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"Return of the Skedar - The story begins"

Ten years ago the Skedar race had been annihilated in a final push after the assassination of the Skedar leaders on their home planet. The joint alliance of human and maian forces, both in the air and on land made the final push and finished off the survivors of the evil Skedar race. On earth the Datadyne Corporation were also brought to justice and peace was finally restored. The alliance of humans and maians then grew and trade flourished. Advancements in travel, education and science meant that life became better after the troubles on earth. Carrington, with his aim complete retied from his work to enjoy the splendours of peace. The institute carried on training young men and women in roles of combat in case they were ever needed again. No one could have estimated what was about to happen.

The team ran forward, ducking and diving as they go, until the reach the gate. Agent Twain chucks a grenade in as the rest of the team storm in firing away as they go. ‘Right the main hanger is over there, we’ll have to secure it first’ shouts Agent BIG as he points towards the hanger. ‘Jc, take Agent Twain, Delta, and BOB with you and go for the main entrance to the hanger, the rest of you come with me’ orders Agent BIG as Pringle rejoins them. Jc and the others run towards the hanger, firing away as they go, the Skedar return fire but miss. Agent BIG and the others then dart towards a smaller hanger than links onto the main one. They reach the door but are hampered by shots from inside. ‘Fire ‘n’ hole!’ yells Agent Link as he throws a grenade in. They then run in through the smoke but all is quiet. ‘Where the hell are they?’ asks Pringle as he cautiously looks around, gun at the ready. Jc and the rest of the team come in through the main doors and meet up with them. ‘I was expecting a warm reception from our Skedar friends’ whispers Twain. ‘Strafex what’s it like out there?’ asks Jc over the comm-link. ‘Quiet, too quiet’ replies Strafex. Suddenly shots come from up above, the team scramble for cover. ‘S!*t, ambush!’ screams Chips as he grabs his gun. ‘ We better split up, go!’ yells Jc as he and Pringle run towards the nearest flight of steps. The rest of the team separate and give covering fire to each other. Agent BIG and Chips move towards a damaged jet to find better cover, BIG notices something on the jet bleeping away, ‘What the hell is that?’ he asks.
‘S*%t it’s a bomb!’ replies Chips.

O.K then BIGMAN, see you later. Come straight back on when you have finished, O.K?

WICKED BIGAMN!!! Ive just got home from school and come stright on to see my e mail. ithought id take a peak at the forums first though! Ive got footy trainin now but when i come back Ill help chips to encourage others to read it. Its awesome! Now if only we can get universal to look at the script!

I'll go write it now, see you in a bit !


The BIGMAN

I'll be on for a while, but the ninty forum isn't really busy now, so you can write it now if you want, it's really up to you.

How long you going to be on for, i could always og write it now ?

Errm... write it whenever you feel like doing it. Just post it when you feel like.

When shall I right the next bit, in little while or this evening ?

Done! :)