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"Scary Stuff this is"

I got this off my g/f I had nightmares about to its a disgusting topic for a poem aint it btw my g/f didn't write it

I prefer the term surreal more like

Oo err.

That's a bit... strange.

But I bet it's made from something real.

Jive wrote:
> Good move, I hope you get some feedback from them and keep us informed
> of any progress. Do you know who wrote it?
>
> I think they deserve a huge round of applause if this makes the
> suffering experienced by children drop!
>
> That last bit sounds really cr@p, sorry, what I was trying to say
> was..
>
> I know it wont stop the cruelty completely but if it can help save
> lives or end up shocking those people who know of the abuse that is
> happening to children then the poem/advert will have done it's job.
>
> God that still sounds cr@p, hopefully you know what point I'm trying
> to get across.


I got your point I will post the outcome tommorow because they will of replyed to my email by then

but disturbing non the less :S

Thats a well written piece of poetry.

Good move, I hope you get some feedback from them and keep us informed of any progress. Do you know who wrote it?

I think they deserve a huge round of applause if this makes the suffering experienced by children drop!

That last bit sounds really cr@p, sorry, what I was trying to say was..

I know it wont stop the cruelty completely but if it can help save lives or end up shocking those people who know of the abuse that is happening to children then the poem/advert will have done it's job.

God that still sounds cr@p, hopefully you know what point I'm trying to get across.

I have just sent it to the NSPCC maybe they might use it for an advertisment campagn

thats some twisted poem, well written though.

Jive wrote:
> Disgusting! No I wouldn't say it was disgusting, a very well written
> poem that brings home the clarity of a three year old girl being
> severely abused to the point of death.
>
> This would bring home the point about child cruelty in a very hard
> hitting way if used say in a TV advert, I think it would make a lot of
> people sit and think.........it certainly has made me pause for
> thought!


Exactly what I thought aswell

Disgusting! No I wouldn't say it was disgusting, a very well written poem that brings home the clarity of a three year old girl being severely abused to the point of death.

This would bring home the point about child cruelty in a very hard hitting way if used say in a TV advert, I think it would make a lot of people sit and think.........it certainly has made me pause for thought!