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Jetster - Random Hero
Anarchy - DW
Hello, welcome to Eclipse, and have we got a great match lined up for you now. It’s a straight singles match between Jetster and Anarchy. The real sting, though, is that if Anarchy secures a victory, he is a CAW title contender. Jetster will be looking to stop Anarchy from achieving this and getting a little bit of notoriety in the process. So, fasten your seatbelts. It’s gonna be one hell of a match tonight!
And Jetster emerges at the top of the stage to a fairly quiet reception, the crowd calm as Jetster walks slowly down into the ring, giving the referee a quick glance and preparing himself.
And the whole arena goes quiet, and BOOM! Fireworks light up the stage, and Anarchy emerges on the stage. And the ovatiion the Anarchists are giving Anarchy is amazing, they’ve almost drained out Anarchy’s entrance music. Well, Jetster has a task on his hands, this giant of a man approaches the ring and Jetster is staying as far away as possible. Anarchy climbs through the ropes, the crowd still haven’t stopped cheering, although as you can imagine they have quietened down a fair bit.
Well, the bell rings, and Jetster gets the iniative straight away with a really strong spear, which takes Anarchy down in one fell swoop. The crowd don’t like that, and a chorus of boos echoes around the arena as Jetster lays into a floored Anarchy. But Anarchy isn’t down for long, and he stands up to the horror of Jetster. It’s obvious that Jetster wants to avoid any real wrestling with Anarchy and hit him with short, sharp attacks. Jetster runs against the ropes, but Anarchy looks prepared and Jetster stops himself mid-run as he knows that it would be all too easy for Anarchy to do serious damage with a counter to Jetster’s run. Jetster darts up to the turnbuckle, and Anarchy runs against the rope to shake the turnbuckle, but Jetster leaps off just in time and connects with a huge flying Dropkick, but Anarchy isn’t hurt! He stumbled backwards, but he is still standing and looks focused, as Jetster tries to find some energy, as he hit the floor hard after his Dropkick. Anarchy has his hands on Jetster now, as the crowd roar in delight, but Jetster retaliates with an elbow to the groin, and he escapes Anarchy’s clutch, to a shower of disapproval from the fans. He’s run against the ropes, and he doesn’t chicken out this time, as he lands a huge Leg Drop onto Anarchy. Anarchy is still down, as Jetster mounts the turnbuckle, but he isn’t doing anything!?! He’s just sat up there on the turnbuckle, watchiong and waiting. What is he up to? Anarchy is climbing up, and has his back turned to Jetster, who is still on his perch. Anarchy turns around cautiously, and Jetster leaps through the air with a flying body press! But Anarchy caught him! And he quickly converts it into a rib breaker, and what a rib breaker! The full force of the jump, and Anarchy’s knee, both combining to do serious damage to Jetster’s ribs!
And Anarchy lays him down, and goes for a pin!
1....
2.....
3....!
And already Anarchy has made the pinfall! The match barely 2 minutes old, and already Anarchy using the advantage to pin Jetster and get the game over with! Well, we thought Anarchy would be eager for the win, but we never imagined the match would end so abruptly! So, that’s it! Anarchy has won, and is now a contender for the CAW title. Jetster slides out of the ring, as Anarchy is cheered heavily. But what’s this? Jetster has opened the apron, someone is underneath! Is it...? It’s Mustava Tosov, from E! Wrestling, he’s obviously come for revenge or something. I think Jetster had this planned all along, as Mustafa hands him a bat, and they both head towards Anarchy in the ring. And BANG!, as Mustafa sends Anarchy down with a dustbin lid. Jetster is laying into a downed Anarchy, but someone else is emerging from under the ring. It’s Reaver! And the crowd must feel a bit weird, as they are actually cheering Reaver. Mustafa and Jetster are both taking their time to hurt Anarchy, but Reaver flies in with a bat, and in a quick flurry of hits, he has sent both Mustafa and Jetster down. Reaver helps Anarchy out of the ring and up the ramp, to really loud cheers! Mustafa looks furious, as he lies next to Jetster, unable to get up due to the searing pain.
Well, that’s it, folks! Anarchy is a contender for the CAW title, Reaver is turning into a fan favourite and Mustafa and Jetster seem to have combined to get Anarchy. What a series of events! Make sure not to miss the next few Eclipses to see how this develops!
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WINNER: Anarchy
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Anarchy is now a contender for the CAW title.
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Reaver is now a Face.
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Hope you enjoyed that short yet controversial little epsiode :-)
Anarchy - DW
Hello, welcome to Eclipse, and have we got a great match lined up for you now. It’s a straight singles match between Jetster and Anarchy. The real sting, though, is that if Anarchy secures a victory, he is a CAW title contender. Jetster will be looking to stop Anarchy from achieving this and getting a little bit of notoriety in the process. So, fasten your seatbelts. It’s gonna be one hell of a match tonight!
And Jetster emerges at the top of the stage to a fairly quiet reception, the crowd calm as Jetster walks slowly down into the ring, giving the referee a quick glance and preparing himself.
And the whole arena goes quiet, and BOOM! Fireworks light up the stage, and Anarchy emerges on the stage. And the ovatiion the Anarchists are giving Anarchy is amazing, they’ve almost drained out Anarchy’s entrance music. Well, Jetster has a task on his hands, this giant of a man approaches the ring and Jetster is staying as far away as possible. Anarchy climbs through the ropes, the crowd still haven’t stopped cheering, although as you can imagine they have quietened down a fair bit.
Well, the bell rings, and Jetster gets the iniative straight away with a really strong spear, which takes Anarchy down in one fell swoop. The crowd don’t like that, and a chorus of boos echoes around the arena as Jetster lays into a floored Anarchy. But Anarchy isn’t down for long, and he stands up to the horror of Jetster. It’s obvious that Jetster wants to avoid any real wrestling with Anarchy and hit him with short, sharp attacks. Jetster runs against the ropes, but Anarchy looks prepared and Jetster stops himself mid-run as he knows that it would be all too easy for Anarchy to do serious damage with a counter to Jetster’s run. Jetster darts up to the turnbuckle, and Anarchy runs against the rope to shake the turnbuckle, but Jetster leaps off just in time and connects with a huge flying Dropkick, but Anarchy isn’t hurt! He stumbled backwards, but he is still standing and looks focused, as Jetster tries to find some energy, as he hit the floor hard after his Dropkick. Anarchy has his hands on Jetster now, as the crowd roar in delight, but Jetster retaliates with an elbow to the groin, and he escapes Anarchy’s clutch, to a shower of disapproval from the fans. He’s run against the ropes, and he doesn’t chicken out this time, as he lands a huge Leg Drop onto Anarchy. Anarchy is still down, as Jetster mounts the turnbuckle, but he isn’t doing anything!?! He’s just sat up there on the turnbuckle, watchiong and waiting. What is he up to? Anarchy is climbing up, and has his back turned to Jetster, who is still on his perch. Anarchy turns around cautiously, and Jetster leaps through the air with a flying body press! But Anarchy caught him! And he quickly converts it into a rib breaker, and what a rib breaker! The full force of the jump, and Anarchy’s knee, both combining to do serious damage to Jetster’s ribs!
And Anarchy lays him down, and goes for a pin!
1....
2.....
3....!
And already Anarchy has made the pinfall! The match barely 2 minutes old, and already Anarchy using the advantage to pin Jetster and get the game over with! Well, we thought Anarchy would be eager for the win, but we never imagined the match would end so abruptly! So, that’s it! Anarchy has won, and is now a contender for the CAW title. Jetster slides out of the ring, as Anarchy is cheered heavily. But what’s this? Jetster has opened the apron, someone is underneath! Is it...? It’s Mustava Tosov, from E! Wrestling, he’s obviously come for revenge or something. I think Jetster had this planned all along, as Mustafa hands him a bat, and they both head towards Anarchy in the ring. And BANG!, as Mustafa sends Anarchy down with a dustbin lid. Jetster is laying into a downed Anarchy, but someone else is emerging from under the ring. It’s Reaver! And the crowd must feel a bit weird, as they are actually cheering Reaver. Mustafa and Jetster are both taking their time to hurt Anarchy, but Reaver flies in with a bat, and in a quick flurry of hits, he has sent both Mustafa and Jetster down. Reaver helps Anarchy out of the ring and up the ramp, to really loud cheers! Mustafa looks furious, as he lies next to Jetster, unable to get up due to the searing pain.
Well, that’s it, folks! Anarchy is a contender for the CAW title, Reaver is turning into a fan favourite and Mustafa and Jetster seem to have combined to get Anarchy. What a series of events! Make sure not to miss the next few Eclipses to see how this develops!
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WINNER: Anarchy
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Anarchy is now a contender for the CAW title.
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Reaver is now a Face.
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Hope you enjoyed that short yet controversial little epsiode :-)
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Okay, I'm gunna say some bad stuff here, but I hope Asher doesn't take it personally.
The match itself was lame. It was one paragraph. It had one pinfall. It lasted two minutes. The result was good for me, I admit that, but it was not an enjoyable match at all. Jetster is far far better then that. Now, Mustafa, DW and even Edge Wrestling, they're all out of the storylines now. Yes, you can make referances to them, but don't get them involved anymore. Reaver as a face sucks. He's the self-proclaimed biggest heel in SRW. Therefore, as long as Ant agrees, Reaver is still a heel. I'm sure everyone else involved will agree with me there. As for Jetster and Reaver splitting up...I disagree with it. In my opinion, they should stay together.
You need to ask the owner of the CAW before messing with their characters. I think you should stay writing matches and everything, and learn from your mistakes. Your match quality is of high standard, minus this match. Keep doing what you have done before and you'll be fine.
DW
The match itself was lame. It was one paragraph. It had one pinfall. It lasted two minutes. The result was good for me, I admit that, but it was not an enjoyable match at all. Jetster is far far better then that. Now, Mustafa, DW and even Edge Wrestling, they're all out of the storylines now. Yes, you can make referances to them, but don't get them involved anymore. Reaver as a face sucks. He's the self-proclaimed biggest heel in SRW. Therefore, as long as Ant agrees, Reaver is still a heel. I'm sure everyone else involved will agree with me there. As for Jetster and Reaver splitting up...I disagree with it. In my opinion, they should stay together.
You need to ask the owner of the CAW before messing with their characters. I think you should stay writing matches and everything, and learn from your mistakes. Your match quality is of high standard, minus this match. Keep doing what you have done before and you'll be fine.
DW
I have finished the promo! - Just waiting to post it! I might have to change a few things, but they won't be based on this... :DD
Jae, please don't base any of your promo on this.
He hadn't spoken to Ant about it, no.
I think Reaver works better as a heel anyway.
I think Reaver works better as a heel anyway.
DW wrote:
> Maybe Reaver, Anarchy and Stone Edge should feud with Mustafa, DW and >Jetster.
Ah, wait for the promo... :D
Great match Asher! I haven't read a short match like that in a while. It's good to get over Anarchys dominance in a match. I was really surprised with Reaver turning face (have you talked to Ant about that?!)! I never expected SRWs possibly, biggest heel to turn face!
Well done Asher and to the winner of the match, Anarchy!
> Maybe Reaver, Anarchy and Stone Edge should feud with Mustafa, DW and >Jetster.
Ah, wait for the promo... :D
Great match Asher! I haven't read a short match like that in a while. It's good to get over Anarchys dominance in a match. I was really surprised with Reaver turning face (have you talked to Ant about that?!)! I never expected SRWs possibly, biggest heel to turn face!
Well done Asher and to the winner of the match, Anarchy!
:cD
Hur hur.
Hur hur.
*slaps DW*
HAHAH!
I'm choking with laughter.
I'm choking with laughter.
*chokes in disbelief*
Wow. That was a well written match. I liked the way you used different writing styles.
And what a result for Anarchy.
I never expected Reaver to turn face. I'm sure he'd love to join the babyface rankings, and start with a clean slate. Maybe Reaver, Anarchy and Stone Edge should feud with Mustafa, DW and Jetster. Who knows what will happen. Let's see what Ant has to say. I'm sure he'll be excited about a new style for his CAW.
Well done Asher, unlucky Jet.
And what a result for Anarchy.
I never expected Reaver to turn face. I'm sure he'd love to join the babyface rankings, and start with a clean slate. Maybe Reaver, Anarchy and Stone Edge should feud with Mustafa, DW and Jetster. Who knows what will happen. Let's see what Ant has to say. I'm sure he'll be excited about a new style for his CAW.
Well done Asher, unlucky Jet.
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