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What do you think of this poem?
How can we go on living in this world of hurt?
From psychopaths to brutal rapists
To the women who cheat and flirt
All such a cruel place
Forgiveness is non-existent
And people are judged from their face
The world is evil and very persistent
You can’t change a person or the way they are
You can’t change the world and make it a better place
You can’t make man favour foot over car
You can’t make the rest of us a better race
So how can we continue the reign of humanity?
How can we secure the future of our own blood?
How do we stop the insanity?
How do we save each other from landing in the mud?
Is there a hope for any of us, or are we destined to fail?
Lives a life with a pointless task?
Where criminals escape jail
And people are to scared to ask
Ask Why?
The question with a thousand answers
Which makes me cry
To discover the truth which I don’t want to hear
So sleep quiet my little dear.
But it wasn't done by me....guess.....
Shocktrooper/????????????
(someone on this site)
How can we go on living in this world of hurt?
From psychopaths to brutal rapists
To the women who cheat and flirt
All such a cruel place
Forgiveness is non-existent
And people are judged from their face
The world is evil and very persistent
You can’t change a person or the way they are
You can’t change the world and make it a better place
You can’t make man favour foot over car
You can’t make the rest of us a better race
So how can we continue the reign of humanity?
How can we secure the future of our own blood?
How do we stop the insanity?
How do we save each other from landing in the mud?
Is there a hope for any of us, or are we destined to fail?
Lives a life with a pointless task?
Where criminals escape jail
And people are to scared to ask
Ask Why?
The question with a thousand answers
Which makes me cry
To discover the truth which I don’t want to hear
So sleep quiet my little dear.
But it wasn't done by me....guess.....
Shocktrooper/????????????
(someone on this site)
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Skaterdude182 wrote:
> Dog Father why are you so depsperate for people to read your
> poems?
No offence intended just wondering
None taken, I just like people to read something I spent a long time writing, nothing else. I want to know if there any good, that's all.
> Dog Father why are you so depsperate for people to read your
> poems?
No offence intended just wondering
None taken, I just like people to read something I spent a long time writing, nothing else. I want to know if there any good, that's all.
can't u just write somthing short like me.
BLAH!
you see- that wasn't hard, try doing somthing under 10,087,864,746 words
BLAH
BLAH!
you see- that wasn't hard, try doing somthing under 10,087,864,746 words
BLAH
Rickyfire wrote:
> The Dogfather wrote:
> Rickyfire wrote:
> The Dogfather
> wrote:
> Rickyfire
> wrote:
> The Dogfather
>
> wrote:
> Why does no-one
>
> take any notice of me?
>
> An
> I an invisible man,
> with
>
> invisible
> writing and a
> complete
> loner?
>
Because
> we
> don't want to upset
> you by telling you
>
> what
> we think...
Heh
> heh heh, that
> was a
> bit
> unfair now wasn't it. All if got ever since
>
> being
> here
> is stick, now I get even more.
Only
> joking!!! If you
>
> stopped asking people what they think,
> then any response you
> get
> will probably be
> positive.
Ok, I will, ermmmmmmmmmm.
> what did you think of
> this post? Oh darn I did it again. Ooops.
> But being honest,
> if I don't mention that then no one says whether
> it ways any
> good but rather talks about well SPAM. All of m talent
> is
> going to waste.
*Runs off into the sun set never to be seen
>
> again*
Here, doggy doggy. Good boy. Actually, your poems are very
> good!
WOW Isn't this a good SPAM thread? I think we should stop it but thanks for the compliment, read my The Meaning of Life one then.
> The Dogfather wrote:
> Rickyfire wrote:
> The Dogfather
> wrote:
> Rickyfire
> wrote:
> The Dogfather
>
> wrote:
> Why does no-one
>
> take any notice of me?
>
> An
> I an invisible man,
> with
>
> invisible
> writing and a
> complete
> loner?
>
Because
> we
> don't want to upset
> you by telling you
>
> what
> we think...
Heh
> heh heh, that
> was a
> bit
> unfair now wasn't it. All if got ever since
>
> being
> here
> is stick, now I get even more.
Only
> joking!!! If you
>
> stopped asking people what they think,
> then any response you
> get
> will probably be
> positive.
Ok, I will, ermmmmmmmmmm.
> what did you think of
> this post? Oh darn I did it again. Ooops.
> But being honest,
> if I don't mention that then no one says whether
> it ways any
> good but rather talks about well SPAM. All of m talent
> is
> going to waste.
*Runs off into the sun set never to be seen
>
> again*
Here, doggy doggy. Good boy. Actually, your poems are very
> good!
WOW Isn't this a good SPAM thread? I think we should stop it but thanks for the compliment, read my The Meaning of Life one then.
The Dogfather wrote:
> Rickyfire wrote:
> The Dogfather wrote:
> Rickyfire
> wrote:
> The Dogfather
> wrote:
> Why does no-one
>
> take any notice of me?
> An
> I an invisible man,
> with
>
> invisible writing and a
> complete
> loner?
>
Because we
> don't want to upset
> you by telling you
> what
> we think...
Heh
> heh heh, that
> was a bit
> unfair now wasn't it. All if got ever since
> being
> here
> is stick, now I get even more.
Only joking!!! If you
>
> stopped asking people what they think, then any response you
> get
> will probably be positive.
Ok, I will, ermmmmmmmmmm.
> what did you think of this post? Oh darn I did it again. Ooops.
> But being honest, if I don't mention that then no one says whether
> it ways any good but rather talks about well SPAM. All of m talent
> is going to waste.
*Runs off into the sun set never to be seen
> again*
Here, doggy doggy. Good boy. Actually, your poems are very good!
> Rickyfire wrote:
> The Dogfather wrote:
> Rickyfire
> wrote:
> The Dogfather
> wrote:
> Why does no-one
>
> take any notice of me?
> An
> I an invisible man,
> with
>
> invisible writing and a
> complete
> loner?
>
Because we
> don't want to upset
> you by telling you
> what
> we think...
Heh
> heh heh, that
> was a bit
> unfair now wasn't it. All if got ever since
> being
> here
> is stick, now I get even more.
Only joking!!! If you
>
> stopped asking people what they think, then any response you
> get
> will probably be positive.
Ok, I will, ermmmmmmmmmm.
> what did you think of this post? Oh darn I did it again. Ooops.
> But being honest, if I don't mention that then no one says whether
> it ways any good but rather talks about well SPAM. All of m talent
> is going to waste.
*Runs off into the sun set never to be seen
> again*
Here, doggy doggy. Good boy. Actually, your poems are very good!
Rickyfire wrote:
> The Dogfather wrote:
> Rickyfire wrote:
> The Dogfather
> wrote:
> Why does no-one
> take any notice of me?
> An
> I an invisible man, with
>
> invisible writing and a
> complete
> loner?
Because we
> don't want to upset
> you by telling you what
> we think...
Heh
> heh heh, that
> was a bit unfair now wasn't it. All if got ever since
> being
> here is stick, now I get even more.
Only joking!!! If you
> stopped asking people what they think, then any response you get
> will probably be positive.
Ok, I will, ermmmmmmmmmm. what did you think of this post? Oh darn I did it again. Ooops. But being honest, if I don't mention that then no one says whether it ways any good but rather talks about well SPAM. All of m talent is going to waste.
*Runs off into the sun set never to be seen again*
> The Dogfather wrote:
> Rickyfire wrote:
> The Dogfather
> wrote:
> Why does no-one
> take any notice of me?
> An
> I an invisible man, with
>
> invisible writing and a
> complete
> loner?
Because we
> don't want to upset
> you by telling you what
> we think...
Heh
> heh heh, that
> was a bit unfair now wasn't it. All if got ever since
> being
> here is stick, now I get even more.
Only joking!!! If you
> stopped asking people what they think, then any response you get
> will probably be positive.
Ok, I will, ermmmmmmmmmm. what did you think of this post? Oh darn I did it again. Ooops. But being honest, if I don't mention that then no one says whether it ways any good but rather talks about well SPAM. All of m talent is going to waste.
*Runs off into the sun set never to be seen again*
The Dogfather wrote:
> Rickyfire wrote:
> The Dogfather wrote:
> Why does no-one
> take any notice of me?
> An I an invisible man, with
>
> invisible writing and a complete
> loner?
Because we
> don't want to upset you by telling you what
> we think...
Heh
> heh heh, that was a bit unfair now wasn't it. All if got ever since
> being here is stick, now I get even more.
Only joking!!! If you stopped asking people what they think, then any response you get will probably be positive.
> Rickyfire wrote:
> The Dogfather wrote:
> Why does no-one
> take any notice of me?
> An I an invisible man, with
>
> invisible writing and a complete
> loner?
Because we
> don't want to upset you by telling you what
> we think...
Heh
> heh heh, that was a bit unfair now wasn't it. All if got ever since
> being here is stick, now I get even more.
Only joking!!! If you stopped asking people what they think, then any response you get will probably be positive.
Skaterdude182 wrote:
>
Heh
> heh heh, that was a bit unfair now
> wasn't it. All if got ever since
> being here is stick, now I
> get even more.
*throws dogfather a stick, "fetch
> boy"*
Grabs the stick and sticks it into Skaterdudes ear resulting in him bleeding to death and never to return to FOG, then the people of FOG all lived happily ever after
>
Heh
> heh heh, that was a bit unfair now
> wasn't it. All if got ever since
> being here is stick, now I
> get even more.
*throws dogfather a stick, "fetch
> boy"*
Grabs the stick and sticks it into Skaterdudes ear resulting in him bleeding to death and never to return to FOG, then the people of FOG all lived happily ever after
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