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"POINTLESS."

What do you think of this poem?

How can we go on living in this world of hurt?
From psychopaths to brutal rapists
To the women who cheat and flirt

All such a cruel place
Forgiveness is non-existent
And people are judged from their face
The world is evil and very persistent

You can’t change a person or the way they are
You can’t change the world and make it a better place
You can’t make man favour foot over car
You can’t make the rest of us a better race

So how can we continue the reign of humanity?
How can we secure the future of our own blood?
How do we stop the insanity?
How do we save each other from landing in the mud?

Is there a hope for any of us, or are we destined to fail?
Lives a life with a pointless task?
Where criminals escape jail
And people are to scared to ask

Ask Why?
The question with a thousand answers
Which makes me cry
To discover the truth which I don’t want to hear
So sleep quiet my little dear.

But it wasn't done by me....guess.....

Shocktrooper/????????????

(someone on this site)

What do you think of this poem?

How can we go on living in this world of hurt?
From psychopaths to brutal rapists
To the women who cheat and flirt

All such a cruel place
Forgiveness is non-existent
And people are judged from their face
The world is evil and very persistent

You can’t change a person or the way they are
You can’t change the world and make it a better place
You can’t make man favour foot over car
You can’t make the rest of us a better race

So how can we continue the reign of humanity?
How can we secure the future of our own blood?
How do we stop the insanity?
How do we save each other from landing in the mud?

Is there a hope for any of us, or are we destined to fail?
Lives a life with a pointless task?
Where criminals escape jail
And people are to scared to ask

Ask Why?
The question with a thousand answers
Which makes me cry
To discover the truth which I don’t want to hear
So sleep quiet my little dear.

But it wasn't done by me....guess.....

Shocktrooper/????????????

(someone on this site)

Wow that was exceptionally good, in fact the person who wrote that must have been some sort of certified genius and have a degree in poetry. That was very impressive and I congratulate you and your superb skills. As a matter of fact I couldn’t have done any better myself and as the new up coming professional poet of Special Reserve I am ashamed I didn’t think of someone quite as good. It was an inspiration to me, God bless you Shock.

Somebody wrote that but not you Shockie, I could tell that it weren't you, it's too good to be your work!

:D

Well, at least I was being honest, wasn't I Dogfather? :-)

Well it was a good poem. It actually sounds a bit like a song. So I sang it (badly) in time to a song that I was listening to.

Shocktrooper wrote:
Well, at least I was being honest, wasn't I Dogfather? :-)

Who me? I don't know what your on about? This place is just too crazy, some people, well anyways I'll just carry on with my normal life going about writing useless poems which are pointless while the rest of you write imaginative, creative and superbly wrote stories.

*Runs off into his room to cuddle his teddy bears*

The Dogfather wrote:
> Shocktrooper wrote:
Well, at least I was being honest, wasn't I
> Dogfather? :-)

Who me? I don't know what your on about? This
> place is just too crazy, some people, well anyways I'll just carry
> on with my NORMAL life going about writing useless poems which are
> pointless while the rest of you write imaginative, creative and
> superbly wrote stories.

*Runs off into his room to cuddle his
> teddy bears*

Repeat, NORMAL.

WOW that was a very good attempt to get your word count up, good attemp and because of this Notorious Biggles should be hung drawn and quartered infront of the whole of SR. Thanks for reading

Why does no-one take any notice of me? An I an invisible man, with invisible writing and a complete loner? And also Notorious Biggles what do you have to say about my last comment?

The Dogfather wrote:
> Why does no-one take any notice of me? An I an invisible man, with
> invisible writing and a complete loner?


Because we don't want to upset you by telling you what we think...