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"You got it then?" Ant's rasping voice demanded.
"Yeah, Rasta has joint the Gold Side aswell." Replied Goatboy. "Dringo has been... Subdued."
"Good, veerrrrrryyyyyy good." Smiled Ant.
At that moment FantasyMiser burst in, panting.
"He... he survived!" panted FM. "E...Edg...Edgy survived!"
"WHAAAAAAAAT?" Shouted Ant who then erupted into a fit of coughing.
Suddenly a large axe flew into FM's back, and Edgy followed shortly, wrenching out his axe from FM's back. Somehow FM turned and slaped Edgy to the ground. As FM fell backwards RBS appeared at the door holding a rather shaken Tony by the scruff of the neck.
"Ban him Tony. You know you have the power." RBS shook Tony some more, to add a very dramatic effect.Edgy shrank back into the corner, eyes wide and wild, hugging his axe.
Ant smiled rather unpleasently showing all his shining, golden teeth.
"Well done RBS. You may yet grow to be strong." Ant gazed prowdly at RBS. " Now tony do as we say or.." he signals to Goatboy to pick up FM's bloody gun, "... Use your imagination."
Tony hesitated slightly, looked over at goatboy raising FM's
gun to point straight at his forhead.
"Sorry Edgy..." On touching Edgy, Edgy dissapeared uttering a final scream.
"Goatboy?" Ant inquired.
"Sure." Goatboy squezzed the triger. Tony fell. Ant laughed.
"But what are we gonna say 'bout Tony?" Asked RBS.
"Well say Edgy killed him but as he touched him Edgy was banned." replied Ant.
"Your brilliant Ant." Chimed the other present members.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ End Of Part 1 ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Where Dr. Drinko go?
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Just a thought, keep it up.
I rekon this is the best notable hunter story yet,nice one!
Wow! Thats the highest accolaide i've ever ogt on SR!
First of all Dringo has changed his name back, and second of all DON'T COPY OTHER PEOPLES MATERIAL. That is not the way to try and make yourself popular & I think that this is an obvious game a day attempt, I didn't bother reading it because it wasn't attractive to read and I read other peoples reviews, so go away >:(
A few things, I didn't know that only certain people were alloud to write Notable Hunter Stories. Secondly that was not a GAD attepmt for reasons such as I am a newbie and there are others who work far harder than me at writing good posts and are on a consistant basis. Thirdly, Is all you care about is how attractive it is then what is the point of posting stuff? Fourthly, why bother posting in this if you haven't bothered to read the post? I try to read all the topics first post and latest post so that I know a) what to write about and b) what other people are talking about.
Dringo said the next story will be posted at Christmas Eve, so make sure you don't spoil the storyline by doing them yourself though!
Good effort though, pity about all those spelling mistakes. :)