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THE PAIN OF MY ANXT LIFE
the moon is like a white circle in the sky at night
the sun is really hot like heat.
'cos i am unique!!
you all dont understand me
im unique!!
WE are the best, not you rude boys!!
we dont want your b**ches!! you can keep them!
you can keep your rap cos I AM THE BEST and unique!!!
I am not a worthless skunk
Look at me, i wrote this junk!!
when i am sad i think and i look at the sky
and sometimes i even wonder why
but i dont care what you say about me
i dont care if you write it on a tree.
THE END
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-(this is space to let you evaluate and emote your feelings
-very emotional)
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This masterpiece was written during a very emotional period in my life, it says so much to me and i konw you all can relate to this somehow. This is the work you should be aspiring too and maybe even someday coming near.
thank you.
the moon is like a white circle in the sky at night
the sun is really hot like heat.
'cos i am unique!!
you all dont understand me
im unique!!
WE are the best, not you rude boys!!
we dont want your b**ches!! you can keep them!
you can keep your rap cos I AM THE BEST and unique!!!
I am not a worthless skunk
Look at me, i wrote this junk!!
when i am sad i think and i look at the sky
and sometimes i even wonder why
but i dont care what you say about me
i dont care if you write it on a tree.
THE END
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-
-(this is space to let you evaluate and emote your feelings
-very emotional)
-
-
-
This masterpiece was written during a very emotional period in my life, it says so much to me and i konw you all can relate to this somehow. This is the work you should be aspiring too and maybe even someday coming near.
thank you.
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The pain of my anxt life...
Does anyone else think he means Angst, not Anxt...???
Hmm, the mark of a great poet/ lyric writer... not being able to spell for toffee...
Does anyone else think he means Angst, not Anxt...???
Hmm, the mark of a great poet/ lyric writer... not being able to spell for toffee...
They're not very good
FilmBuff wrote:
I am not a worthless skunk
Look at me, i wrote this junk!!
but i dont care what you say about me
i dont care if you write it on a tree.
Silly me, I hadn't realised how complex this is. What exactly is supposedly complex about this nonsense?
I am not a worthless skunk
Look at me, i wrote this junk!!
but i dont care what you say about me
i dont care if you write it on a tree.
Silly me, I hadn't realised how complex this is. What exactly is supposedly complex about this nonsense?
THE PAIN OF MY ANXT LIFE: Part Deux
the mockers mock, but can they rock?
and the people sing all the same
but i will never be the same
because we are not the same
no one is the same
so what can i say
is there any more to say
people can say what they want to say
because we all say different things
everyone says things
but i say different things
but mummy and daddy dont say them
so i say differnt things to them
we all think what we think
but i think differntly
we all think different things
but i think of things
END
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maybe you friends of mine can relate to this more.
maybe my previous work was too complex for you all.
the mockers mock, but can they rock?
and the people sing all the same
but i will never be the same
because we are not the same
no one is the same
so what can i say
is there any more to say
people can say what they want to say
because we all say different things
everyone says things
but i say different things
but mummy and daddy dont say them
so i say differnt things to them
we all think what we think
but i think differntly
we all think different things
but i think of things
END
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maybe you friends of mine can relate to this more.
maybe my previous work was too complex for you all.
I found your writing to be amatuer at best.
Poor similes, no sense of alliteration or ability to convey emotions or mood.
In short, you suck.
More than anything in this world has ever done.
And you're annoying with a tiny penis.
Please go back to wearing your mum's dress and telling yourself "I have friends I have friends I have friends"
Poor similes, no sense of alliteration or ability to convey emotions or mood.
In short, you suck.
More than anything in this world has ever done.
And you're annoying with a tiny penis.
Please go back to wearing your mum's dress and telling yourself "I have friends I have friends I have friends"
Had you been smoking weed or drinking copious amounts of alcohol at the time Mr Film?
Or are you just clinically insane?
Or are you just clinically insane?
Die peeg dog die.
Your work has layed down the foundations for my future work.
Goatboy's was better
THE PAIN OF MY ANXT LIFE
the moon is like a white circle in the sky at night
the sun is really hot like heat.
'cos i am unique!!
you all dont understand me
im unique!!
WE are the best, not you rude boys!!
we dont want your b**ches!! you can keep them!
you can keep your rap cos I AM THE BEST and unique!!!
I am not a worthless skunk
Look at me, i wrote this junk!!
when i am sad i think and i look at the sky
and sometimes i even wonder why
but i dont care what you say about me
i dont care if you write it on a tree.
THE END
-
-
-(this is space to let you evaluate and emote your feelings
-very emotional)
-
-
-
This masterpiece was written during a very emotional period in my life, it says so much to me and i konw you all can relate to this somehow. This is the work you should be aspiring too and maybe even someday coming near.
thank you.
the moon is like a white circle in the sky at night
the sun is really hot like heat.
'cos i am unique!!
you all dont understand me
im unique!!
WE are the best, not you rude boys!!
we dont want your b**ches!! you can keep them!
you can keep your rap cos I AM THE BEST and unique!!!
I am not a worthless skunk
Look at me, i wrote this junk!!
when i am sad i think and i look at the sky
and sometimes i even wonder why
but i dont care what you say about me
i dont care if you write it on a tree.
THE END
-
-
-(this is space to let you evaluate and emote your feelings
-very emotional)
-
-
-
This masterpiece was written during a very emotional period in my life, it says so much to me and i konw you all can relate to this somehow. This is the work you should be aspiring too and maybe even someday coming near.
thank you.
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