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Here we are live at SRW Raw, and we have a promising match on the cards tonight. Test (longy) will be making the third defense of his Intercontinental title, and he will defend it against Deam Malenko. Test has looked exceptionaly strong during recent matches - he dominated former WWF champion Kurt Angle, and managed to beat Perry Saturn as well. He is emerging as a fan favorite.
Dean Malenko (seifer) is the longest ever reigning Lightheavyweight champion, and he will be fighting hard to win this one. He also has the advantage of Eddie Guerrero (Ice Blaster) in his corner.
Here we go...
Dean and Test lock up, but Dean withdraws, knowing the big man will overpower him in terms of strength. Malenko hurtles forward, and hits a low lariet on Tests knee. Maybe taking out those tree-trunk legs is the way to beat thins guy. Malenko, now behind Test, rolls him up. 1...2...VERY late kick out from Test. He wasn't expecting this fast a match. Malenko hits a dropkick on Tests knee, and while the big man is bending down, hits a DDT.
Pin..1...2. kick out by seifer. Test lumbers towards Malenko, somewhat groggy, and misses a clothesline. Malenko scissor sweeps him down, and locks in an Indian Death Lock! Test reaches the ropes however, and gets back up. Malenko goes to whip Test against the ropes, but his efforts are reversed, and Test hits a MASSIVE powerslam. 1....2..kick out. Malenko has a lot of fight in him.
Test literally throws Malenko into the buckle, and goes for a Superplex! Malenko sees it coming, and jumps backwards off the turnbuckle to the floor, taking Tests arm with him! Test yells in pain, and falls to the floor, clutching his upper arm. The crowd boo, and Malenko smiles evily. He climbs back into the ring, and locks on a fairly simple armbar. Test taps almost as soon as the hold is put on, and Malenko (seifer) is declared the winner, and NEW intercontinental champion! However, he won't let go of the armbar, and Eddy comes in to offer extra leverage! Test is crieing out in pain.
A half dozen referees come out into the ring to try and make them break the hold, but they wont. WAIT! Here comes Perry Saturn with his mop! He's into the ring, and Eddy sees him. Eddy runs towards Saturn, but Saturn simply smacks him with moppy! He then clears a path through the referees, and whacks moppy across Malenkos back! Malenko contorts in pain, and finally releases the hold. Saturn squares up for another mop shot, but Guerrero is up, and he Brainbusters Saturn, leaving him lieing. The referees have gotten Test (who is still holding his arm) out of the ring, and a squad of EMTs come running out to attend to him.
In the ring, Malenko is back up, and he gets the Texas Cloverleaf on Saturn! He holds it on for about a minute, before exiting with Malenko. What evil dastards these two are.
Later on, it is announced that Malenko serverly injured Tests arm with that Superplex reversal. When told this by Michial Cole (tony), Malenko simply says 'good'. Eddie grabs the mike, and starts to speak, when Saturn comes out of nowhere and knocks him down! Saturn beats on both Malenko and Eddie, before helpfully stateing 'Sticky tape is not pink becasue gibbons hack Microsoft', and then walks off.
What a rivalry these three have!
Next match in this storyline - Perry Saturn (bouncerboy) VS Billy Gunn (Ant).
Is my match as Billy Gunn a no.1 contender match??
Criticism?? Well, there's nothing wrong with your in-ring action, but just try and not have so many interferences. I remember reading the last of that TLC match you wrote. :D
I like the storylines :D
About this storyline, my writing, length of matches (this one was a bit short, i know), anything really.
I want to try and make my matches really high quality.
Here we are live at SRW Raw, and we have a promising match on the cards tonight. Test (longy) will be making the third defense of his Intercontinental title, and he will defend it against Deam Malenko. Test has looked exceptionaly strong during recent matches - he dominated former WWF champion Kurt Angle, and managed to beat Perry Saturn as well. He is emerging as a fan favorite.
Dean Malenko (seifer) is the longest ever reigning Lightheavyweight champion, and he will be fighting hard to win this one. He also has the advantage of Eddie Guerrero (Ice Blaster) in his corner.
Here we go...
Dean and Test lock up, but Dean withdraws, knowing the big man will overpower him in terms of strength. Malenko hurtles forward, and hits a low lariet on Tests knee. Maybe taking out those tree-trunk legs is the way to beat thins guy. Malenko, now behind Test, rolls him up. 1...2...VERY late kick out from Test. He wasn't expecting this fast a match. Malenko hits a dropkick on Tests knee, and while the big man is bending down, hits a DDT.
Pin..1...2. kick out by seifer. Test lumbers towards Malenko, somewhat groggy, and misses a clothesline. Malenko scissor sweeps him down, and locks in an Indian Death Lock! Test reaches the ropes however, and gets back up. Malenko goes to whip Test against the ropes, but his efforts are reversed, and Test hits a MASSIVE powerslam. 1....2..kick out. Malenko has a lot of fight in him.
Test literally throws Malenko into the buckle, and goes for a Superplex! Malenko sees it coming, and jumps backwards off the turnbuckle to the floor, taking Tests arm with him! Test yells in pain, and falls to the floor, clutching his upper arm. The crowd boo, and Malenko smiles evily. He climbs back into the ring, and locks on a fairly simple armbar. Test taps almost as soon as the hold is put on, and Malenko (seifer) is declared the winner, and NEW intercontinental champion! However, he won't let go of the armbar, and Eddy comes in to offer extra leverage! Test is crieing out in pain.
A half dozen referees come out into the ring to try and make them break the hold, but they wont. WAIT! Here comes Perry Saturn with his mop! He's into the ring, and Eddy sees him. Eddy runs towards Saturn, but Saturn simply smacks him with moppy! He then clears a path through the referees, and whacks moppy across Malenkos back! Malenko contorts in pain, and finally releases the hold. Saturn squares up for another mop shot, but Guerrero is up, and he Brainbusters Saturn, leaving him lieing. The referees have gotten Test (who is still holding his arm) out of the ring, and a squad of EMTs come running out to attend to him.
In the ring, Malenko is back up, and he gets the Texas Cloverleaf on Saturn! He holds it on for about a minute, before exiting with Malenko. What evil dastards these two are.
Later on, it is announced that Malenko serverly injured Tests arm with that Superplex reversal. When told this by Michial Cole (tony), Malenko simply says 'good'. Eddie grabs the mike, and starts to speak, when Saturn comes out of nowhere and knocks him down! Saturn beats on both Malenko and Eddie, before helpfully stateing 'Sticky tape is not pink becasue gibbons hack Microsoft', and then walks off.
What a rivalry these three have!
Next match in this storyline - Perry Saturn (bouncerboy) VS Billy Gunn (Ant).