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"Laylat Wars: Last Reveiw"

Is that a review or an instruction manual??

Are you trying to get me to flip my lid and mental-out like last time?

Dognuts, nothing against your review mate.

But Lylat Wars?!?!?!?!?!?

GOATBOY SMASH LYLAT WARS WIV FACE AGAIN AND AGAIN

But you're certainly improving. Thamkyou meka and will you please get it into bonus's thick skull that it's not from a instruction manual.

Doughnut Monster wrote:
> Meka_Dragon wrote:
> So we all agree.

Lylat Wars rules. yup sure
> does.

did you like the reveiw?

If you don't mind a bit of constructive criticism, here goes:

It wasn't a bad review, but it concentrated too much on the game itself, items in the game. I'd rather read about what you favourite parts of the game were, why you liked it so much. When writing about the controls there's no need to say which each button does, but discuss whether it's easy to play the game, or it can be awkward because of the controls.

I'd rather read a more personal review, so expand on it with more feelings, or it feels a little cold.

But you're certainly improving.

Bonus wrote:
> Doughnut Monster wrote:
did you like the reveiw?


I'm standing by my
> opinion that it's an insturction manual....... it's not now shut up even check the manual yourself it's not copieds from the manual. I did it by myself without any information or even instruction manauls. Face it your just jealous,

Doughnut Monster wrote:
did you like the reveiw?


I'm standing by my opinion that it's an insturction manual.......

er-no wrote:
> It was an ok review. 7/10.

:-D

I'm sure it's a 10/10 reveiw. I personally think it's the best i've done yet.

It was an ok review. 7/10.

:-D

I think i'll have to pull out good old lylat for a game later :)

Meka_Dragon wrote:
> So we all agree.

Lylat Wars rules. yup sure does.

did you like the reveiw?

Doughnut Monster wrote:
> It's a reveiw, all my own words.

I bet you thought I didn't have it in me to
> write a decent reveiw.

Bless you.