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Read it all, tonight, and I'll think more of you:
Parts 1-5:
http://ukchatforums.reserve.co.uk/display_messages.php? threadid=67344&forumid=423
Parts 6-10:
http://ukchatforums.reserve.co.uk/display_messages.php? threadid=69866&forumid=423
GO!!
I think I'm maybe a fifth or less of the way to where I want to take the story, and that's assuming it doesn't evolve any further than it has already.
If you want to send me comments, rather than post them up here, feel free to mail me on [email protected] or catch me on MSN in the evenings on [email protected].
But any criticism is welcome.