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who`s the best charater in the league of gentlemen
is it tubbs or it could be pauline or it maybe papa laz, you tell me?
is it tubbs or it could be pauline or it maybe papa laz, you tell me?
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I should have watched my grammar when typing that, oh well
Kyz22 wrote:
> 3) The first word should be two words, changing it from
> "who's" to "Who is" This is because
> "who's" is a term enquiring into who does it belong to, you
> meant to ask "Who is?"
Your instant grammar check smells
Who's is an abbrieviate of ---- Who is ----- the apostraphe replaces the space and the I
Who does it belong to is better reffered to as ---- Whose ----
Glad i could be of service
> 3) The first word should be two words, changing it from
> "who's" to "Who is" This is because
> "who's" is a term enquiring into who does it belong to, you
> meant to ask "Who is?"
Your instant grammar check smells
Who's is an abbrieviate of ---- Who is ----- the apostraphe replaces the space and the I
Who does it belong to is better reffered to as ---- Whose ----
Glad i could be of service
Kyz22 - Instant Grammar Check !
peas wrote:
> who`s the best charater in the league of gentlemen
> is it tubbs or it could be pauline or it maybe papa laz, you tell me?
Here are a few pointers: -
1) The first letter of your name should be a capital.
2) The first letter in your sentence should be a capital.
3) The first word should be two words, changing it from "who's" to "Who is" This is because "who's" is a term enquiring into who does it belong to, you meant to ask "Who is?"
4) "the league of gentlemen" should include capital letters, therefore changing it to "The League of Gentlemen."
5) After "The League of Gentlemen" there should be a question mark, this can be acquired by pressing shift and the "/" key. The question mark indicates a question has been asked.
6) "is it..." Should be a new sentence, because the question mark (Should one have been placed) defines the end of a sentence, therefore requiring a capital letter at the start of the next. The correct way would be, "Is it..."
7) "tubbs" should be written "Tubbs" as it is a characters name.
8) After "Tubbs" you require a comma, a comma looks like this "," and indicates a pause in a sentence
9) "pauline" sould infact be spelt "Pauline" because, again, it is a name and requires a capital letter.
10) "or it maybe papa laz." This is a very poor end of a sentence. It should have a comma before the "or" as it needs a pause, you have two options when it comes to "maybe." You could alter it to "may be" or, you could stretch your IQ into double figures and write "could be."
11) "papa laz" This is an abbreviation which I wont criticize, however It should be written "Papa Laz" because after all, it is a name.
12) "you tell me?" I am not sure what you meant by this. Perhaps you meant is as a bold statement asking for audience particupation, in that case it would be a new sentence, "You tell me!" The exclamation mark would be used to indicate a raise in voice indicating that you are asking the reader something, without using a question mark. Perhaps you meant, "can you tell me?" in which case you missed out a word.
You have been served by Kyz22 - Instant grammar check - Good day.
peas wrote:
> who`s the best charater in the league of gentlemen
> is it tubbs or it could be pauline or it maybe papa laz, you tell me?
Here are a few pointers: -
1) The first letter of your name should be a capital.
2) The first letter in your sentence should be a capital.
3) The first word should be two words, changing it from "who's" to "Who is" This is because "who's" is a term enquiring into who does it belong to, you meant to ask "Who is?"
4) "the league of gentlemen" should include capital letters, therefore changing it to "The League of Gentlemen."
5) After "The League of Gentlemen" there should be a question mark, this can be acquired by pressing shift and the "/" key. The question mark indicates a question has been asked.
6) "is it..." Should be a new sentence, because the question mark (Should one have been placed) defines the end of a sentence, therefore requiring a capital letter at the start of the next. The correct way would be, "Is it..."
7) "tubbs" should be written "Tubbs" as it is a characters name.
8) After "Tubbs" you require a comma, a comma looks like this "," and indicates a pause in a sentence
9) "pauline" sould infact be spelt "Pauline" because, again, it is a name and requires a capital letter.
10) "or it maybe papa laz." This is a very poor end of a sentence. It should have a comma before the "or" as it needs a pause, you have two options when it comes to "maybe." You could alter it to "may be" or, you could stretch your IQ into double figures and write "could be."
11) "papa laz" This is an abbreviation which I wont criticize, however It should be written "Papa Laz" because after all, it is a name.
12) "you tell me?" I am not sure what you meant by this. Perhaps you meant is as a bold statement asking for audience particupation, in that case it would be a new sentence, "You tell me!" The exclamation mark would be used to indicate a raise in voice indicating that you are asking the reader something, without using a question mark. Perhaps you meant, "can you tell me?" in which case you missed out a word.
You have been served by Kyz22 - Instant grammar check - Good day.
Bazzman wrote:
> My fave is GO AWAY NEWBIE. He's in a new sitcom called Go Away.
Shut the hell up! If this forum isn't for discussion, what *is* it for?
My favourite characters? The owners of the local shop for local people, my memory has gone blank and I cannot remember their names. The things like cans of can't really made me laugh. Shame they got killed off this series.
> My fave is GO AWAY NEWBIE. He's in a new sitcom called Go Away.
Shut the hell up! If this forum isn't for discussion, what *is* it for?
My favourite characters? The owners of the local shop for local people, my memory has gone blank and I cannot remember their names. The things like cans of can't really made me laugh. Shame they got killed off this series.
what the heck, what does that mean?
peas wrote:
> who`s the best charater in the league of gentlemen
> is it tubbs or it could be pauline or it maybe papa laz, you tell me?
My fave is GO AWAY NEWBIE. He's in a new sitcom called Go Away.
> who`s the best charater in the league of gentlemen
> is it tubbs or it could be pauline or it maybe papa laz, you tell me?
My fave is GO AWAY NEWBIE. He's in a new sitcom called Go Away.
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