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"A Girl called Summer"

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Sun 18/05/03 at 21:24
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Summer.

In the long shadow of a lonely tower she walked - the delicate fabric of her nightie gently rippling in the fragant breeze.
His eyes watched her graceful form.... against the deep green of the forest's eaves she was enchanting.

As her bare-feet approached the many-coloured flowers which surrounded the base of the tall tower, there was a gleam in the shade from a silvery blade.
A swooping silhouette was seen - like a black flash.

Slash.
Cut.
Thrust.
Stab.

He looked down at the blood - touching it's dark redness.
He then gazed upward.... and as his blurry eyes slowly began to close, he saw her towering over him - blade in hand.

"See you Hell" she whispered, before dispatching the final blow.
Tue 20/05/03 at 19:38
"period drama"
Posts: 19,792
My dog's called Summer, by the by.
Although she never killed anyone ...

I like what ya did there.
Making out with the sterotypical romance story scene with the beautiful woman, then turning it around like that. Innocence only skin-deep, huh?
Tue 20/05/03 at 11:58
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"Going nowhere fast"
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Black Glove wrote:
> Bingo.

What? When? How come I missed this game?

Nice little twist.
Mon 19/05/03 at 19:03
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Black Glove wrote:
> I'm coming round your houses to saw off your heads.

a coping saw or a bow saw? either way im ok with that.......
Mon 19/05/03 at 14:54
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-slaps Black Glove with a firm white glove-

I used to know a girl called Summer, but when the leaves on the trees started falling, she went cold on me.
Sun 18/05/03 at 22:12
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"Laughingstock"
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Ta. Just a little something I thought up. Appearances can be deceptive and all that.
Sun 18/05/03 at 22:03
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Nice short little story type thing there Black Glove.

Its like saying some people are not always what they seem.
Sun 18/05/03 at 22:02
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"Jog on, sunshine"
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In which case- it means you wrote it well enough to be understood by an idiot.

Excellent. :D
Sun 18/05/03 at 21:59
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"Laughingstock"
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Bingo.
Sun 18/05/03 at 21:56
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"Jog on, sunshine"
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Nice. I think I understand this.

You make the girl seem innocent, when really, she's actually evil.
Sun 18/05/03 at 21:53
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"Laughingstock"
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I'm coming round your houses to saw off your heads.

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