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I just wrote this war poem as part of my history project for school :) Its not great but what you think?:
War Poem
Shellfire destroying your brain with its droning sound
Over the top of the trench cries of pain are heard
Life is not worth living anymore
Die die die the enemy shout.
In the trench is where they suffer
Enter Death hovering above the soldiers
Rations are becoming scarce
Skies are overcast with gloom
In come the rats ready to take the precious rations
No one expects to leave the battleground alive
Women worry for their husbands at home
On lives the spirits of the soldiers
Rats are becoming bigger and are growing in numbers
Love is what the soldiers need
Death will come sooner rather than later
When will it all stop
Artists could not paint the picture with enough
gratitude to the soldiers at war
Rage is inside the soldier’s heads
Only a miracle could stop them from being killed
No one is safe from what lies behind they enemy lines
Entire families ripped apart….
The soldiers will always be remembered
War Poem
Shellfire destroying your brain with its droning sound
Over the top of the trench cries of pain are heard
Life is not worth living anymore
Die die die the enemy shout.
In the trench is where they suffer
Enter Death hovering above the soldiers
Rations are becoming scarce
Skies are overcast with gloom
In come the rats ready to take the precious rations
No one expects to leave the battleground alive
Women worry for their husbands at home
On lives the spirits of the soldiers
Rats are becoming bigger and are growing in numbers
Love is what the soldiers need
Death will come sooner rather than later
When will it all stop
Artists could not paint the picture with enough
gratitude to the soldiers at war
Rage is inside the soldier’s heads
Only a miracle could stop them from being killed
No one is safe from what lies behind they enemy lines
Entire families ripped apart….
The soldiers will always be remembered
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Wilfred Owen And siegfried sassoon (sp probably) have the best war poems, i reccommend you give them a look (if you havent already of course).
**Kerrang!** wrote:
> $alvatore wrote:
> cool poem well worth a high grade
>
> I got my work back the other day and... I got top marks :) I'm not
> taking history as a GCSE subject though.
You should do, it's an easy GCSE, and A-level. Most people opt for Geography instead, but History's waaaaaay more interesting and it's easier. Trust me on this one.
> $alvatore wrote:
> cool poem well worth a high grade
>
> I got my work back the other day and... I got top marks :) I'm not
> taking history as a GCSE subject though.
You should do, it's an easy GCSE, and A-level. Most people opt for Geography instead, but History's waaaaaay more interesting and it's easier. Trust me on this one.
$alvatore wrote:
> cool poem well worth a high grade
I got my work back the other day and... I got top marks :) I'm not taking history as a GCSE subject though.
> cool poem well worth a high grade
I got my work back the other day and... I got top marks :) I'm not taking history as a GCSE subject though.
shut up you little gimp
Quinty wrote:
> funny that, were studying war poems in english at the moment. good
> stuff.
funny that, playing Ghost Recon at the moment. good stuff.
> funny that, were studying war poems in english at the moment. good
> stuff.
funny that, playing Ghost Recon at the moment. good stuff.
funny that, were studying war poems in english at the moment. good stuff.
i think it is good
I like it! specaily the bit about the rations and the rats 8)>
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