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You me you speak in riddles
Your words echo in my head
Your taunting jibes confuse me
I wish that I was dead
A tongue so sharp it cuts me
Your lips so sweet and mean
Your mouth, a perfect poison
Such an expert, I have seen
On the surface, so sweet
You look almost innocent
But you’re dark as nightshade
There’s not time to repent
I look into your eyes
They show your stained soul
So peppered with sins
You would swallow me whole
My eyes, deep as oceans
See through your black lies
Others grow to accept you
I’m the one guy that tries
To relieve the heavy burden
Of misdeeds from your back
To rectify your wrongdoings
And wash clean your heart, so black
Your words echo in my head
Your taunting jibes confuse me
I wish that I was dead
A tongue so sharp it cuts me
Your lips so sweet and mean
Your mouth, a perfect poison
Such an expert, I have seen
On the surface, so sweet
You look almost innocent
But you’re dark as nightshade
There’s not time to repent
I look into your eyes
They show your stained soul
So peppered with sins
You would swallow me whole
My eyes, deep as oceans
See through your black lies
Others grow to accept you
I’m the one guy that tries
To relieve the heavy burden
Of misdeeds from your back
To rectify your wrongdoings
And wash clean your heart, so black
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SHEEPY wrote:
> you me you speak in riddles?
Lol, oops.
I was re-working the first line and got distracted.
Its meant to be
"You speak to me in riddles"
My bad.
> you me you speak in riddles?
Lol, oops.
I was re-working the first line and got distracted.
Its meant to be
"You speak to me in riddles"
My bad.
SHEEPY wrote:
> you me you speak in riddles?
Who?
> you me you speak in riddles?
Who?
you me you speak in riddles?
Nice poem. You've done better, but that'n is still good.
You me you speak in riddles
Your words echo in my head
Your taunting jibes confuse me
I wish that I was dead
A tongue so sharp it cuts me
Your lips so sweet and mean
Your mouth, a perfect poison
Such an expert, I have seen
On the surface, so sweet
You look almost innocent
But you’re dark as nightshade
There’s not time to repent
I look into your eyes
They show your stained soul
So peppered with sins
You would swallow me whole
My eyes, deep as oceans
See through your black lies
Others grow to accept you
I’m the one guy that tries
To relieve the heavy burden
Of misdeeds from your back
To rectify your wrongdoings
And wash clean your heart, so black
Your words echo in my head
Your taunting jibes confuse me
I wish that I was dead
A tongue so sharp it cuts me
Your lips so sweet and mean
Your mouth, a perfect poison
Such an expert, I have seen
On the surface, so sweet
You look almost innocent
But you’re dark as nightshade
There’s not time to repent
I look into your eyes
They show your stained soul
So peppered with sins
You would swallow me whole
My eyes, deep as oceans
See through your black lies
Others grow to accept you
I’m the one guy that tries
To relieve the heavy burden
Of misdeeds from your back
To rectify your wrongdoings
And wash clean your heart, so black
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