> I'm not trying to change your story. I'm just ripping off your idea
> and calling it a remake.
go remake it somwhere else and stop writing it in my topic
if you dont like my storys then say dont continue story YOU PEOPLE ARE BLIND and stop telling me how to write my storys
I'm not trying to change your story. I'm just ripping off your idea and calling it a remake.
I know i'm not one to really say this - as my story's are crap.
But I think people would appreciate it more if you used punctuation/spelling/grammar in your work, and maybe something outside the immature goat subject. You sound like some 10 year old who laughs at words like "poo" and "willy"
But I think people would appreciate it more if you used punctuation/spelling/grammar in your work, and maybe something outside the immature goat subject. You sound like some 10 year old who laughs at words like "poo" and "willy"
RoJ wrote:
> Oh be quiet.
are you talking to me or the guy trying to change my story
> Oh be quiet.
are you talking to me or the guy trying to change my story
Oh be quiet.
what are you going on about go away stop trying to change my story...
But then he mocks the others and reign supreme as Overlord of the dead mutant goats. They will all die of starvation and disease and he will be left as the winner.
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