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"POINTLESS."

What do you think of this poem?

How can we go on living in this world of hurt?
From psychopaths to brutal rapists
To the women who cheat and flirt

All such a cruel place
Forgiveness is non-existent
And people are judged from their face
The world is evil and very persistent

You can’t change a person or the way they are
You can’t change the world and make it a better place
You can’t make man favour foot over car
You can’t make the rest of us a better race

So how can we continue the reign of humanity?
How can we secure the future of our own blood?
How do we stop the insanity?
How do we save each other from landing in the mud?

Is there a hope for any of us, or are we destined to fail?
Lives a life with a pointless task?
Where criminals escape jail
And people are to scared to ask

Ask Why?
The question with a thousand answers
Which makes me cry
To discover the truth which I don’t want to hear
So sleep quiet my little dear.

But it wasn't done by me....guess.....

Shocktrooper/????????????

(someone on this site)

That was a good poem.

To the Dogfather:

your poems are good but do they all have to rhyme, i hope you know not all poems rhyme, they don't need to, they just need a steady rhythmn.