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"Can everyone read this please?"

Here's the web adress of my web page (nothing to do with the Extra GAD):

http://www.geo cities.com/y_honour/ (SPACE!)

Its the first one I've done so I'd appriciate any comments, good or bad.

But please don't just say "It's crap" Tell me why and what I can do to improve it.

Thanks.

Don't imagine it because then you get disappointed when..... this turns up! But it could be good with colour!

The Game wrote:
Sorry. But the Frame margin on the left is way
> too thin...

Ok

and centering the words is a bad thing...

Some of them aren't, but I the ones that are don't look amazing. However, I really don't like aligned to the left. I guess it's personal opinion.

you ould do
> with little subtitles and then a paragraph of explaination
> below...

For the links the frame?

You're jokes are worse than mine and RBS's put together
> and well... as for the 'Other Ship'...

Yeah, the content needs a bit of work

Sorry.... you've got the
> right idea... but you need to imagine it before you make it...
> otherwise you're screwed...

I did imagine it. I didn't want loads of garish multicoloured backgrounds because it's hard to get a test colour that you can see over all of it. Plus it normally looks crap if you do that.

Well it loads quickly. Probably down to the lack of any colour or images. Still, for a first try it's very neat and easy to navigate. More back buttons might be an advantage.

At least you've made the effort to finish one. Christ, mine's been in development for over a year now. Well done on completing it.

It's crap.





Sorry. But the Frame margin on the left is way too thin... and centering the words is a bad thing... you ould do with little subtitles and then a paragraph of explaination below...

You're jokes are worse than mine and RBS's put together and well... as for the 'Other Ship'...

Sorry.... you've got the right idea... but you need to imagine it before you make it... otherwise you're screwed...

Well it starts off alright, since you are going to improve it i think it has potential.

It's crap.

Here's the web adress of my web page (nothing to do with the Extra GAD):

http://www.geo cities.com/y_honour/ (SPACE!)

Its the first one I've done so I'd appriciate any comments, good or bad.

But please don't just say "It's crap" Tell me why and what I can do to improve it.

Thanks.