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In the bitter rigid streets
Of A metropolis, I never knew
I awoke,
Anonymous of whom I am
My orifice moved
The residents did not respond
Whispers approached my ears
Like a phantom
I turned, sharply
Three men, I saw
Hosting firearms as large as my ego
They knew me,
I clicked.
My hand reached for my pocket
Almost automatically
I knew they were to depart this life
Loaded up the projectile
Bang, the first stalls to the floor
Bang, the second rolls onto the pavement,
Clutching his stomach
I started to load another round…
I landed on the hard urban street,
The sound of screaming vehicles,
The laughing of citizens in the alcohol joint,
The newspaper swept across my blank face.
I left this urban metropolis…
A small tumour-like organism,
Fed upon my reverse
Assault rifle, sitting comfortably in my hand
Shot after shot missed
I looked forward…
Numerous beings of the same variety,
Another race battling additionally
I watched on as I filled the mortals with cold lead,
Each fell to the floor, screaming
The personalisation of each scream,
Made me anticipate the next
Hell- bent I continued to destroy
The enclosed purple hallways, spun
I forgot about the cretin on my shoulder
I fell to the soft ground, the last of our kind
Plasma flung transversely across the scope, in celebration
This world I left, in ruins
I emerged once more,
My instincts told me
I needed to survive
Yet, I saw nothing, my eyes were becoming wary
I twisted round, quickly,
Paranoia alarms in my cranium, were loud
I spun round on the attack, nonentity
Just a huge room, portals, blood on the damaged, solid ground…
Blood?
A large man stood facing me,
His manifestation was cold
And his stare was freezing
I couldn’t move away, his eyes were transfixed.
Blood poured from my wounded mouth
My leg, felt somewhat loose
I slipped into a mild daydream
Awoken by a kick to my kidneys
His hand penetrated my side
My skeleton prevailed in his elongated arms
The leftovers fell onto the hard concrete,
Once more, I leave this world of destruction, this murderous, obscene location.
I had been living these lives for well over 3 hours now, yet I was still bemused of my purpose.
I looked at the time,
I thought it was 10:10, time for respite
I rechecked the deceitful timepiece
9:13?
Morning was upon me,
I laid down the controller,
From a night of gaming supremacy
These worlds I visit for amusement, yet, escaping, is where I fail...
Cheers
Of A metropolis, I never knew
I awoke,
Anonymous of whom I am
My orifice moved
The residents did not respond
Whispers approached my ears
Like a phantom
I turned, sharply
Three men, I saw
Hosting firearms as large as my ego
They knew me,
I clicked.
My hand reached for my pocket
Almost automatically
I knew they were to depart this life
Loaded up the projectile
Bang, the first stalls to the floor
Bang, the second rolls onto the pavement,
Clutching his stomach
I started to load another round…
I landed on the hard urban street,
The sound of screaming vehicles,
The laughing of citizens in the alcohol joint,
The newspaper swept across my blank face.
I left this urban metropolis…
A small tumour-like organism,
Fed upon my reverse
Assault rifle, sitting comfortably in my hand
Shot after shot missed
I looked forward…
Numerous beings of the same variety,
Another race battling additionally
I watched on as I filled the mortals with cold lead,
Each fell to the floor, screaming
The personalisation of each scream,
Made me anticipate the next
Hell- bent I continued to destroy
The enclosed purple hallways, spun
I forgot about the cretin on my shoulder
I fell to the soft ground, the last of our kind
Plasma flung transversely across the scope, in celebration
This world I left, in ruins
I emerged once more,
My instincts told me
I needed to survive
Yet, I saw nothing, my eyes were becoming wary
I twisted round, quickly,
Paranoia alarms in my cranium, were loud
I spun round on the attack, nonentity
Just a huge room, portals, blood on the damaged, solid ground…
Blood?
A large man stood facing me,
His manifestation was cold
And his stare was freezing
I couldn’t move away, his eyes were transfixed.
Blood poured from my wounded mouth
My leg, felt somewhat loose
I slipped into a mild daydream
Awoken by a kick to my kidneys
His hand penetrated my side
My skeleton prevailed in his elongated arms
The leftovers fell onto the hard concrete,
Once more, I leave this world of destruction, this murderous, obscene location.
I had been living these lives for well over 3 hours now, yet I was still bemused of my purpose.
I looked at the time,
I thought it was 10:10, time for respite
I rechecked the deceitful timepiece
9:13?
Morning was upon me,
I laid down the controller,
From a night of gaming supremacy
These worlds I visit for amusement, yet, escaping, is where I fail...
Cheers
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Very good piece of Descriptive poetry lots of + points.... However what on earth do you mean by
>my orifice moved
>the residents did not respond
I swear that is an innuendo in its highest most blatant form....
otherwise, nothing wrong... infact... good
>my orifice moved
>the residents did not respond
I swear that is an innuendo in its highest most blatant form....
otherwise, nothing wrong... infact... good
In the bitter rigid streets
Of A metropolis, I never knew
I awoke,
Anonymous of whom I am
My orifice moved
The residents did not respond
Whispers approached my ears
Like a phantom
I turned, sharply
Three men, I saw
Hosting firearms as large as my ego
They knew me,
I clicked.
My hand reached for my pocket
Almost automatically
I knew they were to depart this life
Loaded up the projectile
Bang, the first stalls to the floor
Bang, the second rolls onto the pavement,
Clutching his stomach
I started to load another round…
I landed on the hard urban street,
The sound of screaming vehicles,
The laughing of citizens in the alcohol joint,
The newspaper swept across my blank face.
I left this urban metropolis…
A small tumour-like organism,
Fed upon my reverse
Assault rifle, sitting comfortably in my hand
Shot after shot missed
I looked forward…
Numerous beings of the same variety,
Another race battling additionally
I watched on as I filled the mortals with cold lead,
Each fell to the floor, screaming
The personalisation of each scream,
Made me anticipate the next
Hell- bent I continued to destroy
The enclosed purple hallways, spun
I forgot about the cretin on my shoulder
I fell to the soft ground, the last of our kind
Plasma flung transversely across the scope, in celebration
This world I left, in ruins
I emerged once more,
My instincts told me
I needed to survive
Yet, I saw nothing, my eyes were becoming wary
I twisted round, quickly,
Paranoia alarms in my cranium, were loud
I spun round on the attack, nonentity
Just a huge room, portals, blood on the damaged, solid ground…
Blood?
A large man stood facing me,
His manifestation was cold
And his stare was freezing
I couldn’t move away, his eyes were transfixed.
Blood poured from my wounded mouth
My leg, felt somewhat loose
I slipped into a mild daydream
Awoken by a kick to my kidneys
His hand penetrated my side
My skeleton prevailed in his elongated arms
The leftovers fell onto the hard concrete,
Once more, I leave this world of destruction, this murderous, obscene location.
I had been living these lives for well over 3 hours now, yet I was still bemused of my purpose.
I looked at the time,
I thought it was 10:10, time for respite
I rechecked the deceitful timepiece
9:13?
Morning was upon me,
I laid down the controller,
From a night of gaming supremacy
These worlds I visit for amusement, yet, escaping, is where I fail...
Cheers
Of A metropolis, I never knew
I awoke,
Anonymous of whom I am
My orifice moved
The residents did not respond
Whispers approached my ears
Like a phantom
I turned, sharply
Three men, I saw
Hosting firearms as large as my ego
They knew me,
I clicked.
My hand reached for my pocket
Almost automatically
I knew they were to depart this life
Loaded up the projectile
Bang, the first stalls to the floor
Bang, the second rolls onto the pavement,
Clutching his stomach
I started to load another round…
I landed on the hard urban street,
The sound of screaming vehicles,
The laughing of citizens in the alcohol joint,
The newspaper swept across my blank face.
I left this urban metropolis…
A small tumour-like organism,
Fed upon my reverse
Assault rifle, sitting comfortably in my hand
Shot after shot missed
I looked forward…
Numerous beings of the same variety,
Another race battling additionally
I watched on as I filled the mortals with cold lead,
Each fell to the floor, screaming
The personalisation of each scream,
Made me anticipate the next
Hell- bent I continued to destroy
The enclosed purple hallways, spun
I forgot about the cretin on my shoulder
I fell to the soft ground, the last of our kind
Plasma flung transversely across the scope, in celebration
This world I left, in ruins
I emerged once more,
My instincts told me
I needed to survive
Yet, I saw nothing, my eyes were becoming wary
I twisted round, quickly,
Paranoia alarms in my cranium, were loud
I spun round on the attack, nonentity
Just a huge room, portals, blood on the damaged, solid ground…
Blood?
A large man stood facing me,
His manifestation was cold
And his stare was freezing
I couldn’t move away, his eyes were transfixed.
Blood poured from my wounded mouth
My leg, felt somewhat loose
I slipped into a mild daydream
Awoken by a kick to my kidneys
His hand penetrated my side
My skeleton prevailed in his elongated arms
The leftovers fell onto the hard concrete,
Once more, I leave this world of destruction, this murderous, obscene location.
I had been living these lives for well over 3 hours now, yet I was still bemused of my purpose.
I looked at the time,
I thought it was 10:10, time for respite
I rechecked the deceitful timepiece
9:13?
Morning was upon me,
I laid down the controller,
From a night of gaming supremacy
These worlds I visit for amusement, yet, escaping, is where I fail...
Cheers
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