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"The Half-Life challenge"

This is generally addressed to any of you who haven't yet taken the time to read the "HALF-LIFE" story which has been getting air in the Life forum for the past two months.

Read it all, tonight, and I'll think more of you:

Parts 1-5:

http://ukchatforums.reserve.co.uk/display_messages.php? threadid=67344&forumid=423

Parts 6-10:

http://ukchatforums.reserve.co.uk/display_messages.php? threadid=69866&forumid=423


GO!!

Insane Bartender wrote:
> Tempted to write it more slowly just to keep you waiting.

Damn your evil hide.....

;)

Must... keep... plugging... thread...

I've only read a few chapters, will finish the rest soon, so far its been an interesting and intriguing read. When I do I may be able to offer some constructive criticism that doesn't descend into sycophantism (which I'm not even sure is a word).

I've managed a fair critique of the opening chapters myself, as you read on, you might find (as I do) that the writing style is far superior.

But any criticism is welcome.

It's not outright criticism, rather just thoughts, but I don't want to tell you how to write it, and anyway I'd rather wait until its finished.

You won't be offering me any criticism for quite some time then.

I think I'm maybe a fifth or less of the way to where I want to take the story, and that's assuming it doesn't evolve any further than it has already.

If you want to send me comments, rather than post them up here, feel free to mail me on [email protected] or catch me on MSN in the evenings on [email protected].

I think it's rubbish. I haven't read it, but I think it sucks!!!!!!1

Guess I'll have to revert to posting semi-naked pictures of myself wearing Star Wars masks.

I'll pop this one last time before I let it slide =P

Promoting your own writing is almost as tasteless as naked star wars pics dude.