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"A Love Poem"

Just to prove I can do happy:

A Love Poem

I thought I loved you
until the day that I fell
in love with you.
I knew I needed you
until the day that I fell
in love with you.
Then I realised that I need nothing,
I want.
I want love,I want you
but I don't need you

I think I love you,
but I've thought that before.
Maybe this is just another illusion,
a little clearer than the last.
Maybe tomorrow,
I'll fall in love with you.

what do you mean by "cutting away teacle"? It sounds intriguing...

gerrid wrote:
> SHEEPY wrote:
> Pretty cliche but I liked the first bit
>
> " I thought I loved you until I feel in love with you "
>
> Shame that line wasn't in the poem.
Actually it was gerrid. Except for a different format.

Borat Sagdiyev wrote:

"before you know it you'll be buying cushions and talking about where furniture should be placed in a room."

Wasn't that from Men Behaving Badly?

SHEEPY wrote:
> Pretty cliche but I liked the first bit
>
> " I thought I loved you until I feel in love with you "

Shame that line wasn't in the poem.

mikelar wrote:
> yo i wrote this ****in ILL poem about a man caught in a giant squids
> tentacles. I deleted it though.

quality mate, cut away some of that treacle in here, if you stay in this topic long enough, it'll turn you soft.

before you know it you'll be buying cushions and talking about where furniture should be placed in a room.

yo i wrote this ****in ILL poem about a man caught in a giant squids tentacles. I deleted it though.

Pretty cliche but I liked the first bit

" I thought I loved you until I feel in love with you "

I've been on a long journey, and now I've returned I guess.
Nice to know someone was thinking of me, even if it was for just a split second - probably :-)

Scarey I was only thinking of your earlier today Nomad Soul. And now here you are.

*Throws another log on the fire*
*Thinks of love*
*Throws a photo of my ex on the fire*
*Curses love*