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"The Purple Tainted Rock..."

As I stay perched
Upon,
The purple tainted rock
aside the hill,
The wind
toys blissfully with my rigid hair,
As the stars
emerge,
The silhouette
of her face forms,

My heart
Sinks
Deeper than anything
In existence,
It aches,
The rocks façade
turns dark,
As the tide moves forth
ferociously

The lightening bolts
Strike
Each sounding
Like a scream
Her face shows resentment
Reflected in the stars
I halted. Set in stone

The rocks
exterior goes darker,
more sinister
The sirens pursue,
Once again
I stand

I turn to the stars,
My evil glance could freeze water.
The stars disappear
I look at the rock, it’s gone

The voices approached,
I took off,
I ran

These eyes switch off

momentarily,

As I choke

on the remains

of her hair

at the back of my throat…

The daunting man,

fades,

into the darkness,

again.

really? someone else just said that in my forum, hey wait a minuter IT WAS YOU!!!!





P.S. who the is colcrazy,
he SHOULD be called colcrumpeet or colcrazycrumpet....

Mr. No shoes

Mr. No shoes wrote:
> I tried to read but I couldn't be bothered, can someone please give me
> he general jist of it?
>
> P.S. Anyone got a new pair of shoes, made of wood preferably?
>
>
>
> Mr. No shoes

mister no shoes you post in a very similar way to crazy col, maybe there is a conspiracy afoot ....

I tried to read but I couldn't be bothered, can someone please give me he general jist of it?

P.S. Anyone got a new pair of shoes, made of wood preferably?



Mr. No shoes

Me liketh.
Dance for me, child.

*The daunting man*

Dark.
Cool.

I was just about to go into that, as it happens :)

Will give some feedback, all in good time ;)

Heh, ill try not to do it again anyway.

You read my story mate?

I guess a thanking is in order then, :) cheers

Heh, I guess I indirectly and unintentionally saved you!

I was going to... but then I also learnt from your lesson ;)