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"That Day"

The atmosphere was different that day.
Mixed emotions were shown that day.
Sadness, comfort, craziness, closeness.
Shadows were left behind that day.
Shadows that had nobody to complete them.
There is only a bare space left in that room, to be filled on that day, any day, everyday.
Such a young age, such a bad time, such a bad way.
People would stare and comfort them on that day, not that special day, that day that left a big unwanted hole in our hearts. Broken hearts.
You think it's impossible because of the age, the time, the way. But it's not. No way is it. Don't ever let yourself think that. Ever.


I wrote that when I was 15. And I've only just realised how many "that day's" there are in it.
I still look at it and think how unhappy I must have been, because it was about a week after a friend died I wrote it.
This is the first time I've ever shown anybody this. I'm no pro, so don't be harsh! :)

For 'no pro', that's powerful stuff you've got there.

I really like it, but be careful Edexcel don't see it - they'll put it in Tracks, that damned poetry anthology!

That's really very good, actually.

Whitestripes, you're having a really bad day today :)

At least twice you've misread or miscopied & pasted something. Developing a touch of dyslexia perhaps?

What the hell?

*more confused*

I'm going back to the Nintendo forum...*mutters*

I'm always confused :\

Just moreso today, you haven't seen my picture yet..

Are you feeling ok, Whitestripes? You look a little confused... :)

in the top post the second verse isn't there for me :\

But when I copied and pasted it, it came out...


*wanders around aimlessly*

Whitestripes wrote:
> Whats going on?

Hehe! I have no idea! :)
Which bit was different? Did it say something else?

Whitestripes wrote:
> See?


...No. Which bit is different? I'm lost.

What the hell?

It's come out the same...

*confused*

Whats going on?