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Sun 21/01/07 at 19:45
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And the winner is:
pb, with "Arms dealer"

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I get the fat lady.:(

Anywho, after not that much thought I have decided to go with my greatest enemy at the moment:

School

Same as the previous, I don't want someone mentioning school, I want the main topic to be school.

And don't come up with something that I won't understand, I'm 12, give me a story that would appeal to a 10-15 year old. (By this I don't mean "Barney goes to school" either).

Hell to it, unlimited, make those series' people!
The reason? Theres a big window, from today to the 15th, so fire away.

No word limit.
But I don't want something that will take me too long to read; this will bore me and I won't give you as good a score.

Closing date is 18th of Feburary
But, if Marink posts before that then I'll judge it as soon as possible.

Now begone!
Wed 07/02/07 at 08:07
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Comfortable Chair? Book and open fire? I would have no doubt done the same...
Tue 06/02/07 at 16:19
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I wrote 9 O'clock, you cheated. Cheater.

*Sulks*
Tue 06/02/07 at 16:05
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Revolver Ocelot wrote:
> What do you mean naptime? It was 5 'clock, I was on an extremely
> comfortable blanky, in front of a practically everlasting
> Tweenie, with a story book in being read to me that I was
> enjoying alot.
> It was heaven.

Sounds like naptime...
Mon 05/02/07 at 20:51
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What do you mean naptime? It was 9 'clock, I was on an extremely comfortable armchair, in front of a practically everlasting fire, with a quiz book in my hands that I was actually doing very well in.
It was heaven.
Sun 04/02/07 at 22:47
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Hehehe, naptime? You lightweight :P
Sun 04/02/07 at 22:34
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Mav wrote:
> "Ha ha, please - Mr Ocelot's my father's name"
>
> Weird in that way?
Yes.

I was in a very good hotel, and everyone calls you sir.

I fell asleep in the lounge and an employee there tapped me on the shoulder and told me I was asleep a very long time.
So refreshing, that place was.
Sun 04/02/07 at 18:42
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Strange... That's what my teacher tells me.... But I dont like to read much.
Sun 04/02/07 at 18:33
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You're still young, though.

If you want to get better just read more books.
Sun 04/02/07 at 18:16
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I've decided to skip yet again... Oh, and I may give up on writing stories, as I'm really bad at it :s

However I will still post the odd poem, just to annoy you :P
Sun 04/02/07 at 18:09
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"Ha ha, please - Mr Ocelot's my father's name"

Weird in that way?

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