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Sat 24/08/02 at 01:08
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Posts: 787
SR Gets Robbed.

(I don't write stories for a living so shut up before you diss me ;o) )

"So Tony, how's are sales going for this week?"

"Ack, not bad, could be better Darkus. Yes, they. Could. Be better. Darkus, Darkus." *Slight hintage*

"Oh ok then, must be someone else's fault then.."

*Under Breath* "Damn kids"

Now, this SR store, this was the new one, it had a big entrance, it was basically a big warehouse, but it had big glass windows, absolutely spotless they were. The dull grey of the metal corrugated metal blended perfectly with the dull English skies..

Inside, the nice red carpet, looked fit for a king. Everything was placed perfectly. Tony, almost whipping his staff. Had everything running like clockwork. Games were perfectly arranged, as the rest of the shelves were. Although they being a dull grey metal, they looked good.

*Bang*

"EVERYONE ON THE FLOOR. GET AWAY FROM THE ALARMS!"

As he said, brandishing a Fully-Automatic weapon, looking like part of the MP5 family.

Everyone dropped to the floor.

Someone whispered "What the hell is going on??"

"Not a clue, not a clue.."

Someone got a glance of the entrance. Looked like a blue Ford Transit van had been perfectly
manouevred into those spotless entry doors. Shattered glass all around the entrance. It looked like it had been placed there, it shattered almost in a perfect semi circle surrounding the doors.

A young man carrying a copy of Super Smash Brothers Melee saw a red glow from underneath a nearby desk. It was within reaching distance, without thinking he moved himself along the floor like a soldier, then as he reached for the button..

*Boom..*

You could hear the skull cracking, almost harmonic. Fragments of skull were viewable for all to see. Blood splattered onto the desk. He landed on the floor with a chilling "Thud"

Killed. Obviously. For all to see, children were going almost, crazy. Yet everyone shut up, in fear of being shot.

"These guys mean it." said a passerby (He ran away, very quickly.)
Further robbers piled out of the van looking almost identical to the next, all dressed in the same black uniform. Balaclava's and all. All carrying some sort of Automatic weapon.

All moved around in military precision. They had obviously done this before.

The safe was automatically the main target, 2 other guys carrying some kind of electronic equipment went straight to the safe, one guys guarded the safe room...

Then a big explosion came from the safe room, killing everyone and sending this whole warehouse about 100ft up in the air.

:-D

Dont get robbed.

Tony had set up enough explosives to blow the whole place up. Nobody was going to steal his sacred copy of Super Mario Brothers.

Tony - Ninty at heart

:-D
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Sat 24/08/02 at 01:08
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"Want a cd key.."
Posts: 3,443
SR Gets Robbed.

(I don't write stories for a living so shut up before you diss me ;o) )

"So Tony, how's are sales going for this week?"

"Ack, not bad, could be better Darkus. Yes, they. Could. Be better. Darkus, Darkus." *Slight hintage*

"Oh ok then, must be someone else's fault then.."

*Under Breath* "Damn kids"

Now, this SR store, this was the new one, it had a big entrance, it was basically a big warehouse, but it had big glass windows, absolutely spotless they were. The dull grey of the metal corrugated metal blended perfectly with the dull English skies..

Inside, the nice red carpet, looked fit for a king. Everything was placed perfectly. Tony, almost whipping his staff. Had everything running like clockwork. Games were perfectly arranged, as the rest of the shelves were. Although they being a dull grey metal, they looked good.

*Bang*

"EVERYONE ON THE FLOOR. GET AWAY FROM THE ALARMS!"

As he said, brandishing a Fully-Automatic weapon, looking like part of the MP5 family.

Everyone dropped to the floor.

Someone whispered "What the hell is going on??"

"Not a clue, not a clue.."

Someone got a glance of the entrance. Looked like a blue Ford Transit van had been perfectly
manouevred into those spotless entry doors. Shattered glass all around the entrance. It looked like it had been placed there, it shattered almost in a perfect semi circle surrounding the doors.

A young man carrying a copy of Super Smash Brothers Melee saw a red glow from underneath a nearby desk. It was within reaching distance, without thinking he moved himself along the floor like a soldier, then as he reached for the button..

*Boom..*

You could hear the skull cracking, almost harmonic. Fragments of skull were viewable for all to see. Blood splattered onto the desk. He landed on the floor with a chilling "Thud"

Killed. Obviously. For all to see, children were going almost, crazy. Yet everyone shut up, in fear of being shot.

"These guys mean it." said a passerby (He ran away, very quickly.)
Further robbers piled out of the van looking almost identical to the next, all dressed in the same black uniform. Balaclava's and all. All carrying some sort of Automatic weapon.

All moved around in military precision. They had obviously done this before.

The safe was automatically the main target, 2 other guys carrying some kind of electronic equipment went straight to the safe, one guys guarded the safe room...

Then a big explosion came from the safe room, killing everyone and sending this whole warehouse about 100ft up in the air.

:-D

Dont get robbed.

Tony had set up enough explosives to blow the whole place up. Nobody was going to steal his sacred copy of Super Mario Brothers.

Tony - Ninty at heart

:-D

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