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"Your Words"

Budding Songwriter?
Exellent Poet?
Just someone who likes to write their thoughts?

Well here is the thread for anyone and everyone to write their words. May it be about love, life or death - a song, poem or just a few words.

Here is the thread for your thoughts.


I look forward to reading them,
MWA

ha, I do that.

I just finish my shower off quickly and kick the PC for it to load up quicker :-D

Annoying thing is sometimes I think of a few lines I think are really good at random, like when I'm in the shower or something, then I forget them by the time I'm out so I can write them down... so I spend ages trying to remember them... Ah well, such is the way of things...

Nice words Sibs. Deja Voues (or however you spell them) are pretty cool but at times can be weird. I like them though.

Looks like you've contributed alot to this thread, I really want to put some stuff in and really want to write but I prefer writing to music most of the time. Always telling myself to write something because I'm in the mood but only sometimes do. Best to next time though.

A more pop-punk oriented song here...

Deju Vous


Another wasted day,
Another wasted night,
Another wasted moment,
Have I wasted away my life?

(chorus)
Today is just the same,
The same as yesterday,
Yesterday blends into tomorrow,
Tomorrow I'll have deju vous again,

Look back on my life,
What things have I done?
It doesn't seem like much right now,
It seemed a lot at the time,

(repeat chorus)

Well I got some grades on a piece of paper just the other day,
Everyone told me they were what I'd worked for,
They didn't seem that important to me,
And they don't seem to have changed a thing.

(repeat chorus)

Because today is just the same,
The same as yesterday,
Yesterday blends into tomorrow,
Tomorrow I'll have deju vous again,
Tomorrow I'll have deju vous... again.

another untitled song... could call it 'Masks' or 'True Face' or something along those lines though...


YOU SAY (you say) they're conforming to the rules!
YOU SAY (you say) they're being playe like fools!
MAYBE (just maybe) this is who they are,
MAYBE (just maybe) what you saw before,
WAS FALSE!

We've all worn the masks before,
We've seen each others masks before,
Afraid to show our true face,
In the face of someone else.

So how can we tell...
True from false?
How can we tell...
Real from fake?

Am I doing this because...
I want to, I like to?
Am I doing that because...
They accept it, respect it?

And who are 'THEY'?
Why should I care?
Why do they care?


Is this me, a new disease, I brought upon myself?
Will this new identity affect my mental health?
What will, they make of me, now that I have changed?
Will they, accept that they've seen my true,
FACE?



Thoughts or comments...?

Here's a poem:

Lord H came to the forums and brightened everyone's day,
Now he's getting bored of all the spoofs which are so gay,
So Liquid next time you go to post please take note,
Posting crappy spoofs makes us all think you are a scrote!

untitled song... wrote bits of it ages ago, just finished it last night...


Let's go down to the pub,
And watch the game,
Win or lose, it doesn't matter,
WE'LL KICK THE SH** OUT OF THE OPPOSITION FANS!
Win or lose, it's all the same.

Let's go out to the club,
We'll get rat ar*ed,
Smash up the corner shop,
Owned by that p*ki, We'll watch it burn!

TELL ME WHY?

Focus on our differences,
Can't you see we're all the same?
We're all human beings, where is our humanity?
Judge by colour, judge by race, judge by fu***ng clothes!
You think you're so superior?
YOU'RE IGNORANCE
YOU'RE ARROGANCE
Disproved your fu**ing theory!

You hate them?
YOU HATE THE WORLD!
You'll hate anyone,
who doesn't fit your mould!

Just the other week,
ANOTHER BODY IN THE STREETS!
A young life taken, far from her native land,
TO FEED SOME FU**ERS BLOODLUST?

What's the point? Where's the sense?
In taking an innocent life.

But the hatred that must grow from,
SEEMS BRED IN OUR BONES,
In this closed minded society,
On this closed minded island...

On this closed minded planet?

Sibs wrote:
> I tried that already, but a monkey stole them in the post... ;-)


I do hope you're not refering to me :-)

I tried that already, but a monkey stole them in the post... ;-)

Sibs wrote:
I need more money to buy more CDs...


You could just try and get some guy you met over the internet to send you them for free?

Just a thought...